the cleaners-cinemanovel web series and shorts-YouTube HQ 4:3

[spuelberg]

censur and a bad end...

[tweek12]

cool vid. i like how the ladies are playing nintendo.

[TheSteelGeneral]

Other than than, good job, nice camera work at the end. Clever to do the killing scene off screen. Minor peeve (sorry!) but given all the number of people who worked on this, you might have made a shot which would have shown nine bodies.

Technical side, excellent.

[TheSteelGeneral]

Okay, nicely done, just two flaws:

1. If you're cleaning up dead bodies, I'd assume one wants to hurry up to AVOID DETECTION! so it makes NO sense for 2 of the crew to stand around and bitch "how much longer?". EVEN IF it's the body specialist. Why don't they help? If they CAN'T, you haven't made clear why NOT.

2. Same with the blood on his face. Makes no sense for a big time assassin to walk around with that, JUST to recover a cuff link. you haven't made clear why he should take that risk

[Tychicuss]

cool!!

I would have like to see more;

But I enjoyed the one act short!