Check your spelling. typos tend to be common. If you don't have spellcheck set on youtube, type in word and copy. But if you do this, make sure to go back in and add the quotation marks, because those are deleted.
Capitalize the word I, it makes the story look better. Along with writing out the full word. I think you only wrote an abbreviation once, but don't fall into the habit. (minus POV)
You are doing a great job. It is quiet easy to follow, even though I didn't read the first season.
JonasHouse09 2 years ago
Jonas Concerts are great, right? I love them.
Some tips, writer to writer.
Check your spelling. typos tend to be common. If you don't have spellcheck set on youtube, type in word and copy. But if you do this, make sure to go back in and add the quotation marks, because those are deleted.
Capitalize the word I, it makes the story look better. Along with writing out the full word. I think you only wrote an abbreviation once, but don't fall into the habit. (minus POV)
Great story. I love it.
JonasHouse09 2 years ago