1/15: Lauren embarrasses herself.

[rachelfrench1992]

3 months since the last coment? I'm changing that!

[starkidforlife822]

LOL

[hannahyep]

"He had an afro"

[vngaris]

hahahahaha :)

[acciobandaid]

"We couldn't find you!" one of them said. He had an Afro.

[InfiniteBox]

It's not at bad as some.

[briebrie1212]

I like how the characters, while introducing themselves, say their age.

It made me laugh.

[CookieLoverrr]

'Lexie had a very sarcastic sense of humor as a defense mechanism'

It's hilarious!

[violaplayerforever]

"He had an afro" I don't know why but that just made me laugh! :D

[nightfallsfast94]

she was too mentally weak :)

[Fireheart228]

My name is Lexi. XD

[animeattickwholoves]

XD BLUE GREEN EYES!!! ur my favorite <3 luv luv luv luv!

[Kathrynhol]

I have five tabs open 1 of them is youtube and the other 4 are fanfiction. Don't worry it's Harry Potter.

[blooddripsdown2]

lol, I love fanfics. Don't be embarrassed.

[AyriannahOllivandra]

...seriously awkwardly cheesy... I actually laughed out loud...

[TalesofE]

You can really read! :D Nice story

[Plottoberry]

Haven't we all made horrible fanfics? xD

[iAmortentia]

i love devilishlypure, the early days were just......perfect

[Mikeysmonkay]

O-Town fanfic ftw. lol.

[PolarBearsinSiberia]

Ashley was the cutest O-town-er...still is

[nerdra]

I like the sidenote about the muscularity of Dan's chest.

Nice, haha. :D

[bakaonigirii]

XDDD "he had an afro."

[frazzified]

My favorite part is that you state that her sarcasm is her defense mechanism.

[QueenOfR0ck]

XDDDDDDDDD I forgot this fanfiction. xD

[animeXjunkie]

... Sweeeeeeeeeeet. I write manga, and other cool stories. I know it's a year old, but sweeeeeeeeeeeet. Tee-hee, PEACE!

~Arizona Smith Jr.

[ThatNerdfighter]

he had an afro ... nice

[ethnictriogirls]

i LOVED o-town...ESPECIALLY dan! :)

he had my heart until the break up. lol

-jenny

[MUPadfoot]

It's okay...I used to write Backstreet Boys fanfiction :-\  we ended up annihiliating NSync haha

[sisterofpeace]

Ah, fanfiction. Good stuff to laugh at. I write some, and they are beyond terrible. Oh, well.

I am sooo addicted to 5ag already! (A year's worth of videos to watch.....*gulp* )

Anyway, you gals are awesome because...i'm starting my own vlog because of you! Yay!

[MUTEscifan31W]

You're a pretty decent reader. I'm not much of a fan of... fanfiction, your reading was interesting.

[weert101234]

FANFICTION.

i have like a bunch for twilight :)

[ratherconfused]

Whatwhatwhat?

[zomgxbrie91]

lmao i made fanfics to. this was great.

[bicje23]

That was funny! I used to write those kind of fanfiction when I was younger, it was aboutt he backstreetboys. I'm still embarassed about that hehe. But you're cool for just reading that out loud, I would never have the guts to do that!

[minni13]

we have the same computer xD

[Astrofroggy]

Better than I can write!

[Cin3ris]

lol You liked Dan?

Ashley was my favorite xP

OTown was my first concert LOL

[KeroCake]

That was a actually pretty good for a thirteen year old. I was kind of captivated lol.

I did the same sort of thing...Elijah Wood hahaha :)

[caseadillas]

Lauren, I love you and your O-Town Fanfiction. That seriously rocked my face off. :)

[akatsukiis]

I don't think I would ever want to be taken by the hand by some hot stranger I met at a bar to a tour bus. But, hey, if I was "too mentally weak at the time," who knows?

[oneqwerty]

that was epic lulz i couldnt keep a straight face but you are still the best of the fiveawesomegirls.

[elphieismyhero]

I laughed.

You're courageous. :)

[charlottepoet]

very cheesy but actually pretty well written :)

[michaelaranda]

...which was very muscular.

[SofiZap]

meow

[kirstykannibal]

Awesome fanfic

I love how they only just meet and they're almost kissing XD

Oh dear I used to write so much fanfiction v_v

[XxIcyxBluesxX]

haha i like how they introduce them selfs with there ages! lol veary nice.

[NikiRadcliffe]

Don't worry...

I've written worse fanfictions about Dan Radcliffe & Me.

[stjohnyouth]

my friends found mine...Dan Radcliffe...what was I thinking...

[clockwise16912]

doesnt it suck when you think your fanfiction seems so private (or at least you dont think it will directly effect your real life) and then someone finds you! and all those thing you wrote when you thought they were private come back to kill you?

lol,

ranting,

im stoppin now,

[stjohnyouth]

It's a death trap waiting to happen...

[clockwise16912]

amen to that

[kiyoshi85]

I am unashamed of my fanfiction > . > ;

[hollishillis]

hahahah this is frickin amazing! i love you lauren!

[taylorchyeaa]

HAHAH Lauren. I love it. Oh my gah.

And.. she ran up an elevator? Wow! I wish I could run up an elevator! =D

[AfternoonTeaWithLucy]

escalator.

:)

[lexiethenerd]

This is especially hilarious because... my name is Lexie.

OTOWN! I have very little interest in your collective chest!

[letmks]

LOL

"Lexi burried her head into dan's chest,which was very muscular."

[thesameoldloneliness]

haha yeah that was my favorite part

[littlemissobvious]

It looks like there is a person in a red shirt and black pants sitting crouched behind your bed :]

[Emmagizer]

cute.

[LalalalalaLauren75]

She buried her head in his chest (which was very muscular) XD Best line EVER!!!

[EdenNykara]

This is probably one of the most hilarious things EVER. It has inspired me to go back and read all my 13-year-old fanfics as well!

[raccooninmybasement]

"i know i don't know you, but are you alright?"

what a pick up line!

[liberty123love]

"He had an afro."

lmao.

[shawnina1013]

haha

i actually met ashley when he was starring on broadway in hairspray:P

[fiveironscott]

"Lexi burried her head into dan's chest... which was very muscular." hahahaha whoa, steaming love novel coming along here Lauren. I can definitely picture you writing that when you were young, but thats awesome. It makes me think of the stuff i did back in the day. hahaha

[broke24]

Wow, that's a lot of psychoanalysis for a 13 year old! LOL

[SissyLynnProductions]

HAHA!

Oh my gah......wow.

xD

[ameliahoov]

LMAO.

[VeggietableEater]

So... this is the funniest thing ever. xD

[HikariKage]

I think this was more of a punishment to the fans :o instead of to Lauren.

o_O

[gheefreak]

Dear. Lord. O-Town?

This is an issue.

[kaitlynwithakay]

nice use of "whom" and "defense mechanism" at age 13! :-P

[MandyT10]

Wow. That was...hilarious. In a good way though!

[alicecullengirl]

....that story...was awesome. lol, no joke.

[tushia11]

i have blue-green eyes lol!!

[MrsLuciusMalfoy]

Oh god, I have stuff like this from when I was 14. It's an original story though, so it's 10 times worse.

[lexieroseme]

This is especially hilarious because my name, as my screen name might suggest, is Lexie.

[jen81494]

hahhaha you muuussst read more!!please!! love it!

[Chandler1002]

omg this is the funniest thing ever

[redatpct]

hahaha.... that was funny

[LadyLatias]

I like blue-green eyes. =3

[OxideRevolution]

Tehe, that was good. I have that "have a day" poster :D

[littlepurpleship]

i wish you would've

finished reading :P

[devilishlypure]

It would've taken hours. I had loooooads of this stuff.

[littlepurpleship]

maybe you should make it into a little series or something. that way we get to hear the end to the adventures of lexie freedmen[spelling?] and o-town. :)

p.s: tuesday's are my favourite. thanks for being awesome.

[bananas1and2]

Haha... Fanfiction embarrassment. Been there, done that. This is hilarious. Thank you for making me laugh so hard.

[0ganbay]

Oh my gosh

Snow lovelovelove

[traybroken]

"... which was very muscular."

"Loves it."

I second that thats what made me got me.

[vigiroscope]

ahhahaha omfg I laughed at that too

[charlesamelia]

Nice. I liked the part about her being "too mentally weak at the time."

[thinkthegirlsgonemad]

i have that "have a night" poster. didn't know they made a day one.

[WaterfallFlowers]

OMG I want to know more I want to know more... If you dont want to read the story can you plz send it to me plz plz... OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG MOMG>..I got to know...

[Hobgoblins]

"... which was very muscular."

Loves it.

[astrophe1987]

Jacob was alway my favorite *SHAMED*

[devilishlypure]

Aww I loved Jacob!!

[normalwerido]

nice story

a bit romantic lol

=D

[hollowxlies]

THAT is my favourite story!

[lizzieangel90]

Oh the fan fictions we write when we're young teens. I've written a few harry potter ones. Great video!

[xxRebella]

Corn, anyone?

..Who am I kidding? I loved it, haha!

[MissAlissa15]

i laughed so hard when you said, "she buried her head in his chest......which was very muscular."

[the5regularguys]

Wow...just wow...

[elfkwest]

hahahhaha! i love how everyone introduces themselves and then says how old they are. being 21 sounds like heaven to a 13 yr. old, i guess.

[RawrIshTarax]

"he had an afro."

PSHFTT. afro's rock. that was an awesome story.

you're my idol.

[katgirl21]

LOL, that was pretty corny. Not as bad some others I've read though.  :P I thought it was hilarious how you said their ages every sentence practically.

[LizlikesHPalot]

hahahahahahahahahahahahaha. i think that was the best work of fiction. ever.

[dskloet]

Pretty good, I hope you need punishment again because I want to know how it continues :-).

[yoindahood]

OMG it's so like what I wrote for Buffy fanfic when I was 13. It's SO good to hear someone whose evolved too. Let's hear some of what you wrote more recently.

[ruebemused]

Oh, don't we at least get a link to the fanfic? That would lift the clouds of doom that currently hover o'er my troubled brow.

[CRUNKRacoon]

lmfao!

Ohh yes..."very muscular"

:D

genius!...and halrious.

-Janet

[lizzieheff]

any story about o-town has to be awesome.

[Katiethecloud]

*she was too mentally weak at the time to tell him that* LMAO

love it

[flaziola]

1. It's not just girls watching the channel so dont start with 'Hey Girls'

2. You've just shown on your own channel that you can move the camera so why not show us the result of the die throw. You could be just picking a random girl by yourself for all we know.

[maggiehanna]

They say 'hey girls' because the person making the video is talking to the four other girls. Similar to the Green brothers. They would say 'hey John' or 'hey Hank' because that was would they were talking to spcifically.

I'm sure they aren't picking a random girl. That wouldn't be fun. And why would they do that anyway?

[alantieel]

It was good but really cliché.

[ruebemused]

Wait-- the fanfic or the video?

[alantieel]

the fanfic

[iheartnurdz]

You should post a link to that fic. Please?

Reminds me of when I was 14 and wrote that kind of fanfic. XD

[taraie101]

That was really good I think!

[MrsStephanieSnape]

Um............................­.........

[Funky1christie]

Lol that's funny!

[SharloNoir]

i liked your story actually , kinda cliché, but nice

[Emolicious420]

YaY!!!

Oi, I used too write short stories.

They were horrible though so yeah.

Now I just write poems they kinda suck too but not as bad as the stories.

[taylah111]

Hahaa

[amoamasyourmom]

Oh. My. God. I have been laughing so hard for the last four minutes. Lauren, I love you so much. Thank you for that amazing, amazing video. You are seriously the best. Adn the fan fic, wasn't bad at all. Just so damned funny. Anyway. Talk to you later!

[Alatarielle]

Oh god, that was Awesome! I used to write that kind of FanFic when I was 14, bored in class. boy, that was a loooong time ago. I have to go and look it up again :D

[songsfromahat]

d'oh! I was rating your vid and accidently hit four stars instead of five *stoopid stoopid stoopid*

Great video, great fanfic, five stars indeed :)

you girls are so, well awesome!

[sooz5]

This comment comes in four parts:

1) I wish you had been with us in FAO Scwarz today with Sarah, Liane and I. We missed you a LOT. Voldemort fangirlz!

2) Your fafic sounds exactly like the way my dream about NKOTB would fan out. Except replace Dan with Jordan Knight and Ashley with Joey McIntyre.

3) Someone needs to get you all new dice, Kayley doesn't deserve this.

4) Subscribe to TwoTwilighters!! Please?!

LOVE.

[devilishlypure]

Sorry, I haven't finished Eclipse. I don't want to get spoiled.

[nerdfighterstinky]

"she buried her head in dan's chest, which was very muscular"

you were a HARDCORE fangirl. love it.

[nise612]

haha dan was my favorite!

[Sareuhface]

ah ha...

oh fan fiction...

[SilentFilms26101]

4 stars!

[GymMidget415]

oh. my. god.

wow, lauren. just...wow. you are amazing for reading this.

[bowloforanges07]

lol "she didn't care what it was as long as it had alcohol in it" the fan fiction was awesome

[SweetItsSmack430]

that fanfic is really creatively done!! gosh, i dont even think i can write something that good now, let alone when i was thirteen

XD lol great video

[lovebeyondwords]

I don't think it's bad!!!!!!!!!

[megmeg2008]

This reminds me of some old fanfiction of my own...and trust me, you have nothing to be embarrassed about in comparison to mine (can you say Lupin giving me a piggyback ride? Good times...).

[letmks]

lol

your fanfiction made my day a little better, thanks ;)

can't wait for kayley's video tomorrow!

[jennybamn]

ahhaha that made me laugh

oh fan fiction

[danikins2145]

Oh gosh, that was pretty funny. I'm thirteen now, and the stuff I write now isn't all that cheesy. I use to write really cheesy stuff when I was ten. But anyways, I can't wait for tomorrow. Where we get to meet Kayley's parents, see her be a thestral, all in upside down action! Omg, rofl.

[MugglePrefect]

ROFL!!!!!! that was the most entertaining story...ahah

ahhhahaha i remember back when i wrote horrible stupid cheesey stories ^_^ i think yours was probably better than what i used to write. AGHH!

poor Kayley... shes got all those challenges. ahha this will be ENTERTAINING!

[bandgeek8408]

Just wanted to mention that I have those "Have a Day" and "Have a Night" posters that are in your background, and they are SWEET! That is all.

[freakishlemon]

Oh man, fanfic. I'm ridiculously addicted to it and I've been writing it since I was twelve.

Only everyone's gay because sometimes I'm a bit homosexual. XD

[lunalovegoodismyhero]

"But she didn't let go because she was simply too weak at the time to tell him that..." <- most hilarious line ever. I can totally imagine a teacher whipping out their read pen and writing, "SHOW DON'T TELL," in bold letters.

Hahaaaa!

[svechery13]

You were 12 when you wrote your stuff?

I never even thought about drinking when I was 12, but oh my goodness, you crack me up with your fan fiction...

[SgtPeppers1987]

HAHAHA O-town fan fiction gotta love it. I've heard of people doing Harry Potter fan fiction but never O-town! We still love you. Nice video you some dumb blonde!

[julianneflowers]

So I am pretty sure that fan fiction made my day! At least you can take some comfort in knowing you made everyone smile while you were being punished.

But upside down parent meeting...I can't wait!

[myaccount85228]

HI!

Your story was great. I really liked it. I think you should read teh rest, that would be great.

[beagletaylor01]

Kayly is also a thersle(sp) Tomrow

[xunkn0wndr3amx]

You were a very smart thirteen year old "defensive mechanism" lol  I don't think I even knew what that meant at thirteen but I think thats just me lol

[RunningWithTheGnomes]

Wow, that was some fun fanfic right there!

Dan was always my favorite...

[Lhouserr]

lmfao.

XD

I write a little fanfiction.. :x

Can't wait until tomorrow. ^^

[cinemacationalistic]

you forgot to say why today was awesome AGAIN

[potterwatch]

No she didn't.

[devilishlypure]

I named two reasons why today is awesome.

1. Because I remembered to say why today is awesome

2. Because it's snowing. Insert clip of snow being pretty.

[wannabeinhogwarts]

Oh wow...that was...much better than what I wrote when I was 13.

I never wrote fanfiction, but I did write some horribly emo poetry. I think I was emo before emo really existed...

I was never a big O-Town fan, but your FF made me feel sorry for Poor Dan. He sounded cute too =(

And I'm sure that the fact that you and your character have the same initials is just a coincidence ;)

I can't wait to see Kaley's triple Challenge tomorrow!

[lexiefa]

I thank you for making this video because:

1. My name is Lexie and hearing that story being read made me laugh uncontrollably.

2. I used to like Otown.

3. punishments are fun :]

[lotsoflovelee]

I love fanfiction.

[MichelleLynn81]

that. was. AWESOME!

for real.

[HoshiTski]

Awesome writing skillz!!! ;P

Geez, what a cruel punishment!

[defyinggravity89]

hahahaha "he had an afro" i have no idea why that cracked me up so much, just how you said it i guess =D

[derivative250]

didn't show us the die...

this will be interesting.

[sisterswho]

poor kayley, uber-ly challenged! good luck!

[prongsmwpp]

Lexi gets attached easily, doesn't she?

Haha poor Kayley!

[cristi1]

"which was very muscular"

[hobbitfootGA]

hahahahahaha yay! the deepest and most beautiful blue-green eyes she had ever seen! lauren, this was hilarious. thanks for embarrassing yourself for our entertainment!!

p.s. the myrtles need to do a show in Atlanta!!

[Nefcarkaiel]

I love your hat!!

[lalalaamichelle]

...ROFL.

:]

[ComfortNJoy]

Hahaha, I was smiling the whole time that you read your story. I think that we all have ridiculuos preteen fanfiction.

I'm looking forward to seeing Kayley's triple challenge tommorow. It shall be interesting.

[ANTHONYRAPPISAGOD]

um... she's also being a THESTRAL upside down

I'm terribly excited for tomorro's video

[crazipurplemonki]

wow. I feel so bad for you but i still can't help laughing! :)

[somethingswicked]

Oh Lauren, why are you so AWESOME?!?!? :D

[gir1inthemirror]

13 year old Lauren ftw!

By the way, good challenge idea!

<3's

[emmetgirl]

ouch. that may be one of the cruelest punishments ever. seriously, i think i'd rather eat a blenderized happymeal than read anything i read when i was thirteen. and i'm a vegetarian.

[italktosnakes]

Oh man Lauren, this was great.

Where can I find the rest? LOL

Also, this is over 4 minutes. Was that an official rule? I'm not sure, girls.

[devilishlypure]

Are you effing kidding me. Liane had one that went over. And I couldn't edit the fanfiction down any more than I did. It took like two hours to get it down that far. And with the awesome thing and the challenge I needed to not get punished again, it pushed me over. I even had to shorten my intro, haha.

You just like to see me suffer, Kristina. :P

[italktosnakes]

Well I left a comment on Liane's too, I'm not calling you out, I'm ASKING.

Is it or is it not a rule?

[ProfessorSpork]

This is why you need a Manifesto.

[yoshigal199]

hahahaha noo keep reading =P!