Lord of the Dome: A Short Film - We Make Your Movie

[KevinMcGravy]

Yawn.

[deja907]

umm i don't understand why a lot of people think this short film is any good because, the script makes no sense, the following shots are terrible, and the video barely keeps the viewers watching. This movie lacks a lot detail and necessary work to make it a great short film. The only thing good about this film was the effects at least those seemed somewhat real and fit towards the movie.

[beverleykatherine]

this was really awesome!

[losing101]

Haha, FANTASTIC first short film :)

If I could nitpick at anything, the rat sequence caught me yawning, and the camera is little jittery at times when it shouldn't have been. Other than that, you guys ALL made excellent acting debuts ^_^ And kudos to the super interesting script! I must say, it's hard to convey such a narrative into a film where we can't hear the Lord of the Dome's thoughts, but you guys did pretty well. Keep up the effort!

[losing101]

Oh, and one last thing.

Brad: try to look just a smidge more relieved/happy that the girl's alive. I almost thought you were disappointed! :P

[ruelruel14]

Wow, Kai! I didn't know you were that great of an actor. Good job.

[TabbyKate]

....lol, Golum voice Kai's freaking me out a little.

Great movie, amazing acting, u guys are awesome

[HMVNHN]

I didn't understand it but it was very good acting

[Peter5000Films]

Nice job to you guys and Judah

[judahmahay]

Great job, guys! I really like William the rat and the actor (I believe it was Kai) was incredible as the Lord.

It was a strange experience seeing my story turned into a film and I'm happy with the additions you made. At the end, the transition from the hospital room to the Lord sitting on the roof was great.

I look forward to the next nominations.

Congratulations,

Judah Mahay

[OHaiChumplet]

Excellent!

Yall are great actors!

=)

A+

I can't wait to see the next one!

[AlistairM20]

Right on! Good work, you guys. You're off to a good start!

[Quaxo9]

LOL - wicked! For the record, Kai scares me too...

[Peter5000Films]

Nice job!

[whitefluffyhat]

This was really excellently made! I loved the part with the rat. :)

Good luck with the next one!

[specialkmini]

Nicely done...you boys n girls have some skills! I'll expect an invite when you end up walking down the Red Carpet at the Oscars some day.

[dylanisanerd]

Really good video guys! Production value was great.

Was there a smoke machine?

You guys might want to invest in a boom. It was kind of hard to hear some parts.

Anyways A+ work guys try to get the word out to bigger youtubers, you have a good shot,

[pjaaarsma]

That was wicked guys!

[Jessihcah]

This looks amazing guys! Love the ending! It's very intense. =)

[LuoarV20]

that was amazing

the sound effects were awsesome and and the actors are superb ( Kai scares me =P )

Good job guys

[chertzee9]

Wow guys...amazing acting, amazing scenes, amazing job!

[ColRon]

This was really amazing!

the background music was well chosen I think, the shots were great and the acting! - OMG kai you make a good rat-thing. GOOD JOB GUYS

[lahrah008]

LOL. Steven's line made me laugh so hard.

But other than that, it was awesome. Thumbs up =]

[hosreye]

Absolutely incredible! The atmosphere you created throughout really won this for me. The editing and timing really worked for the flow of the story, For the short duration in which this movie was made and the resourses available, this was outstanding.

[avvrrooom]

Awesome!!!! Outstanding!!!! It left me with chills.

[lawrehnbahsihst]

Yay!!