My Little Pony fanfic Rainbow Factory Reading

[THERAVEPONY]

@hayjbird if you think this is bad, read cupcakes.

[RainbowDashRocks1000]

then no one i repeat no one read "Sweet Apple Massacre"

[setzertrancer]

@RainbowDashRocks1000 I have read it. It was meh.

[Knotwist]

Is it bad that I laughted through most of it???

[jenningsaustindl]

@Knotwist no i laughted at some points of it

[hayjbird]

HOW COULD ANYONE WRITE THIS

its so horrid

oh god i can never recover!

[MariofanE1337]

i actually heard the song before i read the book i didn't know there was a fanfic about it it spoiled the ending for me. :(

[ehhgirlxXx]

Orion is such a good guy...

[XNightmarexWolf]

BTW,i watched the animation of cupcakes,im not going to bother reding it.

[XNightmarexWolf]

why am i here i already read it?

[DanteKami1]

so horrible...but...can't resist liking it...

[SargeantSudsX]

O_O

[Linkzor24]

Someone PLEASE give me a link to the fanfic! I've tried searching it on Google, but all I could I find is a stupid fanfic which happens to have the exact same name as this one...

[WingedWarrior17]

@zasetsu2010 lol, you responded, er, i mean, replied back? Thanks btw. :3

lol, but yeah i agree with you.

I knew i shouldn't have read all of these fanfiction stories about the characters, i can't look at them the same anymore...

[moonshineofSC]

NOT SLEEPING TONIGHT

[moonshineofSC]

... This is Creepy in a way ... "Not in a body bag, but mentally disturbed and twisted,"

*Shudder*

[ansonx10]

I knew this was a bad idea.

I had barely started to read it once but stopped when my instincts forewarned me of impending creepiness.

I gave in because someone said it had depth instead of just sex and stuff.

But I liked Molestia better. A lot better.

I don't think I'm even going to bother with Cupcakes.

[ubskewer]

1st half of story: "Oh, it's not that bad, really."

2nd half: "what the fuck?"

Still, it's less creepy than cupcakes and WAY better than sweet apple massacre. Looks like I'll have no sleep yet again. *sigh*

[Cannon46100]

@ubskewer i got 15 minutes of sleep last night and thats it

[Bortfangirl]

You know,even though this is a gore fanfiction,I actually REALLY enjoy this one. I can actually listen to this whole reading without stopping. It is just a very interesting story.

By the way, I love how you add the song in some parts, I love that song :D Also how you started to cue the music right where Rainbow is about to kill Aurora (did I get her name right?) because that part was very intense.

Great job!

[masterlink0]

@LessBreath I'm in the same boat brother (or sister idk)

[TheDefiant491]

this makes me want to punch babies

[xakchan]

Is there perhaps an alternate mp3 download link?? :c

[setzertrancer]

@xakchan Not at the moment. When I cbf, I'll reupload all my stuff to Mediafire.

[Masterkillplayer]

alternativ ending:just before RD started the machine,Dante came into the room and killed everyone.The pointless End!

[LolLordy]

@Masterkillplayer Alternative ending:

They pass the test then a skelton poped out !!!!!!!1111one!!

[hrmlizzie1]

I read the fanfic... wasn't disturbed at all. Cupcakes IMO is creepier.

[MLGKFC]

@EPICMARSHMALLOWPIVOT They're clips from the song based on this fic.

[MMBADBOI]

needs a animation on this

[EPICMARSHMALLOWPIVOT]

the fuck is with the random music?

[TheMRsNiCkJoNaS17]

i hear the squeaking....o.O

[edalwayo1234]

it just like hostel

[Rex8483]

okay what about with this Rainbow Factory, I seeing blood for I don't know please someone tell me what about

[Rubystars1000]

I enjoyed listening to your reading of this. Thanks

[TheMRsNiCkJoNaS17]

SHED.MOV



[alphex1000]

@TheMRsNiCkJoNaS17 stay out of her shed or your going to the rainbow factory

[TILT335]

Those damn cupcakes dont seem so bad now do they ?

I'll start ordering some from Pinky Pie ...

[thefishtank13]

Everypony think of it this way if the rainbows were made out of pones than pinkie pie would be dead because i would think pinkie pie would get something like mad cow disease or kuru. p.s i did not read the story but i have herd about it.

[LilScourge]

I couldn't finish listening to it

The music always set me off. Apparently it did affect me cause whenever it did start playing I jumped lol xD

Also. Anyone have a link for the pic of RD staring at you covered in blood? Want -33

[rpk5000]

@LilScourge you can find the picture on google if you type in rainbow factory fan labor hope this helps

[LemonDropTheunicorn]

I love your accent :) it makes it all the creepier :)

[TheCaptainBMX]

Well must say this was really kinda boring. Anyway could you not play parts of the song in the video, It hurt my ears really bad when that happened and the last five minutes had that faint loop. Anyway not bad of an audio reading but next time please leave a link to the original story so we can read it. I just cant imagine it properly.

[ProjectXero35]

i like this story, it gives a nice explanation to dashes pompousness while telling a dark story about the way rainbows are made, granted we all know this isnt it, i still like it.

[CaptainObvious852]

Wait a minute... when rainbow dash got ready for the adventure in the episode "dragonshy", she put rainbow under her eyes... OMG she put rainbow extract... WAIT A MINUTE! PINKIE PIE ATE THAT SHIT IN "SONIV RAINBOOM" ZOMG

[TAIGAXML]

This story, in my opinion, is far worse than Cupcakes. Pinkie was simply insane and just needed to be put in a high level institution, were as RD is pure evil and needs to be put through the machine herself..or equivalent. There was so much violence in Cupcakes that it just looked almost funny to me, but here is some real pain.

[Zetsumaneater200]

Ze doctor is so pleased with this delightful story. It's is so deliciously ingenuis how they make a bright und happy thing, rainbow.... blah! Ze word is foreign to me. Anyvay seems as though Ich have found something that Ich must come into. Hmmhmm Bhahaha!!

[GingerTheArcanine123]

@Zetsumaneater200 ....Sprechen Sie Deutsch? XD

[Zetsumaneater200]

@GingerTheArcanine123 Ja. Und du?

[GingerTheArcanine123]

@Zetsumaneater200 Ja, ich lerne Deutsch. Mein Deutsch ist nicht so gut, aber ich spreche besser als ich es eingeben. Mein Grammatik ist sehr schlecht. XD

[robotnik987]

they said that celestia used to make the rainbows, as well as raise the sun

then luna was sent to the moon and celestia had to stop making rainbow and start raising the sun and moon

thats when the rainbow factory started up and began creating rainbows through this gruesome method

but, since luna is back and can raise the moon, cant celestia take over making rainbows again?

:/

[sexhaie]

with cupcakes i cloudn't even finish it it was so disgusting, but this is so horrible yet like a car crash, i can't stop listening to this, this so upsetting yet so nicely written and intriguing.

[GingerTheArcanine123]

@sexhaie You might not want to read Sweet Apple Massacre then, because I found it 10 times worse than Cupcakes. O__e

Just a suggestion XD

[sexhaie]

@GingerTheArcanine123 actually i did, that was far worst, cupcakes i was able to try to get through half the story, sweet apple massacre was just... revolting, i know i sound like a puss but i just couldn't read anymore of it, words can;t describe how i felt about that story, but rainbow factory is more easy to swallow and really chilling, i love this story now.

[GingerTheArcanine123]

@sexhaie I got through S.A.M. but it gave me nightmares for like, a week XD

Cupcakes, I got through, but it scared me a little

And Rainbow Factory, I actually really liked. It's creepy and a little gross at that one part with the machine irwnrhtwth XD

But other than that, this story's really awesome

And the song is one of my favourite songs now eue

[sexhaie]

@GingerTheArcanine123 yeah its just that one part where one of them is brutally killed and grinded up thats probably the only part that made me cringe but i can easliy sit through that and eat a meat product while doing so, the other 2 fics i don't want to revisit.

[GingerTheArcanine123]

@sexhaie I re-read Sweet Apple Massacre.

It was worse than I remembered it. .____.

I have read way too many grimdark fics today

Well, no sleep for me XD

[sexhaie]

@GingerTheArcanine123 i probably shouldn't egg you on but i've read some good horror/creepypasta stories that still keep me up at night, the rake being one, holy shit i can never trust the dark again. lol

[GingerTheArcanine123]

@sexhaie XD Oh man, these fanfics always scare me, but I love 'em.

The Rake? Need to look that up.eue

[deathconceal1]

God damn, that was hardcore. Fuck lol no nightmares, just surprised.

[sam76127]

I WS WATCHING THIS NEAR DINNER AND I THREW UP XD

[MinecraftGH]

Worst. Reader. Ever.

Little thing called "editing properly."

You should get one.

[PurpleNekoBlaze]

this makes sence..O.O

[MrBierdop]

Derpy Hooves must have past it too, right?

[liam603]

I wonder how derpy hooves passed.

[alphex1000]

@liam603 she never went to school?

[PichuABC]

@liam603 Hey! that's what I SAID! XD

[Theawesomeman9999999]

can i get a link to the fan fiction please?

[NightDarkHatena]

IDK who created the Rainbow Factory story, but she/he is a genius!

[nate99dog]

@robotnik987 i go through what i call "pony therapy" i watch alot of her episodes cupcakes dosent even give me the jitters even when i try to think of it while watching a pinky episode

[Macedonfreak]

I still like rainbow dash i dont know why but these do not affect me the only thing that made me hate a pony as much as possible was cupcakes it fucked me up bit after seeing this it makes me think of all those ponies being pinkie YAY but pinkie is still cool

[FHomeBrew]

Taking down Mega-Upload for it's illegal contents is like shutting down the roads for the crimes committed there. There's soo many legit things going on at Torrent and megaupload sites and the pirates, who they are trying to fight, will actually overcome this easily.

't ain't fair.

[blawrgful]

bro... why does this take an hour? i read this in 10 minutes...

[Shadowhunterx20]

@blawrgful reading ALOUD. You need good fluency so that people understand the words, and adding emotions.

[NeonGreenFish]

Something just occured to me. Remeber the episode where Pinky ate some of the rainbow (spectra, whatever)? What if she got her taste for ponies from that?

[liam603]

@NeonGreenFish That's a good question,a really good question.

[WingedWarrior17]

Oh...my...god...

This ruined the image of Rainbow Dash in my mind now...

[zasetsu2010]

@WingedWarrior17 agreed, now add that to pinkie pie on the list of fractured children show images :D

[TwistedBlackAQW]

36 minutes in and this already seems like bullshit. <_<

[TwistedBlackAQW]

The random ass swearing is making this fic seem reaaaaaalllly bad.

[TwistedBlackAQW]

I'm using this to purge My Little Dashie from my system.

[1waka2laka]

lol, megaupload link in the description

[ne0nXnightmare]

Anyone else hear that faint squeaking noise in the background?

[wolftail121]

@ne0nXnightmare i hear it hes reading the rainbow factory in the rainbow factorry

[GingerTheArcanine123]

@ne0nXnightmare Sounds like a teakettle whistling....

[MelMelCuddleSlut]

@ne0nXnightmare Makes it even creepier.

[Wolfhouse1000]

WELL THIS IS GREAT, NOW I NEED TO READ MY LITTLE DASHIE FOR MY SELF TO FEEL CARE FOR RAINBOW NOW!!!

[TwistedFireX]

Wow, someone needs to make this a animation. o_o

[BigM33100]

I never shed a man tear during this. Honestly

[BigM33100]

Wow. I know its a story about horrible things but its a really good story. I loved it but hated the parts when people died

[coryharvey3000]

This makes cupcakes pale in comparison...

[XMan2001X]

RD: *MK9 Noob Saibot's laugh*

[XMan2001X]

@Theultimategeeks101 I say it's better that way. juz saiyan

[LizardBat]

I didn't shed a tear, but it was a very interesting story.

[07ManWee]

Things i hate about this video:

1: made me shed a manly tear when orion said i love you

2:Its an hour long

3: The worst thing is that this could be the background story for rainbow dash. It all fits perfectly.

[swasvids]

@Theultimategeeks101 less violent but this dove into my sanity pinkie in cupcakes was insane while rd was pure evil

[Vitanimanedwolf]

I accually got a little teary when Orion said I love you to Scoots :,(

[shadestepwarrior4]

....He tossed his eyes?

[fracid1292]

1:35 was it only me or were the clouds moving...

[Goddamswingking]

Yea this isn't my kind of story I like happy ending and I like when they are actually about mlp

[Theultimategeeks101]

Still less violet than Cupcakes...

[melissaduck]

@Theultimategeeks101 Perhaps, but quite possibly a lot more heart-wrenching.

[IWasBornStupid]

The ending were the music blasted scared the crap out of me xD (Either that it was my headphones)

[IWasBornStupid]

Her eyes are pinkish purple, not red. o:

[94657264028465084625]

Lol why does RD always get fucked up somehow in every grim dark?

[MRNodinC]

Your a lesbian not a killer.

[baliyae]

NOOOOO! Not Scootaloo! Damn, and Rainbow Dash is a bad guy here? I never knew she had a dark side (even though she was corrupted by Discord).

[SplosionsArefun]

this was the one time in any story that I have read that I hoped for a good ending

[MrXler00]

"Sleeping.exe has stopped working. Send an error report to Microsoft." o.O

[ThePolishWarlord]

I found that I had a small tear in my left eye when this was finished.

[robotnik987]

so now every time i look at rainbow dash AND pinkie pie ill have the slightest memory of their personal demented fanfics

[UltimasIsland]

@robotnik987 Revenge atleast

[MlpFimKid]

foal is pronounced fole not fowel just so you know

[Jrto66]

Now what? will scoot be ok?

[PkKirby876]

@Jrto66 Yup, they hugged out. No srsly she is dead.

[yurritt]

Well... this makes you look at cupcakes completely differently.

[MXBeRzErKeR]

wear did you get this info??

[MXBeRzErKeR]

the swearing is just you adding it in to make it sound better right??

[superklutzgirl]

@MXBeRzErKeR No the real fic has swearing in it.

[zuzoscorner]

at least its not clopfic god these a lot of those dam things

[sonicrulez111]

@zuzoscorner this is a clopfic, a pretty good one too

[TheRaackMan]

I guess Rainbow dash is

*Puts on sunglasses*

Pegicidal

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AHHHHHHH

[coredragonz]

so many spoilers....

[z0mbiedoctor]

I have already read this, but i thought i would check out a youtube reading cuz I LOVED IT SO MUCH!

[TheArtemisBow]

I cried brony tears :(

[dasLebenbringer]

Oh God.. I'm literally sweating and shaking.. the ending just.. its just awful

[DerpyWhooves2011]

tears were shed close to the end and at the end....... ;_;

[DerpyWhooves2011]

im gonna read the coments before i watch this 

[TotallyArrJay]

Finally I made it! WOO!!!

I would like to be as murderous as RD sooner or later >:D

[gamerdude260]

Wait.... Pinkie ate some of that stuff in the show. MY GOD PINKIE PIE IS A CANNIBAL.

[Ozzzie968]

@gamerdude260 DUH Why do you think she made Cupcakes out of Rainbow Dash?

[GargoyleZoo]

...you've never read "Cupcakes", have you?

[gamerdude260]

@GargoyleZoo I've read it. I wanted to say. SHE'S A CANNIBAL EVEN WHEN SHE'S NOT ENVOLED IN THE FICTION IT'S ABOUT. I felt that doesn't make much sense.

[banaszak2]

lol ur british

[NessPKThunder]

Very will written story. I like this one better than Cupcakes, Rocket to Insanity, or Sweet Apple Massacre. It actually had an interesting plot and was powerful enough to stir up emotions. Cheers to the author.

[elite1551]

@NessPKThunder Yes,I think that cupcakes was almost only playing with blood,but this one was very very good story.

[wolfboy44410]

manly tears wer shed a 36:00

[DeathwaitProductions]

cute...

[DeathwaitProductions]

before i listen to the rest of the reading ima say this here and now, i cut out colors with my teeth

[DeathBlade665]

bro. get a better mic. please.

[setzertrancer]

@DeathBlade665 The mic isn't the problem. I have done more readings since this and fixed pretty much all problems since, using noise removal and preventing clipping with volume and gain settings.

[kittycat727]

....you have buetiful eyes...

[1812ARTHUR]

@setzertrance but all the time if i make long video and then upload my video in youtube. this not take only 10 hours. in the end of uploading. i get error say. video is too long. and i wait 10 hours. WTF MAN!?!?!?

[1812ARTHUR]

WOW 52:56 VIDEO!??!?!?! o_O this like a hour!. if you can do video for hours so why i can't do video about like hour?

[setzertrancer]

@1812ARTHUR I think you have to be a regular uploader for long enough, then you earn having no limit on video length.

[3p1cp13eat3r]

@PointyCheese

Drug problems or dain bramage after flight school

[HackingTypewriters]

your voice kind of makes it scarier xD

[TheTheinsaneone]

definitely made me get over cupcakes

[GwahFace]

Not as well written as Cupcakes, but nice all the same.

[setzertrancer]

@GwahFace I would disagree

[brittanytheicefox]

@GwahFace its better!

[PointyCheese]

wait the best of the best in cloudsdale. what about dizzy doo or derpy or u know muffin

HOW SHE CUT IT!!

[UltimateWarriorsFan]

I thought this fanfic was when some creature corrupted Rainbow Dash and made her put her friends in the "Rainbow Factory" and killed them off one-by-one and made them into rainbows, until it came to Fluttershy, who killed her and Discord because she was the mastermind!

[1Toughcookie100]

@UltimateWarriorsFan Same! I thought that was the actual fanfic everybody loved and I was like, WTF?!

[dark7element]

Best gluefic yet!

[LessBreath]

Silly me, I thought that I was going to get some sleep tonight

[6662Ashley]

NOW LETS READ CUPCAKES! :D

[blindgamerz125]

Song at start?

[SnivyandLeafeonRock]

@blindgamerz125 /watch?v=YRx_iXgLAyw

[blindgamerz125]

@SnivyandLeafeonRock YAY

[cvbghj132]

@blindgamerz125 read the freaking description, bro.

[Ozzzie968]

@blindgamerz125 Rainbow Factory. which is what this Fanfic is based off

[blindgamerz125]

@Ozzzie968 I get it, goddammit...

[SweetieScooterBlooms]

Is this the whole story, or one part?

[setzertrancer]

@SweetieScooterBlooms Whole story.

[BRENDEBREN]

I really don't know what to say about this story. Sad. Violent. Surprising to see that RD was behind this the whole time.