I have been listening to your poems, and need to say this is by far the most heartfelt one yet obviously after 'the number poem' .. I loved how you expressed how one's feel in everyday life the question we ask to seek who we are ... I loved. I loved I loved it. You have outdone yourself once again. brilliant job, may you continued to be blessed. Shalom.
Mr. Poetri... I'm praying for ya bro... you are blessed with an audience and following through your gift of expression... keep pointing to the Only Way Truth and Life... aka Christ Jesus.
One of my faves sir. Went past a McDonald's in Houston that had "50 piece Nuggets $9.99" on their sign. I thought about you immediately! 100 piece can't be too far behind. lol
I cut it off after the Lebron diss.....
lol nah but beautiful poem brother.
Love your creativity and comedic touch to your poems
saphirejewelscoward 3 weeks ago
like always, great word
automoblu 2 months ago
I have been listening to your poems, and need to say this is by far the most heartfelt one yet obviously after 'the number poem' .. I loved how you expressed how one's feel in everyday life the question we ask to seek who we are ... I loved. I loved I loved it. You have outdone yourself once again. brilliant job, may you continued to be blessed. Shalom.
xxpwincessjamicex 5 months ago
great!! too funny but honest! love it!
theclosetpoet1 5 months ago
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I mean: You are so funny. But you have some provoking poems. Keep doing what you do.
LoveandLiveLife60 5 months ago
You are so funny. But you have so though provoking poems. Keep doing what you do.
LoveandLiveLife60 5 months ago
Mr. Poetri... I'm praying for ya bro... you are blessed with an audience and following through your gift of expression... keep pointing to the Only Way Truth and Life... aka Christ Jesus.
berdew1 7 months ago
One of my faves sir. Went past a McDonald's in Houston that had "50 piece Nuggets $9.99" on their sign. I thought about you immediately! 100 piece can't be too far behind. lol
LyricLL 7 months ago
dear jesus why am i fat, why do i think about whats for dinner when im eating lunch lol i love it man..
ronrossjr 7 months ago
I LOVE IT!!!!! You poured out your heart on this one, great job!!!
yungkirk1 7 months ago 2
@yungkirk1 Thank you for the encouragement.
Poetri 7 months ago
Hey Poetri this is fantastic!
LyricLL 8 months ago
you already know how good you are, i don't have to tell you AGAIN. lol
JaeTracie 8 months ago
That was funny AND it had lots of substance....good job :-)
tkbl09 8 months ago
Hand it to you man, that was awesome. ^^
Elastas 8 months ago
AMEN!
ButterflyKisses1973 8 months ago
Beautiful...
jreylbc1 8 months ago
Good job.. That was Funny yet a great poem. I love how you added jokes to it
phenochio 8 months ago
YOU BETTER PREACH!
alishajoh 8 months ago
I feel u brotha Lol. Keep doin wat u do and be blessed :)
BlackSistaLove2 8 months ago
One question I can answer...
The Lakers suck! ROFLMAO!
Nice Poem...you make me proud to be a fan...
shomari180 8 months ago
Classic! Love it!
BlackSoultan 8 months ago
Haha, nice poem Poetri! That was really funny and it made me think, I enjoyed it!
evilsean1 8 months ago
Awesome brother. Love all the way from Oz dude.
elsewherebeats1 8 months ago