Short Film, "In Your Shoes", Starkblue Productions

[faaarrrh]

oi nob head nice shoes

[TheeLaura1]

I really like your use of shots - especially the shot at the start where you don't know who's died, but i think the storyline loses effectiveness because it's really hard to understand. I think you could still make people think without getting them confused. Very good though, keeping making more!

[thesecondshelf]

You're quite right- but I don't think the problem is that it doesn't make sense, it is that you have to watch it more than once to understand it properly. thanks for the comment, I love to hear feedback on the films :)

[1000SFF]

THIS IS GOOD

[hope284]

ya i guss your right.......the video dose kinda make you think about the why insted of just how sad they died : )

[hope284]

why do people like suicidi videos so much it just makes people more dipressed.

[theguythatsings]

I was trying more to make people think more about why they died, not just sad that they died :)

[lowridin97]

listen lads ITS LITTLE LEVER THAATS THE BEST

[thesecondshelf]

well I've got to say, this short film doesn't really make halliwell seem a happy place to live!

[lowridin97]

lol but little lever the best lad just sayin just sayin

[thesecondshelf]

:D okay

[lowridin97]

ye cuzz n im from bury new road/castle street n u can see the road on my pic n my facebook iz rehman 'G-Sta' Ahmed

[StormbreakerVideo]

watching this made ME want to hang myself !

JK

well i watched it all .. i was very confused. but the acting wasnt bad ..

i would have liked it to have both gangs chasing each boy , meeting in a fork lane , then the two boys run off while the two gangs fight each other .. then the relationship develops and eventually they both die in a suicide pact.

nice hanging tho.. i imagine it was quite hard to film that without killing your star actor lol !!

keep making films

AJ

[thesecondshelf]

yeh, a lot of people have said it's confusing; we were trying to be all pretentious and symbolic!!

nice idea, the suicide pact would have been a great twist!! instead though, we wanted to suggest that the other lad did die as well (the rock moment!)

haha- chris will be very pleased to be commented as the star!! yes, a bit of cellotape did the trick.

thanks for the comment :)

[thethirdshelf]

I wonder why their chasing him?

[thethirdshelf]

:O Eleanors screaming!

[thethirdshelf]

That boy is evil! I dont want a scratched cd if I was him!

[thethirdshelf]

Really good!

[bluehive]

This is excellent my boy. And the best yet.

Great theme going with the shoes and an excellent yet damming comment on society in general.

Not everyone will carry a knife, but many will carry bigotry and tribal hatred where they can find it.

[TheMessiah95]

What a lovely thought, that your friend probably will commit suicide and you'll find. Still it's a very good film.

[oggycheese]

Awesome job on this! A huge improvement from previous films (not that they were bad, this is just awesome) looks like a lot of effort went into this and the script, acting, camera work, editing, sound and whatever else went into this was great! Bravo!

[thesecondshelf]

Thanks :) means a lot coming from THE oggycheese!! :D

[theguythatsings]

I Like It!!! :D (well, i would, wouldn't I?!)

[gbfilmproductions]

great film, reaaally well edited! :)

[Benjinox87]

Fantastic Camera Angles And Great Use Of Sound. Your Best Short Film So Far Cant Wait For Future Works!!!

Ps How Many Parts Does Eleanor Have?!!

[Benjinox87]

Oh My God This Was Awsome!!!!!!!!!!

[kazzza1141]

very well done, brought a tear to my eye

[WickedBabii]

that was really really good josh!

never want to see Chris hang himself again tho :( Beki x

[thesecondshelf]

:) thankyou! hope you managed to follow the plot! yeh, i wasnt too sure whether we put too much emphasis on his death, but hey, there you have it.

[thesecondshelf]

also, you've kind of given away the ending to people who havent yet seen it yet!!! XD

[sandrabatten66]

Great acting - loving the screaming Eleanor!

[oooolornaoooo]

i love the music on it! and them montage things scared me despite knowing what was going to happen. i also appreciate how i was top of the lists of credits - even above you josh :)

[thesecondshelf]

well, you lorna, what can i say! chief of lighting, there every sunday, it was the least i could do dear :)

[aimsyrox]

welldone! great film AGAIN! LOL ! :D

[thesecondshelf]

:) why thankyou!! not sure why your laughing, but im pleased you are!

[gastaladjon]

omg, y cant you undestand the story- this is legend, i am the best in the entire film. clearly...... from jon smith :)

[thesecondshelf]

well done gastaladjon!! i hope that you continue to star in our films!!

[robcanon11]

this is the best thing since sliced bread

[pearl4heart]

hey josh its mim! this is pretty good, i didn't understand the storyline but theres some good actors in it. I enjoyed it x

[jeeemima]

i don't get the story at all!

i liked the guy from the shop on halliwell road givin him the shoes though its funny

[andybeasley96]

really good

maybe if we didn't have all the problems (cast not turning up, your camera breaking) it would of been made a bit more smoother.

But still AWESOME

[thesecondshelf]

it wasn't meant to be smooth!! but thankyou :)

[maddieeeeeeeeeeee]

well done! :)

[thesecondshelf]

thankyou!! please rate also :)

[maddieeeeeeeeeeee]

i already did :D

[inbeautytornapart]

Good job Josh ;D

[thesecondshelf]

yey! comment- come on roisin, rate as well!! :D

[inbeautytornapart]

Oh, sorry :S....oh my gosh the viewing figures are going up by the minute!!!

[thesecondshelf]

i still see no rating!

[inbeautytornapart]

Happy??!!