not a big fan of the strumming pattern and the note transitions, mainly D. basically, i couldn't get into the song because everything felt disjointed, like a bunch of good parts in the wrong order. i'm one for lyrics as well, so it would be nice to see them in the description. overall, i suggest to play around with different strumming and singing patterns so the song has a personality and is not overpowered by carefree strumming. best of luck :)
Very nice. I enjoyed this a lot.
whpriol1 11 months ago
Thank you for Chris this thoughtful and provocative contribution to music. This is something and I hope it gets heard around.
30framessec 1 year ago
not a big fan of the strumming pattern and the note transitions, mainly D. basically, i couldn't get into the song because everything felt disjointed, like a bunch of good parts in the wrong order. i'm one for lyrics as well, so it would be nice to see them in the description. overall, i suggest to play around with different strumming and singing patterns so the song has a personality and is not overpowered by carefree strumming. best of luck :)
onoringo 1 year ago