'As protect their villiged'. That makes no sense. Villiged isn't a word, and 'as' cannot be used there. 0:46, it's 'defeat', not 'deafet'. 1:03, you could say 'And stop the most evil emperor', since 'evilist' and 'emeper' are not words (Sauron isn't an emperor by the way).
Cliched story. Nobody cares about good fighting evil at such a basic level.
@Sauron012 You should read the fanfic rather than judge it by it's trailer.
The fanfic is very good and has lots of plot twists and epic battles.
So yo should read the stories and maybe write a review
I'm also thinking of writing a thrid part somtime about what Harry is doing after the battle for the village but at the monet I will be working on another chapter for my Docter Who fanfic, maybe a sims or star wars fanfics and some hallween specals for october.
@JackRussel1337 No, no, it's nothing NEAR awesome. Hey, you're right, I don't understand it because it's horrible. I've read the fanfic. Here's a quote. "Then they ran into an amy patroll "army leave the villaged this our village!111" shouted Harry" In that sentence alone, I see 4 spelling mistakes, a failure of punctuation, and what seems to be a lack of editing. My question is, do you look over the draft before you post it? Another/ Here. "FIGHT THEM" Warcried Harry. Wait, what?
Awful. Horrible.
GedKelly1999 2 months ago 3
you sir are a fucking retard. please go neck yourself.......now
shrubby1989 5 months ago
OMG YOU SUCK HAIRY OTTER BALLS
yoreckable1 6 months ago
how old are you? not that the trailers bad... just wondering
WoWrofllolz 9 months ago
go to hell.
DarkDemon677 1 year ago
wow...is this serious?
petetheheat2003 1 year ago
Constructive criticism:
Harry the Elf? Are you actually serious?
'As protect their villiged'. That makes no sense. Villiged isn't a word, and 'as' cannot be used there. 0:46, it's 'defeat', not 'deafet'. 1:03, you could say 'And stop the most evil emperor', since 'evilist' and 'emeper' are not words (Sauron isn't an emperor by the way).
Cliched story. Nobody cares about good fighting evil at such a basic level.
Sauron012 1 year ago 2
@Sauron012 You should read the fanfic rather than judge it by it's trailer.
The fanfic is very good and has lots of plot twists and epic battles.
So yo should read the stories and maybe write a review
I'm also thinking of writing a thrid part somtime about what Harry is doing after the battle for the village but at the monet I will be working on another chapter for my Docter Who fanfic, maybe a sims or star wars fanfics and some hallween specals for october.
JackRussel1337 1 year ago
@JackRussel1337 The fanfic still SUCKED.
-Lee
ToaKai3456 4 months ago
@ToaKai3456
ZOMGS My fanfic is AWSOME!!!!111
It has epic battles, cool characters, dramtic polt twists and other cool stuff.
It Rules, maybe yo just dont understad it.
JackRussel1337 3 months ago
@JackRussel1337 No, no, it's nothing NEAR awesome. Hey, you're right, I don't understand it because it's horrible. I've read the fanfic. Here's a quote. "Then they ran into an amy patroll "army leave the villaged this our village!111" shouted Harry" In that sentence alone, I see 4 spelling mistakes, a failure of punctuation, and what seems to be a lack of editing. My question is, do you look over the draft before you post it? Another/ Here. "FIGHT THEM" Warcried Harry. Wait, what?
ToaKai3456 3 months ago
Seems to be pretty big battle scenes for Harry and his friend protecting a village.
What’s with the Chinese guy and the weirdo dressed in a costume?
‘And Avenge His Girlfriend Mandy’s Death’. You’re insulting Tolkien’s world.
‘This Is The Epic Battle’. Repeated pictures. ‘The Epic Battle’. ‘The Battle For The Villge’. Villge isn’t a word.
To end, this is the most retarded thing I’ve ever seen. Don’t continue.
Sauron012 1 year ago 6
*5%.•*´¨) %awesome%.•*´¨) %5*
aleynaa123 2 years ago