1. Bella only becomes strong After she became a vampire :b and im talking mentally strong. She was only able to sort've stand up for herself once she was "beautiful and perfect"
2. The entire book was about the baby, not about edward and bella
3. The ending. I feel like Stephenie played it too safe. I understand she wants everyone to have a happy ending, but id be more realistic if she actually showed how not everything in life is going to end up like you want.
The ending of this story (building up the war and NOTHING happening) KILLED the entire story for me. -___- But since I'm commenting on this, I'm going to have to say TEAM JACOB!!
great review! love your videos! i cant wait for the film to come out! i'm going to be so sad when the last one is all out and the twilights are all forgotten! :( :( :( xx
Uhm just so you know him biting and turning her into a vampire was out of love because why would he protect her as much as he does if he didn't love her... nice tr but you are just looking for something you don't like about the book..
@jumpaslot Yes, this is true but I don't think of it as a violent way, but everyone has different opinions. So I agree but disagree,if that makes sense :P
Meyer broke her own rules; Renesme shouldn't even exist and yet she does...she stated that her vamps couldn't get pregnant. Edward's sperm died long ago, they cannot survive in VERY cold temp! plus he's 108 years old. "Necrophilia anyone?" <---- scratch that last, but serioulsy, it doesn't make sense, no matter how hard you try to make it sensable..you just...can't. (unless Eddykins has SUPER-sperm-which Meyer never told us he had so...yeah. ) lol.
i was 11 when i first read im 12 now i read that book 6x in only1 week ea h x anyway i luv luiv this book but i wish some one warned me bout the sex lol
I think it was very compelling and I really didnt know what to think when she first became pregnant but I liked the feeling of being stunned so all in all I was pleased. I definetely think she could continue the series if she absolutely ever wanted to. I dont feel like my relationship with them is complete at all.
I loved Breaking Dawn myself. But I completely agree the other three books were very suspenseful in the physical aspect of love and letting them finally be together comfortably and when we finally got there the story shifted way too quickly before I could enjoy it. I find myself reading it over and over just to enjoy those small moments with Bella and Edward.
@xavior5670 , Did you fall asleep on your keyboard? Oh, and what in the world is a "bby"? "iysz" Just sounds like a noise a baby would make. Stop trying to be cool, because honestly it looks really dumb.
Breaking Dawn changed my whole perspective on the twilight series; it changed something that for me, were some really good books. Ever since Renesmee was born, I felt like the story went completely down-hill. Not only is she a very unlikeable character but she's basically the whole storyline and it's so boring.
gggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!! y cant they just let bella and that stupid renesme die! Then end was like a cliffhanger.....IT SUCKED!....... hahahah sucked.....bella could have died and then he could get convinced to go back to tanya! juice it up!..... i want there to be another book and i want it to be about edward and bellas love fading and they end up divorcing.... that woulb be way better than this pile of jacob blacks crap
i completely agree with un fuzzy bear, breaking dawn was my least favorite, bella was acting so weird, edward like did not love his child, and i dont blame him, renessme was maybe the most annoying thing of the series, and jacob imprints on that? ew, i think i liked him better when he said obnoxious pick up lines to bella. agree, eclipse was the best.
I personally thought that BD was shit. Bella is obnoxious and quite frankly, I WANTED her to die. Renessme is totally unlovable, and Edward was out of character throughout the whole book. The ending was too peachy, and there were 400 pages of build up to a fight that DIDN'T HAPPEN. Eclipse was the best, and the story should have stopped there. The only part of this that I can read is when Jacob takes over, even though I'm team Edward.
Off topic, but I'm looking forward to more CWC books. :)
female vamps=infertile male vamps= fertile yeah bs, just one of many ridiculous plot holes....ps there is not plotline until halfway throught the book
I personally thought BD was absolute shit. It took out every single thing I liked from the first 3 books (Edward/Bella's relationship/love, Edward vs. Jacob, Charlie, etc.) and replaced them with one stupid, hideous, ugly, disgusting storyline called: Renesmee. Ok, honestly, the BABY didn't bother me, but where the story went from there... I enjoyed the book up until the 3rd part. And, the biggest thing that pissed me off: WHERE'S THE FUCKING FIGHT SCENE?!?
breaking dawn was ok but renesmee was not a good name to be honest. i thought it would be a mix of bella's name and edward's name. oh by the way jacob sucks i hate him i forget if it was eclipse or new moon i think it was eclipse but jacob broke bella's arm that pissed me off and that is why i hate jacob
@AnnaSmee yeah about that, if female vampires can't ovulate then how come males can ejac, if they're in a state from living to not living, and by association how can they climax at all, also is it just me or is the word 'protect' over used in this series?
@AnnaSmee , Obviously not. In the confrontation with the Volturi there was another half breed. Besides, Bella said herself: Rosalie's body couldn't change. It is frozen at a point of time. You need to change to bear children. But my body could. It did.
i loved ur reveiw beause u said the parts that u liked and didnt like and u said the parts u didnt like nicely like u didnt bash stephanie or bash the book like alot of people have done so yay ur awsome lol and i loved breaking dawn um the only thing i didnt like was there wasnt enough bella edward time and i wished there was more details about the sex but got since theres kids reading i guess that was best and i thought the honey moon was funny to expesially when they broke the bed thing lol
I disagree with the wedding night part I did want them to be able to be together but didnt at the same time When they had sex it kinda took alot of my intrest out of the book Its hard to put in word but I liked being able to see them keep their love going without being physical after they had sex I felt their relationship wasnt to interesting anymore also it seems like thats what Bella started to base their relationship around cuz she would keep beggin edward all the time for them to do it agai
i'm still reading the book, only got it 2days ago, i'm on page 432 and i've gone and stupidly watched the reviews>:(, is that the whole plot? Bella gets married goes on honeymoon gets pregnant has baby, becomes vampire etc.. is there no other conflicting moments? that's pretty silly...=[ would've been so much more cooler if Bella accidently killed i dunno, Charlie or something...
the book was alright, except for the fact that you couldnt really see the love for the baby from edward... i wanted more edward and renesmee, like fatherly love;;
the first time i read this book i was a little confused it was so different from how i imagined it would be but now that i reread it and really thought about it it's perfect i am a mother and i cannot imagine living forever not knowing how that feels and renesmee is only going to be an immediate part of edward and bellas life for 6 yrs they can do whatever they want after she's grown u needed jacobs point of view to understand his pain so u can understand his imprinting and not freak out
I loved this book. It might be because I am girly and enjoyed the relationship being played out more than the action. My favorites, in order: 4, 1, 3, 2. At first I wasn't sure if I'd like the perspective of Jacob in 4, but I did. It gave it a humorous twist. Also, Bella was gone for 2 days...and there was a lot happening while she was changing...I thought it was great. And I actually like Renesme. :P
crap serious. especially the second one. way to mope for 3/4 of the damn book. and anyone who says its better or even in the same league as harry potter deserves to have grievous bodily harm done to them
I totally agree with you. Part Two with Jacob had to be the worst part for me in the whole book, because through the last three books all I wanted was more Bella and Edward, and then here's a story line full of Jacob. It was about 200 pages? Maybe more, but when I got to the part with Bella's point of view again, I was so happy! I mean, I get to see how it was like with her half vamipre baby. At the end of the book I was also disappointed. It just went all to fast. But I really agree w/ you.
Breaking Dawn was so-so...It was ok because finally Edward and Bella get married and she became a vampire...but honestly everything else was so annoying. Basically everyone gets what they want, and when this huge suspenseful climax comes it all just breaks apart...I was really disappointed in BD.
Umm.. I really can't explane how I feel about the book. I hate Renesmee. I hate Bella. I hate Edward. I love Jacob. And the werewolves. Soooo.. I want to say that I really HATE the book, but... No I really hate the book.
Respect for you people who love it, but I... Don't.. I'm really trying to love it, but for me it's not "Twilight" at all.
i thought the book was amazing i dont think it could be any better but he was going to change her .... eventually but he had no choice at that moment when i read that through jacobs veiw i was imagining what edward would be thinking the only way to save her was changing her amazing book i loved it xx
ok first the whole wedding like no one not even charlie was like exploding at this 18 year old getting married!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and then the honeymoon oh the honymoon......
well why did edwad break furninture????pillows??? and how did she get bursies???
and then the freakin baby comes and edward is like not edward anymore he is this prev who wants to die and bella is like i want 2 hav this baby and the baby is 1/2 vamp so it is KILLING HER!!!! AAAAHHH
I just finished breaking dawn a couple of days ago and thought it was the worst of the 4 books. I agree with the disappointment from the transformation scene and how edward changed bella with a syringe... but I HATED the happily ever after ending and how EVERYONE (well maybe except the volturi) ended up happy... just lame in my opinion. Plus bella and edward's relationship in this book was really shallow, and just about sex. There wasn't any one of edward's famous and eloquent speeches
I loved the wedding scence too! it was amazing it was just wondeful but I didn't expect bella to turn into a vampire in breaking dawn I was expecting it in eclipse more after I read the books but loved stephenies work!
I AGREE 100% w/ the whole changing into a vamp thing! I wanted it to be romantic! And I also felt like Nessie took away from the Romance cause it was all focused around her-and not just the 2 of them. I felt the romance was taken out of it and replaced with more of the supernatural horror aspect.
I've always loved Jacob, so I was thrilled when he imprinted. I didnt expect it to be with Bella's daughter, though, but as soon as it happened, I loved it. It was a perfect conclusion for Jacob and Bella because they finally get to love each other platonically, without guilt on either side.
I am a Jacob fan myself (and I really didn't like Edward) so when Bella and Edward got married, I was feeling sorry for jacob and was worried about how he would take that. When he tried to imprint and couldn't, that was a let down. I felt the same feeling toward renesme, I didn't really like her. When jacob imprinted though, that changed and I like Edward too. Plus, I think that it is cool to have two things that naturally hate, to love.
Honestly Breaking Dawn sucked for me. It just didn't have the same spark as the other three books, plus Bella was like WAY shallow. It was like get over yourself Bella.
But I did like your review and I loved your make-up. Very author like. (I'm a writer as well)
To me, my older sister reminds me of Alice. I got her to read the books and she loves them. I loved the books. Seriously you read my mind, except I had no problems with it. :D
i 100% agree with your review. there were some weird parts in the books-but it was an amazing book! i think overall it was a great way to end the series and all the weird negetive comments on the books are from the fact it is the last book and everyone wanted it to end differently. i believe SM did i great job and you summed up the book quite nicely! great job and it's nice to hear a positive review!
i totally agree with everything u said. at first i sooo shocked to see that bella was pregnant, i couldnt even imagine bella,who is just a teen to have a baby and to feel that bella and edward would be focused on just the baby but as i read a few more chapters i began to enjoy nessie's character.Another thing i didnt like was that it seemed as though jacob spent more time with nessie than edward, he only like held her once or twice but overall i loved it.
breaking dawn was NOTHING like i expected it 2 be. i thought jacob inprints on leah! i enjoy how stephanie meyer twist the book around. its not my favorite from the twilight saga but it wasnt bad either. the way she change 2 jacobs prespective i so agree it should have stick 2 bella but its also good because its not all focused on how perfect edward is 2 bella n visversa. i give it 2 thumbs up overall
I realy enjoyd the book. I thought it was very well writen and a very happy ending. I cant say I LOVED the book as much as I LOVED twilight, but I dont hate it. I realy had 2 get used 2 the book, because I mean it didnt sound lyk Edward and Bella to me, lyk it didnt really fit in with the series,and I agree with alot of things you said.Over all it was a great book, and I dont understand those bad reviews, i mean whats wrong with Bella geting everythin she wanted, a child, Edward and immortality?
ok im a guy im not gay my friends give me crap all the time for reading the series but overall it was a pretty good book i thought some1 should have died i was waiting for it i thought jacobs point of view was the best part cause he was so hilarious i wanted to see him and leah together that was what i was waiting for and it didnt happen kinda mad about that i thought twilight was the best and there should have been a battle at the end of breaking dawn
i dont understand all the negative comments. I didn't get bored and i was just glued to the book the whole time! i also loved jacobs part because that was the first time we got to see bella and edward from someone elses point of view. and ur all saying that ur dissapointed about there not being a battle and that no one died but if someone had died then u would have been moaning on about how dare stephenie have killed that person. i loved the book the way it was.
ANDD i ADORED jacob in this book. for the first 3 books i was probably the most anti-jacob girl out there. but her was just sooo adorable and funny and REAL in this book. and im a sucker for a good blonde joke :)
i completely agree with almost everything you said. i did wish that edward would have changed bella out of love, and im sure bella and edward would have prefered that too. but that couldn't have happened because bella was in such terrible condition with renesmee, soo plans had to adapt to that.
i absolutly adored breaking dawn, but i really do with that there had been a battle. i was so ready for the volturi to get their asses kicked and bella save the day! but then again i am glad nobody died.
I like the book... i actually i knew that she was going to get pregnat from the beginig it was so clear to me i like jacob perspective but it was like being in a babys mind really unmature i love nessie, i really just want bella to be a vampire didnt actualy care how I WAS STRONGLY DISAPOINED BECAUSE IT WASNT A BATTLE AND NO ONE IMPORTANT DIE i expect eward to be more active to be most of his point of view i like the book
It's like, yeah that might be Bellas daughter, and it might be a little awkward that you fall in love with the girl you used to love's daughter, but it gave a liginiment reason for Jacob and Bella to still be friends. How else could that have possibly worked out.
Yeah, I was really disapointed by the very anti-climatic ending. Atleast if there was a fight, and part of the vultori was destroyed then it would have justified Bella having a baby, because Renesmee gave the vultori a reason to come, and then gathering a whole bunch of superpowerful vampires gave them a reason to die. I really did enjoy the book, but it felt like there really wasnt a point to anything that happened in the story. WEll besides Jacob imprnting
i got bored and had to totally just skip jacob's pov at the end because all he did was go see bella, run some laps in the woods, go see bella, run some laps in the woods...i got tired of it after a while
I do "love" the twilight series until book 3. BD is way too cheesy, but not on a romantic level. Almost 300 pages of the book were totally unnecessary. For example; the Volturi conflict was totally wasted. I didn't want a bloodbath but some action would've been so much better. Also the whole pregnancy stuff was a waste of paper; the author kind of wanted to persist this was possible, but it was unreal to me. This book just didn't thrilled me at all.
yup. agree with everything you said. a lot of parts i kind of just skimmed over because nothing was happening in them. my biggest problem is probably with the ending though. that couldn't have been more lame.
i agree with you on everything.. i do like your outfit it is very alice!! i think that when bella was dying from the baby it was very referencing the way all of the other cullens were "changed". so i kinda liked it that way. but i do wish it was more out of love rather than desperation.
I liked this book alot. But there were a few things that were, I guess, dissapointing. First of all I thought Jacob's p.o.v went on for too long, I know 200 or so pages isn's alot of of a 750 page novel, but I got bored while reading it. I also thought there wasn't much connection with Edward and Resemee during this book, the only real times you got to see their relationship was while they were saying goodbye in the clearing. Resemee was much more with Rose and the other vampires.
Ok, one last rant for anybody who's listening. Did anyone think that the main "twists" in the BD plot sounded a lot like fanfiction??--worse off, sometimes the fanfics did a better job...ok, I'm done-you don't have to respond to this I just needed to get it off my chest.
I'm glad to discuss it. :) Yeah, I kept reading and thinking SM didn't write it or didn't come up with the plot at some points. It just didn't feel in line with Twilight, New Moon and Eclipse in spots.
Did anyone else have a huge problem with Rosalie in this novel?? I USED to like Rose, until she would do anything to deliver the baby--even if it killed Bella. That was the last straw for me.
I had a problem with Rose, too. I felt that she was only after Bella's baby because she couldn't have one. I think she would have ripped Nessie from Bella's womb if she knew Edward wouldn't tear her to pieces for it.
ugggh. yeah but i kept thinking in my head that it just seemed like rose only cared about the baby but later on in the book she'd end up being really sweet to bella and appreciating the fact that bella went through with having a baby. but no, instead stephenie made every character as one dimensional and unrealistic as possible.
I agreed with you originally. I feel as if the pregnancy was a big mistake.I wanted just Edward and Bella--Jake too//I got used to baby just like you(it took me 5 days after I finished).The main problem I had was that Bella was never a "mother" character--yeah Edward foreshadowed it, but Bella never really cared if she couldn't have children.I felt as if she got pregnant simply based on the fact that SM is a mother. That really bothered me. Bella is Bella, not Stephenie Meyer.
i agree that the pregnant part was a little out there and kind of violent, but i liked the part because it was so unexpected and new. Overall i love the book (It's just my opinion)
I really hope it doesn't end after MS. There is just so much to do, so many interesting directions SM can take the story. It just too bad that it won't be from Bella POV anymore... I just hope nessie gets her own book.
Honestly, I'm not sure I want a Nessie book. I had a tough time liking her after she put Bella through so much. Maybe Jacob perhaps? Or Alice even. :)
Alice would be an awesome story, she one of my favorite character in the series.
Nessie would be interesting. How she changed the vampire world. How her powers will change and grow with her. What will happen with her relationship with Jake and the other Cullen.
Really great review of DB, I thought almost the exact same thing while I was reading. It was one of the best "I didn't see that coming" book in a long it.
What do you think will happen next in the Twilight world in addition to Midnight Sun?
Really great review of DB, I thought almost the exact same thing while I was reading. It was one of the best "I didn't see that coming" book in a long it.
What do you think will happen next in the Twilight world in addition to Midnight Sun?
Really great review of DB, I thought almost the exact same thing while I was reading. It was one of the best "I didn't see that coming" book in a long it.
What do you think will happen next in the Twilight world in addition to Midnight Sun?
I was a little upset over the end and its lack of ultimate show-down, too. I, too, also didn't like how Bella was changed; I felt it was like a "cheat code." =] Very nice video!
Breaking Dawn is out today in the UK and thanks for the review of the book. I wolud like to ask wolud you recomend this to me or to others spending there mony geting this Book?
what a fucking nerd hahah
bbysn00kz 3 months ago
and what kinda damn name is Renesmee i know Bellas mom name is Rene and Edwards moms name is Esme but WTF
missmoneyhoney1 4 months ago
i hate Breaking Dawn first off Bella get pregnant in 4 secs like serisously
second WTF jacobs a Pedofile LOL
third NOTIHING HAPPENS no fight they just talk it out BORING
missmoneyhoney1 4 months ago 2
I hate how in Breaking Dawn:
1. Bella only becomes strong After she became a vampire :b and im talking mentally strong. She was only able to sort've stand up for herself once she was "beautiful and perfect"
2. The entire book was about the baby, not about edward and bella
3. The ending. I feel like Stephenie played it too safe. I understand she wants everyone to have a happy ending, but id be more realistic if she actually showed how not everything in life is going to end up like you want.
SuperSilverJay 4 months ago
the only thing i hated about breaking dawn was renesmae.
tcelenacuatemocatl 4 months ago
If Twilight wasn't terrible before Breaking Dawn ruined whatever respect for it i had left
kaybbayyy2362 4 months ago
I thought breaking dawn was a very slow book. After she had the baby it just got so slow and the whole imprinting thing with Jacob was weird
71579musiclover 5 months ago
Steph can't write a good plot. There was no plot at all in the book. Don't even get me started on the whole anti-feminist message of the books.
LizSoWhat 5 months ago
Jacob point of view part of the book was cool. The rest ? Screw it.
RebelAdmiral 6 months ago 2
it would have been better if jacob and bella had a baby!! more drama!
ohSHIZitsGABY 6 months ago
breaking dawn book sucked...i like the twilight book but hated breaking dawn..because it was a full crap...
belle26ramirez 6 months ago
Anyone seen any video reviews or read any online reviews about the e-book
April Curran Meets the Vampire of Crimson Cove High School?
TwiVampFan 7 months ago
The ending of this story (building up the war and NOTHING happening) KILLED the entire story for me. -___- But since I'm commenting on this, I'm going to have to say TEAM JACOB!!
jessicarabbit814 8 months ago
great review! love your videos! i cant wait for the film to come out! i'm going to be so sad when the last one is all out and the twilights are all forgotten! :( :( :( xx
CosmeticsByMelissa 11 months ago
Uhm just so you know him biting and turning her into a vampire was out of love because why would he protect her as much as he does if he didn't love her... nice tr but you are just looking for something you don't like about the book..
brooke2045 1 year ago
@brooke2045 yeah...I know that alot of people were waiting for him to change her in a less violent way....
jumpaslot 9 months ago
@jumpaslot Yes, this is true but I don't think of it as a violent way, but everyone has different opinions. So I agree but disagree,if that makes sense :P
brooke2045 9 months ago
@brooke2045 , What the fudge? She said she liked it. Your wrong. She means that more, not because he had to or she would die.
BeautyTricksSearch 8 months ago
Meyer broke her own rules; Renesme shouldn't even exist and yet she does...she stated that her vamps couldn't get pregnant. Edward's sperm died long ago, they cannot survive in VERY cold temp! plus he's 108 years old. "Necrophilia anyone?" <---- scratch that last, but serioulsy, it doesn't make sense, no matter how hard you try to make it sensable..you just...can't. (unless Eddykins has SUPER-sperm-which Meyer never told us he had so...yeah. ) lol.
Theo2kitty 1 year ago
i was 11 when i first read im 12 now i read that book 6x in only1 week ea h x anyway i luv luiv this book but i wish some one warned me bout the sex lol
4enchantedgirls 1 year ago
I think it was very compelling and I really didnt know what to think when she first became pregnant but I liked the feeling of being stunned so all in all I was pleased. I definetely think she could continue the series if she absolutely ever wanted to. I dont feel like my relationship with them is complete at all.
chilereyn15 1 year ago
I loved Breaking Dawn myself. But I completely agree the other three books were very suspenseful in the physical aspect of love and letting them finally be together comfortably and when we finally got there the story shifted way too quickly before I could enjoy it. I find myself reading it over and over just to enjoy those small moments with Bella and Edward.
chilereyn15 1 year ago
This review surprised me Jessicaburkhart87... I expected this review to mirror Nuttymadam's in tone. But it was actually quite sane.
DemonicRemption 1 year ago
edwardsz dead'!
Yuhh gotta be alive ta produce sperm'!
witch Yuhh need ta have a bby'!
iHate edward'!hesz GAY'!
jacob iysz pretty koo'!
&&Yuhhr a lil' hot'!;D
xavior5670 1 year ago
@xavior5670 , Did you fall asleep on your keyboard? Oh, and what in the world is a "bby"? "iysz" Just sounds like a noise a baby would make. Stop trying to be cool, because honestly it looks really dumb.
BeautyTricksSearch 8 months ago
i love that book
wedkinz1817 1 year ago
i dont even want to read it because theres no action
kingrad01 1 year ago
i agree on edward changing her too
vonnyyay 1 year ago
Pattison was great at Eclipse i just watched leaked version at TwilightEclipseNow[dot]info
hotsilver79 1 year ago
i fucking love bracking dawn the best :):) x x
edward123robyn 2 years ago
Breaking Dawn changed my whole perspective on the twilight series; it changed something that for me, were some really good books. Ever since Renesmee was born, I felt like the story went completely down-hill. Not only is she a very unlikeable character but she's basically the whole storyline and it's so boring.
romeoiona 2 years ago 2
@romeoiona Yeah someone with a working pair of eyes and a free willed mind...
DemonicRemption 1 year ago
gggggggrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!! y cant they just let bella and that stupid renesme die! Then end was like a cliffhanger.....IT SUCKED!....... hahahah sucked.....bella could have died and then he could get convinced to go back to tanya! juice it up!..... i want there to be another book and i want it to be about edward and bellas love fading and they end up divorcing.... that woulb be way better than this pile of jacob blacks crap
pomeranian1212 2 years ago
i completely agree with un fuzzy bear, breaking dawn was my least favorite, bella was acting so weird, edward like did not love his child, and i dont blame him, renessme was maybe the most annoying thing of the series, and jacob imprints on that? ew, i think i liked him better when he said obnoxious pick up lines to bella. agree, eclipse was the best.
BnicoleP23 2 years ago 5
I really hope that the movie isn't pg 13...I want some rated R!!! lol.
Yeahamd16 2 years ago
I personally thought that BD was shit. Bella is obnoxious and quite frankly, I WANTED her to die. Renessme is totally unlovable, and Edward was out of character throughout the whole book. The ending was too peachy, and there were 400 pages of build up to a fight that DIDN'T HAPPEN. Eclipse was the best, and the story should have stopped there. The only part of this that I can read is when Jacob takes over, even though I'm team Edward.
Off topic, but I'm looking forward to more CWC books. :)
fuzzybearz28 2 years ago 3
do you have a myspace yet
HaloBoy98 2 years ago
you have pretty skin
tothisyouwerecalled 2 years ago
it wouldn't be awesome edward is a fucking stalker, also twilight is a sad excuse for a novel.
airtwilight 2 years ago
female vamps=infertile male vamps= fertile yeah bs, just one of many ridiculous plot holes....ps there is not plotline until halfway throught the book
Orion126126 2 years ago 4
Alice did all the work!!!!! Bella didnt pick anything!!! Did you ever pay attention? picking the dress my ass.
BaraKumoi 2 years ago
great review! i totaly agree with you
LittleRedCherry3101 2 years ago
that wuz really good u shuld join my club!!
TwilightClub474 2 years ago
i love the bookk i just dont like book 2 i wanna skip it so bad but i dont help me jessica!
SixAwsomeKids 3 years ago
I personally thought BD was absolute shit. It took out every single thing I liked from the first 3 books (Edward/Bella's relationship/love, Edward vs. Jacob, Charlie, etc.) and replaced them with one stupid, hideous, ugly, disgusting storyline called: Renesmee. Ok, honestly, the BABY didn't bother me, but where the story went from there... I enjoyed the book up until the 3rd part. And, the biggest thing that pissed me off: WHERE'S THE FUCKING FIGHT SCENE?!?
fWo 3 years ago 26
I don't see how you can dislike BD but like the other books...
AnnaSmee 2 years ago
Umm... Did you read my post? I pretty much laid out why I hated this book... :/
fWo 2 years ago
yep i liked the book but i wanted to read the fight scene aswell@fWo
vonnyyay 1 year ago
@fWo "Breaking Dawn" for me was like watching my childhood stuff animal get defiled. It was THAT horrifying. ANY author has a responsibility to:
1: Keep leaps of logic to a minimum, which definitely excludes some weird, mutant child of the corn.
2: Keep the plots and characters consistent throughout the series within the framework which the author has set up.
3: Follow basic rules of writing and editing for a novel designed for an intelligent audience.
CDL2003 5 months ago
yea jacob annoys me quite alot... mean dthey relle shouldnt of dedicated a whole book to him...
Orcafanx0x 3 years ago
Why? Is it because Jacob is actually a good character, that people can relate to? Jw.
fWo 3 years ago
breaking dawn was ok but renesmee was not a good name to be honest. i thought it would be a mix of bella's name and edward's name. oh by the way jacob sucks i hate him i forget if it was eclipse or new moon i think it was eclipse but jacob broke bella's arm that pissed me off and that is why i hate jacob
littleman11497 3 years ago 2
Renesmee shouldn't even exist. It's impossible.
AnnaSmee 2 years ago 23
@AnnaSmee yeah about that, if female vampires can't ovulate then how come males can ejac, if they're in a state from living to not living, and by association how can they climax at all, also is it just me or is the word 'protect' over used in this series?
ELMATO9 1 year ago
@AnnaSmee nothing is impossible cuz its all fantasy and there is a explanation as to why she was born
MsKittyTeya 1 year ago
@AnnaSmee aww why you say that lol i luv ressmaa but im not gona lie i was expecting her to die
4enchantedgirls 1 year ago
@AnnaSmee , Obviously not. In the confrontation with the Volturi there was another half breed. Besides, Bella said herself: Rosalie's body couldn't change. It is frozen at a point of time. You need to change to bear children. But my body could. It did.
BeautyTricksSearch 8 months ago
I agree with your opinion on the baby, I felt like suddenly, bam Bella was pregnant, just wasn't very believable or likeable.
gunterisarabbit 3 years ago 2
thanks for that i havnt read the books
and dont think i will for a while
as i cant convince my mum to buy them for me lol
her baby tries to kill her did youe say ?
"i felt it hard to like renesmee as she tryed to kill bella" Saink along them lines youe said
hollybabesz95 3 years ago
the worst part was the big fight that didn't happen, cuz it was disapointing, i wish they killed the Volturi once and for all.
ilistentometal 3 years ago
i loved ur reveiw beause u said the parts that u liked and didnt like and u said the parts u didnt like nicely like u didnt bash stephanie or bash the book like alot of people have done so yay ur awsome lol and i loved breaking dawn um the only thing i didnt like was there wasnt enough bella edward time and i wished there was more details about the sex but got since theres kids reading i guess that was best and i thought the honey moon was funny to expesially when they broke the bed thing lol
babygirlskittles92 3 years ago
I disagree with the wedding night part I did want them to be able to be together but didnt at the same time When they had sex it kinda took alot of my intrest out of the book Its hard to put in word but I liked being able to see them keep their love going without being physical after they had sex I felt their relationship wasnt to interesting anymore also it seems like thats what Bella started to base their relationship around cuz she would keep beggin edward all the time for them to do it agai
zipityduda 3 years ago
i'm still reading the book, only got it 2days ago, i'm on page 432 and i've gone and stupidly watched the reviews>:(, is that the whole plot? Bella gets married goes on honeymoon gets pregnant has baby, becomes vampire etc.. is there no other conflicting moments? that's pretty silly...=[ would've been so much more cooler if Bella accidently killed i dunno, Charlie or something...
francescaMariaxxx 3 years ago
the book was alright, except for the fact that you couldnt really see the love for the baby from edward... i wanted more edward and renesmee, like fatherly love;;
and it was annoying when jacob imprinted..
strawberry2122 3 years ago 2
the first time i read this book i was a little confused it was so different from how i imagined it would be but now that i reread it and really thought about it it's perfect i am a mother and i cannot imagine living forever not knowing how that feels and renesmee is only going to be an immediate part of edward and bellas life for 6 yrs they can do whatever they want after she's grown u needed jacobs point of view to understand his pain so u can understand his imprinting and not freak out
cortneyluvsjon 3 years ago
I loved this book. It might be because I am girly and enjoyed the relationship being played out more than the action. My favorites, in order: 4, 1, 3, 2. At first I wasn't sure if I'd like the perspective of Jacob in 4, but I did. It gave it a humorous twist. Also, Bella was gone for 2 days...and there was a lot happening while she was changing...I thought it was great. And I actually like Renesme. :P
ShimmerSF 3 years ago
i did think that breaking dawn was the worse one their was no scarifices and i did not like reneseme at all she was an unessesary part of the series
KayleeNicoleD 3 years ago
crap serious. especially the second one. way to mope for 3/4 of the damn book. and anyone who says its better or even in the same league as harry potter deserves to have grievous bodily harm done to them
gr8wall2 3 years ago 2
I LOVVE BREAKING DAWN :D:D
AndreaConnolly 3 years ago 3
can you translate in italian pleaaaaaaaaase??? xD
2Bangela2B 3 years ago
I totally agree with you. Part Two with Jacob had to be the worst part for me in the whole book, because through the last three books all I wanted was more Bella and Edward, and then here's a story line full of Jacob. It was about 200 pages? Maybe more, but when I got to the part with Bella's point of view again, I was so happy! I mean, I get to see how it was like with her half vamipre baby. At the end of the book I was also disappointed. It just went all to fast. But I really agree w/ you.
omgicantstandthis 3 years ago
the only thing i love in this book is the part with jacob!...
Zo0udaki 2 years ago
Breaking Dawn was so-so...It was ok because finally Edward and Bella get married and she became a vampire...but honestly everything else was so annoying. Basically everyone gets what they want, and when this huge suspenseful climax comes it all just breaks apart...I was really disappointed in BD.
cloudgirl105 3 years ago
how long is the book
mjkman1995 3 years ago
its like 700 somthing pages
shanatiggeremo 3 years ago
why people who didn't like this horrible book got negative points?... The truth is this: this book sucks, has no logic
I prefer twilight, new moon, even eclipse
LoverGrr 3 years ago
I actually agree with you...it was a pretty bad book to end the series.
cloudgirl105 3 years ago
LoveGrr- I didn't care for this book either, for many reasons. Maybe we can just pretend their story ended with the wedding :).
GraceAlone71 3 years ago
Umm.. I really can't explane how I feel about the book. I hate Renesmee. I hate Bella. I hate Edward. I love Jacob. And the werewolves. Soooo.. I want to say that I really HATE the book, but... No I really hate the book.
Respect for you people who love it, but I... Don't.. I'm really trying to love it, but for me it's not "Twilight" at all.
MajaCullen 3 years ago
lol I agree with you
I hate renesmeeee
I LOVE jake ;)
LoverGrr 3 years ago
Omg... you hate breaking dawn!! its amazing!! and u like jacob and hate edward WTF!!
AndreaConnolly 3 years ago
i hated it xD
JDandOBproductions 3 years ago
breaking dawn was my favourite out of all four books
it was amazing for me
i couldnt have asked for a better book
jackiehorselover 3 years ago 3
teaganthehumanoid 3 years ago
awsomw i read the book and i was surprised in the book when she got her baby and it was a good book i read all of her books so she is a good author
rougethebat3344 3 years ago
I HATE BREAKING FREAKIN DAWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ok first the whole wedding like no one not even charlie was like exploding at this 18 year old getting married!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and then the honeymoon oh the honymoon......
well why did edwad break furninture????pillows??? and how did she get bursies???
and then the freakin baby comes and edward is like not edward anymore he is this prev who wants to die and bella is like i want 2 hav this baby and the baby is 1/2 vamp so it is KILLING HER!!!! AAAAHHH
iluvEddieCulle 3 years ago
I just finished breaking dawn a couple of days ago and thought it was the worst of the 4 books. I agree with the disappointment from the transformation scene and how edward changed bella with a syringe... but I HATED the happily ever after ending and how EVERYONE (well maybe except the volturi) ended up happy... just lame in my opinion. Plus bella and edward's relationship in this book was really shallow, and just about sex. There wasn't any one of edward's famous and eloquent speeches
dogclover19 3 years ago
I agree with u 100%
BriBriForeverr 3 years ago
I loved the wedding scence too! it was amazing it was just wondeful but I didn't expect bella to turn into a vampire in breaking dawn I was expecting it in eclipse more after I read the books but loved stephenies work!
huyutfsakura 3 years ago
i agree
tgoodmovie 3 years ago
I AGREE 100% w/ the whole changing into a vamp thing! I wanted it to be romantic! And I also felt like Nessie took away from the Romance cause it was all focused around her-and not just the 2 of them. I felt the romance was taken out of it and replaced with more of the supernatural horror aspect.
GND4ever11223 3 years ago
I've always loved Jacob, so I was thrilled when he imprinted. I didnt expect it to be with Bella's daughter, though, but as soon as it happened, I loved it. It was a perfect conclusion for Jacob and Bella because they finally get to love each other platonically, without guilt on either side.
MelissaRM19 3 years ago
I am a Jacob fan myself (and I really didn't like Edward) so when Bella and Edward got married, I was feeling sorry for jacob and was worried about how he would take that. When he tried to imprint and couldn't, that was a let down. I felt the same feeling toward renesme, I didn't really like her. When jacob imprinted though, that changed and I like Edward too. Plus, I think that it is cool to have two things that naturally hate, to love.
kafen1194 3 years ago
I have that pin and those stickers too! Gotta love Borders for it.
femmefatale1990 3 years ago
It def is cool stuff! :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
a agree totally about the jacob part.
great video.
i love twilight <3
aberkrombie8139 3 years ago
I thoughtr breaking Dawn was Amazing and that you had a great reveiw
edwardluva1901 3 years ago
Honestly Breaking Dawn sucked for me. It just didn't have the same spark as the other three books, plus Bella was like WAY shallow. It was like get over yourself Bella.
But I did like your review and I loved your make-up. Very author like. (I'm a writer as well)
KoiMusouka 3 years ago
Thanks! It's great to meet another writer. :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
@KoiMusouka Awesome another writer who doesn't approve of the poorly constructed Mary-Sue that is Bella...
DemonicRemption 1 year ago
I'm still reading it on chapter 13 gotta go read it now thanks bye!!! I know I always ruin books for myself
CullenBabe666 3 years ago
To me, my older sister reminds me of Alice. I got her to read the books and she loves them. I loved the books. Seriously you read my mind, except I had no problems with it. :D
KatyLynn2011 3 years ago
i 100% agree with your review. there were some weird parts in the books-but it was an amazing book! i think overall it was a great way to end the series and all the weird negetive comments on the books are from the fact it is the last book and everyone wanted it to end differently. i believe SM did i great job and you summed up the book quite nicely! great job and it's nice to hear a positive review!
just4kicksES 3 years ago
well i agree with u with reneesmee cuz i ended up liking her but not while she was in Bella.
i also thought that there werent many bella and edward moments. i wanted there to be more romantic scenes between them.
and i was also expecting someone to die at the end but no fight did happen.
overall i liked the book but it didnt love it like the other three.
i did love the whole getting ready for the wedding and i liked the ceremony.
eliroxxmysoxx 3 years ago 2
i totally agree with everything u said. at first i sooo shocked to see that bella was pregnant, i couldnt even imagine bella,who is just a teen to have a baby and to feel that bella and edward would be focused on just the baby but as i read a few more chapters i began to enjoy nessie's character.Another thing i didnt like was that it seemed as though jacob spent more time with nessie than edward, he only like held her once or twice but overall i loved it.
CrazyColie23 3 years ago
btw where did u get that pin!! its soo cool
yesixgoexrawr 3 years ago
I got it from Books a Million the night after their BD party. :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
breaking dawn was NOTHING like i expected it 2 be. i thought jacob inprints on leah! i enjoy how stephanie meyer twist the book around. its not my favorite from the twilight saga but it wasnt bad either. the way she change 2 jacobs prespective i so agree it should have stick 2 bella but its also good because its not all focused on how perfect edward is 2 bella n visversa. i give it 2 thumbs up overall
yesixgoexrawr 3 years ago 3
I realy enjoyd the book. I thought it was very well writen and a very happy ending. I cant say I LOVED the book as much as I LOVED twilight, but I dont hate it. I realy had 2 get used 2 the book, because I mean it didnt sound lyk Edward and Bella to me, lyk it didnt really fit in with the series,and I agree with alot of things you said.Over all it was a great book, and I dont understand those bad reviews, i mean whats wrong with Bella geting everythin she wanted, a child, Edward and immortality?
starzroxursox 3 years ago 3
ok im a guy im not gay my friends give me crap all the time for reading the series but overall it was a pretty good book i thought some1 should have died i was waiting for it i thought jacobs point of view was the best part cause he was so hilarious i wanted to see him and leah together that was what i was waiting for and it didnt happen kinda mad about that i thought twilight was the best and there should have been a battle at the end of breaking dawn
quinn959 3 years ago
Hey! I'm glad to have a guy's perspective. :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
no problem liked the review glad to help
quinn959 3 years ago
loved ur review!
Azuleyes87 3 years ago
Thanks! :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
your welcome
quinn959 3 years ago
i dont understand all the negative comments. I didn't get bored and i was just glued to the book the whole time! i also loved jacobs part because that was the first time we got to see bella and edward from someone elses point of view. and ur all saying that ur dissapointed about there not being a battle and that no one died but if someone had died then u would have been moaning on about how dare stephenie have killed that person. i loved the book the way it was.
golidlocks2 3 years ago
ANDD i ADORED jacob in this book. for the first 3 books i was probably the most anti-jacob girl out there. but her was just sooo adorable and funny and REAL in this book. and im a sucker for a good blonde joke :)
lalaoxERiNxolala 3 years ago
i completely agree with almost everything you said. i did wish that edward would have changed bella out of love, and im sure bella and edward would have prefered that too. but that couldn't have happened because bella was in such terrible condition with renesmee, soo plans had to adapt to that.
i absolutly adored breaking dawn, but i really do with that there had been a battle. i was so ready for the volturi to get their asses kicked and bella save the day! but then again i am glad nobody died.
lalaoxERiNxolala 3 years ago
I like the book... i actually i knew that she was going to get pregnat from the beginig it was so clear to me i like jacob perspective but it was like being in a babys mind really unmature i love nessie, i really just want bella to be a vampire didnt actualy care how I WAS STRONGLY DISAPOINED BECAUSE IT WASNT A BATTLE AND NO ONE IMPORTANT DIE i expect eward to be more active to be most of his point of view i like the book
valeria2112 3 years ago
i totally agree with you about how you wanted edward to change bella out of love- not to save her life.. so did i. that was so disappointing.
alyshiadygert 3 years ago
It's like, yeah that might be Bellas daughter, and it might be a little awkward that you fall in love with the girl you used to love's daughter, but it gave a liginiment reason for Jacob and Bella to still be friends. How else could that have possibly worked out.
Maxim033 3 years ago
Yeah, I was really disapointed by the very anti-climatic ending. Atleast if there was a fight, and part of the vultori was destroyed then it would have justified Bella having a baby, because Renesmee gave the vultori a reason to come, and then gathering a whole bunch of superpowerful vampires gave them a reason to die. I really did enjoy the book, but it felt like there really wasnt a point to anything that happened in the story. WEll besides Jacob imprnting
Maxim033 3 years ago
i got bored and had to totally just skip jacob's pov at the end because all he did was go see bella, run some laps in the woods, go see bella, run some laps in the woods...i got tired of it after a while
kellyxmichelle 3 years ago
Rly? Jacob's pov was my favorite part. It gave some comic release to a rly cheesy storyline.
Maxim033 3 years ago
Touche. Jacob was quite hilarious.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
I do "love" the twilight series until book 3. BD is way too cheesy, but not on a romantic level. Almost 300 pages of the book were totally unnecessary. For example; the Volturi conflict was totally wasted. I didn't want a bloodbath but some action would've been so much better. Also the whole pregnancy stuff was a waste of paper; the author kind of wanted to persist this was possible, but it was unreal to me. This book just didn't thrilled me at all.
tatianadoll 3 years ago
yup. agree with everything you said. a lot of parts i kind of just skimmed over because nothing was happening in them. my biggest problem is probably with the ending though. that couldn't have been more lame.
surreal6581 3 years ago
***CONTAINS SPOILERS***
i agree with you on everything.. i do like your outfit it is very alice!! i think that when bella was dying from the baby it was very referencing the way all of the other cullens were "changed". so i kinda liked it that way. but i do wish it was more out of love rather than desperation.
brunetteweasley 3 years ago
Why thank you! :) Good point about the Cullens reference. I didn't think of that one.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
I liked this book alot. But there were a few things that were, I guess, dissapointing. First of all I thought Jacob's p.o.v went on for too long, I know 200 or so pages isn's alot of of a 750 page novel, but I got bored while reading it. I also thought there wasn't much connection with Edward and Resemee during this book, the only real times you got to see their relationship was while they were saying goodbye in the clearing. Resemee was much more with Rose and the other vampires.
lovurs 3 years ago
I noticed that, too, about the baby. I liked Jacob's POV, for the most part, though. But it took some getting used to. :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
I really wanted there to be a big fight at the end of the book. I was a little disapointed that there wasn't.
syncsta13 3 years ago
Me too. There was so much build up and I was waiting for it.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
I completely agree!
californiaKILLS 3 years ago
Ok, one last rant for anybody who's listening. Did anyone think that the main "twists" in the BD plot sounded a lot like fanfiction??--worse off, sometimes the fanfics did a better job...ok, I'm done-you don't have to respond to this I just needed to get it off my chest.
HorsesandVampires 3 years ago
I'm glad to discuss it. :) Yeah, I kept reading and thinking SM didn't write it or didn't come up with the plot at some points. It just didn't feel in line with Twilight, New Moon and Eclipse in spots.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
Did anyone else have a huge problem with Rosalie in this novel?? I USED to like Rose, until she would do anything to deliver the baby--even if it killed Bella. That was the last straw for me.
HorsesandVampires 3 years ago
Same here! She was definitely baby-crazy. :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
I had a problem with Rose, too. I felt that she was only after Bella's baby because she couldn't have one. I think she would have ripped Nessie from Bella's womb if she knew Edward wouldn't tear her to pieces for it.
californiaKILLS 3 years ago
ugggh. yeah but i kept thinking in my head that it just seemed like rose only cared about the baby but later on in the book she'd end up being really sweet to bella and appreciating the fact that bella went through with having a baby. but no, instead stephenie made every character as one dimensional and unrealistic as possible.
surreal6581 3 years ago
I agreed with you originally. I feel as if the pregnancy was a big mistake.I wanted just Edward and Bella--Jake too//I got used to baby just like you(it took me 5 days after I finished).The main problem I had was that Bella was never a "mother" character--yeah Edward foreshadowed it, but Bella never really cared if she couldn't have children.I felt as if she got pregnant simply based on the fact that SM is a mother. That really bothered me. Bella is Bella, not Stephenie Meyer.
HorsesandVampires 3 years ago
I thought the same. It felt as if SM was projecting onto Bella in that instance.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
well wasn't it change her or let her die. i think that was some sort of act of love...
carrottop12292 3 years ago
I do agree with that now. I think I needed a cooling off period after reading. ;)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
ONE and the only review i agree with on this whole youtube. Well said :)
vishakha625 3 years ago
Thanks so much!! :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
completely agree with u:] love the book:] YAY!
TurnOfTheLight 3 years ago
Now we wait for Midnight Sun! :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
What would Midnight Sun be about is it going to be Edwards Perspective meaning she will start all over again the begining
Teresa1516 3 years ago
You can read a chapter of it (rough draft, anyway) on Steph's Website. I love how it reads so far!
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
i agree that the pregnant part was a little out there and kind of violent, but i liked the part because it was so unexpected and new. Overall i love the book (It's just my opinion)
Ravenamz 3 years ago
It was definitely unexpected. I was interested in how Rose was acting and wonder what would have happened if Edward and Jacob hadn't been there.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
i agree, i didnt like the pregnant thing and the character didnt act like themself
>_>
nightsky47 3 years ago
Yeah, the pregnancy was really out there for me, too.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
Sorry about the triple post :P
I really hope it doesn't end after MS. There is just so much to do, so many interesting directions SM can take the story. It just too bad that it won't be from Bella POV anymore... I just hope nessie gets her own book.
dave1687 3 years ago
Honestly, I'm not sure I want a Nessie book. I had a tough time liking her after she put Bella through so much. Maybe Jacob perhaps? Or Alice even. :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
Alice would be an awesome story, she one of my favorite character in the series.
Nessie would be interesting. How she changed the vampire world. How her powers will change and grow with her. What will happen with her relationship with Jake and the other Cullen.
dave1687 3 years ago
I love Alice, too. Hmm...that would be a potentially great book to see Jacob and Nessie years from now. Good idea! :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
Really great review of DB, I thought almost the exact same thing while I was reading. It was one of the best "I didn't see that coming" book in a long it.
What do you think will happen next in the Twilight world in addition to Midnight Sun?
Thanks for the review.
dave1687 3 years ago
Thanks, Dave! :) I bet SM ends the series with Midnight Sun. Unless... she entertains the idea of letting us into life with Bella, Edward and Nessie.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
Really great review of DB, I thought almost the exact same thing while I was reading. It was one of the best "I didn't see that coming" book in a long it.
What do you think will happen next in the Twilight world in addition to Midnight Sun?
Thanks for the review.
dave1687 3 years ago
Really great review of DB, I thought almost the exact same thing while I was reading. It was one of the best "I didn't see that coming" book in a long it.
What do you think will happen next in the Twilight world in addition to Midnight Sun?
Thanks for the review.
dave1687 3 years ago
I like your review, i Completely agree with your opinion of the book.
simplyamanda247 3 years ago
Thanks! :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
Nice review.
But I myself absolutely /hated/ the book :(
It didn't really feel like a part of the series.
Twilight, however, I loved :)
EvilSquirrelGod 3 years ago
Twilight is one of my absolute favs. :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
I was a little upset over the end and its lack of ultimate show-down, too. I, too, also didn't like how Bella was changed; I felt it was like a "cheat code." =] Very nice video!
sportsweetie118 3 years ago
I do agree. It was supposed to be a BIG moment. Thanks for commenting! :)
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago
Breaking Dawn is out today in the UK and thanks for the review of the book. I wolud like to ask wolud you recomend this to me or to others spending there mony geting this Book?
Ravenclaw160 3 years ago
I'd say go for it if you really love the series and just want to read for yourself how it ends. There are some great moments there.
jessicaburkhart87 3 years ago