Half-Life

[jamesraymondsmith]

how nice of me to come by. good to see you. how would i describe your voice. it's a purr.

[neglectoid]

i stumbled upon this video on accident.

(i cant even remember what i was originally looking for now)

great stuff !!

[tinySpectacle]

@neglectoid So glad you stumbled upon it and stuck around to write a comment. Thanks!

[brucewbowser]

I'm a fan ! !

[AntaresInScorpius]

i love this one faved.

[tinySpectacle]

andrew: Thank you very much.

[wolfhalen]

I think you just blew my mind :D

[tinySpectacle]

I hope in a good way! Thanks for the comment!

[andrewnorris1]

You read so well and fluently. I love the way you pull together such an array of disparate elements into one scene, much like the collision of atoms. Great work

[exesquire]

very good-"all the universes----" do don't

theyU*****

[tinySpectacle]

Thank you. So nice of you to come by.

[IGrazor]

I loved the line, "The mass of anything is made of round, cushy atoms hanging together like strangers waiting for a noon bus."

This is full of so many references to science, but instead of cold scientific fact it's warm and emotive - brilliant.

[psychospeakempire]

I like your style a lot. both your writing and delivery are just so absorbing.

5 *****

Paul

[jukejeff]

I reveled in this poem. Thanks for sharing it.

[tinySpectacle]

Jukejeff: Thanks for the kind words.

[wonderstufffan]

DAMN,WOMAN.thats some powerful stuff. u really impress me.really.

[BigPrairieDude]

...Precarious solids are worrisome...Beautifully put. The whole poem reminded me of the different layers of reality. Mind, soul and body.Thank you for sharing this poem.

[personalimagery]

I never read anything like your poetry. I would have to learn so much, before this comment... for now, I can say that I love the words, suggestions, the cloud of images here. simple, extremely complex. like the title, I think.

[BigPrairieDude]

great poem.

[Jadabh2]

Very nice. Have I subbed you yet? No! Consider it done.

[mindovermatter2009]

Very well done my friend! A yummy poem,and very well said. Your work captivates me as I stroll through,stopping at each sitting bench,to listen and learn.Thanks.Lisa,M.O.M.

[harleynanda]

This remains my favorite. You snatch this alternate reality from thick air with such a cryptic eye and deliver precisely that, most eloquently inescapable... where all settles—in the moments of the concave. Your perspective is unique yet instilled with the appealingly feminine; your recitation fine and to character. Intended or not, even the visual is in epitome, you offset right and balanced by the undefined partial picture frame. I find this piece exemplary of your spirit. An excellent work.

[IvyBedouin9]

I could almost taste it! Absolutely beautiful. Well developed, and I agree with what Dashpoet said...

[mnilandcom]

très bon!

[maninwhitedress]

many into one it's as simple as that.

[Lycan7lover]

I love the ways you're poem flow

[clayLavl]

words come easily to you. meanings and visions.

[hhhaller]

you have made something of these matters. very human alive touching knowing the big questions you discover here moving

a wonder we feel through-fine poem

[PoetLina]

Not a cheap psychic at all... at all.

[tinySpectacle]

thank you so much.

[tps607]

only one who has done it knows the crescent! *****

[dashpoet]

such a treat to discover your poetry - transporting

[adamrudden]

This is a great poem.

[jcmegabyte]

Interesting - there's something about poetry and science that just go together somehow. I'm at a loss to explain it... it just "fits". Nice recital - I enjoyed :D

[nordicsky]

I have read and reread this poem at least a dozen times and I still find it fascinating. The concepts of theoretical physics, the matter that makes up our universe and the attraction of sub atomic particles seems to be poetic in themselves. Here you have used them as a wonderful metaphor for the attraction between two people.

Thanks for posting a seriously good poem.

Regards, Peter

[tinySpectacle]

Thank you. That was such an incredibly flattering comment because it articulates what I was trying to go for so well.

Thanks for being such a in-depth reader.

Lo

[Wizjkahna]

Hmmm.  Very nice. I will have to chew and on some of those lines and come back for more.

[tinySpectacle]

Thanks for watching this. You have a great channel and vids. I just checked them out.

Lo

[twohawksfucking]

This is one of my favorite poems, bar none. Once or twice a week, I'll wander over here and listen to you read it, Lo. It's a stunning piece of work.

You have a gift, as I'm sure you're aware.

Roy

Roy

[NewWarriorMan]

YOU are intense.

[DRU131]

Yes!, the kind of poetry i like to hear!!!

[tinySpectacle]

Thanks so much..nice of you to take the time and comment.

[audionautix]

I saw you on my friend Benny Coma's channel, and I figured if HE subscribed to you, you must be generating some "substance". I figured right! Great stuff. Is this yours?

[staffinfections]

Morgan said I would relate to you, and I agree.

5+++

[tinySpectacle]

Morgan is so cool. And thanks so much! It's nice of you to take the time and view my stuff!

[flyngsnow]

i'm captivated by this one

[tinySpectacle]

Thanks.

[pstaight]

You have the poem down. I like your rhythm. I bet you practiced a lot. It seems as people do more poems they slow down. I think they loose intensity when that happens.

Still its so hard to nail every little detail such as: the salt shaker rolling its cryptic crescent vs. its-scripted crescent

Your poem reminds me of one I need to work on more. Its about quantum mechanics, existence, waves and harmony. I would love to tell you more about it if your interested in that sort of thing.

[tinySpectacle]

Thanks for your interest. Your poem sounds cool. But don't tell me about it, write it. I find if I talk about what I'm going to write the desire to actually write it leaves me. I look forward to reading it.

Lo

[tjkoz22]

Splendid! Again, it's fascinating how you tie the micro and macro universe together with our precarious daily existence, as we navigate between them.

[writteninword]

My gosh... this is amazing. I have to share this with someone. I wish I could give 6 stars instead of 5.

[tinySpectacle]

written: thanks you. You're a six starer as well!

[christopherinsc1981]

Words can not descirbe how much talent you have! Very cool 10*

[tinySpectacle]

Chris: You are so nice. Thanks for the encouragement.

[visionghost]

Wow!!! Im falling in love with you tiny that was the exact anatomy of the simplistic turned science in cordial ingredients for all that is observation meeting yonder emotion. Amazing!!

[tinySpectacle]

That means a lot coming from such a fine poet. Thank you.

[goshajazz]

BOOM amazing poem peace and five stars 5 *****

[tinySpectacle]

Thanks so much for your comment!

[PrettyPoeRoses]

she's a real pOet OMG! That was nice sis

[janeczka]

Still love it, and even more.

The line about the cheap psychic is my favourite.

[tinySpectacle]

Jenecza: Thanks. Almost took that line out. But I like it now, too.

[MorganAnsons]

that is most excellent.

your descriptive nature is what keeps you an enigma~

[tinySpectacle]

Morgan: thanks for viewing, my friend.

[lloydhywel]

Dripping with relish, relished. A saucy essence of the now sauced up and out and in and everywhere else those 'cushy atoms' get to and from and all around again. Wonderful.

[tinySpectacle]

lloyd: thanks for that pretty and descriptive comment!

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Lazy bones! You reposted it! Yippie! 5*

This poem is like me - it ages like fine wine :p

[PrettyPoeRoses]

ha ha

[tinySpectacle]

Pretty: thanks, friend.

[tinySpectacle]

It always matters that you like my poems, being that you are a poet whose poems I love.

Lo