Awesome. Except, I suggest you check out Freddiew2's tutorial on gun muzzle flashes and blood splatter. If you could perfect thoughs two aspects. This would have been perfect. I think he also has another tutorial on gun sound effects.
u really guys don't know how to point a gun and where to search for enemies XD like all the guys where walking slowly and pointing at the floor and looking at it over and over XD
@tutorializzati and those are some really dumb mercenaries, they didn't hear all the noise he made looking for the gun, neither did they her all the gun shots, even of a shotgun. they're justa casually walking and talking.
sweet video and great art direction i wish i could get my hands on some of that gear.
im not complaining or dissing i know the masking is hard when overlaying that many elements but on 0:38 is a masking apearing disapearing element and also on 1:18
and yeah way too much camera movement doesnt look natural.
this are pointers and constructive critics. i still love the video.
Great job! The only critique I would make is about the hand held look of the shot. At first i thought i was just a wiggle added to the camera but i noticed the pattern repeat. Looked a bit unnatural in the locked shots. take a look here where AK show to take capture the motion from an actual hand held shot and uses it on a still. videocopilot (dot) net > tutorials > animating_a_still/ This method may give you some ideas for when you do PART 2!!!
@onesheisty Good job on noticing that! Thanks, I have thought about tracking live footage for the wiggle but for the sake of time I just used an expression. I will check out that video and perhaps use that technique in the future.
Fantastic vid! The cloning effect was pulled off brilliantly! Well done. However I felt the ending was a little weak, felt like it was the end of a part 1.
very well madealmost professional!
but I think people (FBI) should not have the same pants on.
unless they have a uniform.
by the way: looking for your gun and throwing clothes and books.This belong in "Action".
Wel done. You get a point !
mst2007777777 1 month ago
you shouldnt have used video copilot's gunshot sound effects. they sound SUPER fake. a gun should sound way louder
NewLineProductionz 1 month ago
Awesome. Except, I suggest you check out Freddiew2's tutorial on gun muzzle flashes and blood splatter. If you could perfect thoughs two aspects. This would have been perfect. I think he also has another tutorial on gun sound effects.
Cheers
MeltedFilms 1 month ago
Very nicely done. Just one small remark. Real training soldiers NEVER have finger on trigger until they pull it to shoot. :-)
Sardo1962 1 month ago
@Sardo1962
you are right ! tel that to sam from VC "grenade trowing scene"
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lol the sound effects and the music are horrible
good try though, try putting a nice story next time.. be different, dont copy others...
you could have also used a wider angle lens indoors
there are some pretty obvious shadow mistakes here and there, try to work on that
the vignette in few scenes are too obvious you should dim that whenever you feel its too powerful in that specific scene.
last thing, dont push too hard on the CC, in a lot of scenes everything looked too dark.
+1 like for effort
XYManx28 1 month ago
Interesting!
drgamerali 1 month ago
Awesome!! really good cloning. would have been really cool if you had the slo-mo grenade from videocopilot :D
dstruxness 1 month ago
using the same expresion for each camera shake is not good idia. nice work
hamadatoon 1 month ago
Aim BOT Spoted !
ramayanakarim 1 month ago
did you shoot in 24fps? cause it doesn't seem like it...looks more like 60
HappiFaceProductions 1 month ago
maybe added blood effects on the floor or any surroundings, utha then that amazing :D
HTTIYAN 1 month ago
Dude Your work Was very Good And Nice Just Work a Lil Bit on Your acting.
nawab260 1 month ago
Awesome work on this! Very fun to watch. I found it over on Video Copilot and had to click over!
fracasj 1 month ago
u really guys don't know how to point a gun and where to search for enemies XD like all the guys where walking slowly and pointing at the floor and looking at it over and over XD
tutorializzati 1 month ago
@tutorializzati and those are some really dumb mercenaries, they didn't hear all the noise he made looking for the gun, neither did they her all the gun shots, even of a shotgun. they're justa casually walking and talking.
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sweet video and great art direction i wish i could get my hands on some of that gear.
im not complaining or dissing i know the masking is hard when overlaying that many elements but on 0:38 is a masking apearing disapearing element and also on 1:18
and yeah way too much camera movement doesnt look natural.
this are pointers and constructive critics. i still love the video.
zapznox 1 month ago
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zapznox 1 month ago
Great job! The only critique I would make is about the hand held look of the shot. At first i thought i was just a wiggle added to the camera but i noticed the pattern repeat. Looked a bit unnatural in the locked shots. take a look here where AK show to take capture the motion from an actual hand held shot and uses it on a still. videocopilot (dot) net > tutorials > animating_a_still/ This method may give you some ideas for when you do PART 2!!!
onesheisty 1 month ago 2
@onesheisty Good job on noticing that! Thanks, I have thought about tracking live footage for the wiggle but for the sake of time I just used an expression. I will check out that video and perhaps use that technique in the future.
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@jonathanedis Same as tracking footage. shoot a blank wall with and two tracking markers and even lighting.
GrafficHand 1 month ago
can you give me the link of gun fire music and reload please :)
TheSmartiali 1 month ago
@TheSmartiali I didn't actually make the music, I used the track from Bourne Supremacy haha. Here is link /watch?v=EDn1c_pmqKo&feature=related
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2:13
"Yeah were just gonna have a casual conversation behind the house of the guy who killed about 5 of our friends, no big."
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Nice work kid
tenshunn 1 month ago
Nice! great clone effect I would of never guessed only two people were used if you hadn't written it in the description. What camera are you using ?
wildesentertainment 1 month ago
@wildesentertainment Thanks, I used the canon t2i for all the filming
jonathanedis 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Amazing Video! There should totally be a part 2
ironjoebob7 1 month ago
Fantastic vid! The cloning effect was pulled off brilliantly! Well done. However I felt the ending was a little weak, felt like it was the end of a part 1.
TheChristophalos 1 month ago