On The Steps Of The Palace (Into The Woods) Jayne Gallagher as "Cinderella"

[DEgreeniFYgravity]

Remember, less is more. :)

One or two big arm gestures may get your audience's attention, but they become redundant after a while. You may also want to focus on convincing facial expressions rather than arm/hand/dress movements. Other than that, your vocals were excellent and your acting was great as well.

[tulipstokissyouwith]

Very impressive for a high school, though. But it could use a little more fluidity.

[tulipstokissyouwith]

Very impressive for a high school, though.

[EVideoJ77]

Very good singing and acting (and beautiful dress and the hair looks amazing) but I have to agree with the others, less jerky moves, it's a bit distracting. The set is amazing.

[graceyfave]

Very good vocals, but your arm movement and dress movements were strange. You might want to move slightly less :) x

[Shashanyaara]

I agree with the comment below. Aside from that, your vocals do need a little polishing, you sound like you might be a little sick or something, but this was fantastic nonetheless, thanks.

[LovelyBlonde2233]

Your singing is really good! But your sudden jerky arm movements make you look like a bird. They should be subtle and connect with the songs, but some don't make sense. But your singing is good, and some other arm movements are too much. But good Job with the singing. You just need to work on your acting.