rele well done :) I do media nd im year 12 we gotta do our fictional short story soon! I thought this was rele well done, Im lookin at other peoples to inspirate my style and things for my short movie, rele good :)
I really liked this, I thought that it was really creative and overall a great film to watch. I loved the music and I really loved how you did the credits. I was wondering what program did you use to edit this and do the credits...Great Film
boring, predictable and not a very good conclusion...but great music and way to use it in a dramatic fashion! It was more like a confused music video more than anything. Good visuals in some accounts
hey, first of all I think this is great. awesome film. I am trying to make one for school at the moment, and I was just wondering two things, first. how to get the effect of people flashing in and out of the frame, like at the bustop in this one. and also how you filmed the scene in the bathroom where he shot himself?
This is Really gurd Loved it but i dont get end when u crash into car ? and ur like :S in going round in a circle , also loved tha falshin boy who was he supposed to be u shurd of telld us a bit more of whats happening at the monment were just running round with u not nowin anythin
hey dudes, this was good aye.. i noticed you used some of video copilots products like Evolution... for the credits.. and im guessing you either used after effects to do that? or some other program, was good aye... nice job out ov 10 ill give a 8 just minior things could be done to it,, but other then that i was prity good aye.. nice job.
Also i think that the movie was more about the editing and effects rather than the film itself. But other than that i really quite enjoyed the film for many of the reasons mentioned by others (aside from the elevator scene).
You could have done with some dialouge, the music just after the opening title didnt suit the start of the film ( you should have allowed time for the viewer to realize that the main character is schizophrenic, an introduction to the film), too bad about the camera at the start of the bus scene, pretty shoddy camera work all around actually, and the scene where the main character is going down the elevator during the middle of the climax was Very anti-climatic and not suited to the film.
lmao!!! the elevator bit was hilarious! XDD this is one of the best short films i've ever seen. loved every minute of it!!! inspired me alot as well. :D
very cool effects. like it very much. my own schizo experiences felt almost exactly but was far more hellish life.
samann95014 2 weeks ago
Wow, its got some cool kameos.
someone likes fight club, and shawn of the dead.
sgt0pimienta 4 weeks ago
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sgt0pimienta 4 weeks ago
The acting wasn't very good...
rabberJABBER12345 4 months ago
Wow... Thats amazing. We do that in nz but our editing software isn't quite as awesome.... what was your software?
akiwidefiedgravity 6 months ago
rele well done :) I do media nd im year 12 we gotta do our fictional short story soon! I thought this was rele well done, Im lookin at other peoples to inspirate my style and things for my short movie, rele good :)
DanJStudios2009 1 year ago
I really liked this, I thought that it was really creative and overall a great film to watch. I loved the music and I really loved how you did the credits. I was wondering what program did you use to edit this and do the credits...Great Film
TheFreedomToFly 1 year ago
Awesome work! I really liked the story, but you shuldtent have so mouch walking. Just try to make a script, and take only the keypoints of it :D
Avalance21 1 year ago
i make short suspense films, check my channel
Gencturk92 1 year ago
fucking awesome, LOL @ Lift music :L
JamieToul 1 year ago
Wow good I think the saw music wasn't a great choice but other than that great! 5 star
DaBigEgg 1 year ago
The worst
Original1995 1 year ago
Good at first, gradually declined however, this is expected. You must work on your camera work though.
torpedoscott 2 years ago
Really good job man what do you use for the paint splatter during the credits?
Tubeboy732 2 years ago
boring, predictable and not a very good conclusion...but great music and way to use it in a dramatic fashion! It was more like a confused music video more than anything. Good visuals in some accounts
gsgava4455ar 2 years ago
WOW!
lozzixD 2 years ago
:O bloody good.
itsthatgirlbeks 2 years ago
hey, first of all I think this is great. awesome film. I am trying to make one for school at the moment, and I was just wondering two things, first. how to get the effect of people flashing in and out of the frame, like at the bustop in this one. and also how you filmed the scene in the bathroom where he shot himself?
thanks heaps. and once again really good!
liag877 2 years ago
Omg Thats Sick Man !! Hope Mine is As good As Thats Whaaa You get For it?
blondeashbash 2 years ago
wat skewl do u guys go to?
squidysam 2 years ago
john 23rd college
CoreyGinnivan 2 years ago
This is Really gurd Loved it but i dont get end when u crash into car ? and ur like :S in going round in a circle , also loved tha falshin boy who was he supposed to be u shurd of telld us a bit more of whats happening at the monment were just running round with u not nowin anythin
AdotRenshaw 2 years ago
hey dudes, this was good aye.. i noticed you used some of video copilots products like Evolution... for the credits.. and im guessing you either used after effects to do that? or some other program, was good aye... nice job out ov 10 ill give a 8 just minior things could be done to it,, but other then that i was prity good aye.. nice job.
stairea 2 years ago
Also i think that the movie was more about the editing and effects rather than the film itself. But other than that i really quite enjoyed the film for many of the reasons mentioned by others (aside from the elevator scene).
casperburke 2 years ago
You could have done with some dialouge, the music just after the opening title didnt suit the start of the film ( you should have allowed time for the viewer to realize that the main character is schizophrenic, an introduction to the film), too bad about the camera at the start of the bus scene, pretty shoddy camera work all around actually, and the scene where the main character is going down the elevator during the middle of the climax was Very anti-climatic and not suited to the film.
casperburke 2 years ago
excellent job man.
I liked how the film was kind of darker. Also the quick flash of the person 4:13 was extremely creative.
Awesome Job
5/5
calebmind 3 years ago
Very cooll movie!! :D however ur toast posts up but its not done its still bread !! :o scary lol
CrazyRhianne 3 years ago
The hardest effect to create :P
burninglies 3 years ago
corey this is soooo cool lol fez plays a good scary crazy person, cant wait to see ur next one
ur sooo crazy at FX n shit hahah
boni
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bonsta119 3 years ago
ahhh u make me cringe! corey ur sooo crazy with this shit i actually got scared lol
bonsta119 3 years ago
sick credits....amazing for a first film...story wise, there was a lot of just walking around but it all looked amazing.
how'd you make those credits/effects w the credits?
DavidBreschel 3 years ago
lmao!!! the elevator bit was hilarious! XDD this is one of the best short films i've ever seen. loved every minute of it!!! inspired me alot as well. :D
xxxxx
xxuselessbulletsxx 3 years ago
fucking awesome dude!
casinostageseries 3 years ago
thats sooooo sick.
haha when ferrel is goin down in the elevator
gussieGSE 3 years ago
OH EM GEE, SAW MUSIC IS FRIKKEN FREAKY, NICE VIDEO MAN
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daniel81991 3 years ago