i found out about yu when we started to study poetry in english last week & my teacher played brave new voices. your poem was the best. i looked yu up on youtube. found yu and subscibed. i think about poetry like brushes think about brushing and combs think about combing ... lol .. just kiddin ..
tomorrow eve what time! paul it's been soo long since we've talked. i'm down to go live tomorrow if i'm home i'll let you know right away when i find out my schedule.
i wrote this 3 years ago when i was 16. it took a loooong time it did to create the vid. writing all the words one by one then going back and doing funky edits but it is fun.
i WILL worry about the dare because i have NO excuse in not doing it except for i'm all different sorts of busy.
i found out about yu when we started to study poetry in english last week & my teacher played brave new voices. your poem was the best. i looked yu up on youtube. found yu and subscibed. i think about poetry like brushes think about brushing and combs think about combing ... lol .. just kiddin ..
tauruskiiid92 1 year ago
I love this! I am using it in my 8th grade class to make the students remember alliteration!
DenDensMom 3 years ago
thats really cool. i first started getting into poetry in the 8th grade.
dr seuss does alot of stuff with alliteration too.
miketme 3 years ago
dude! thnx for this imma put this up at myy skoo cuz im doin a project about alliteration thx!
misschewah 3 years ago
This seems more like an excersise of lyrical skills....which is cool!
I use alliteration and double word meanin alot so I likes :D
VerbaLInfluencE 3 years ago
Mike: I'm sure; I like it! ;^D
Stiophain 3 years ago
glad you do
miketme 3 years ago
this is perfection my friend...i'm adding it to the playlist =]
and as a favorite, thank you for this
NatFlyer 3 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
score! you should check out my playlists too
miketme 3 years ago
you're amazing!
NeishaAnnTV 3 years ago
thankyou!
miketme 3 years ago
this has to be one of my favorite videos of yours. glad you finally put up a new video..i was actually missing your videos. i love you
PRIYA884221 3 years ago
i love you too! it's crazy i havn't been on yt in so long
miketme 3 years ago
I like it! it's kind of a fresh poem! =)
good luck with the finals!! own the stage! ^_^
PiratePorty 3 years ago
you know i will! thanks for always droppn by
miketme 3 years ago
wow that was amazing
tater40712 3 years ago
thanks! i hope you're subscribed and whatnot
miketme 3 years ago
i'm tryin. great to see you stop by
miketme 3 years ago
Yeah dude! U should have memorized this...LOL. Nice alliteration.
StopItGoAway 3 years ago
dude... i have to memorize pieces that i'm going to compete with (this is not one of my competition ones)
glad you liked the alliteration
miketme 3 years ago
woah!! that was so good!! i really enjoyed this! keep up the good work!!
5566183kone 3 years ago
thankyou i will. are you subbed? what are all the numbers for in yer name (curiosity)are they random or have significance?
miketme 3 years ago
yeah, of course, im totally subbed!! :D
the numbers in my name used to be 2 of the bands i like, but im don't like them that much anymore..lol. :D
5566183kone 3 years ago
Hey man
This was great. I really like the way you play with words. Can't wait to hear more from you.
Kind Regards - LuiWallentin
LuiWallentin 3 years ago
you will most definately hear more. i'm trying to post more frequently and i already have a new poem
miketme 3 years ago
this is great man!
If you're about tomorrow evening and would like to perform some live poetry, we're holding a tailcast chat. Hope you can make it!
peace
cheekychen 3 years ago
tomorrow eve what time! paul it's been soo long since we've talked. i'm down to go live tomorrow if i'm home i'll let you know right away when i find out my schedule.
miketme 3 years ago
It's actually today now.. [thursday].. it starts at 9pm UK time, but usually tends to run through to USA-friendly times..
Anyway, all the details are on the tailcast channel :]
I look forward to catching up!
cheekychen 3 years ago
that's in the middle of my work schedule sorry!
i'm going to start tailcasting when i have more time though
miketme 3 years ago
ah, dagnamit! that's a shame man.
Yeah cool, when you have time, it'd be cool to see you around the place :]
cheekychen 3 years ago
that was really good!
Prowlgrin 3 years ago
thank you!
miketme 3 years ago
Whoa whoa whoa!
You surprise me every time. How you come up with all this? :-D Plus, nice editing, must have taken you a loooong time.
And don't worry about the dare, do it when you can ;-) No one has replied either but it's cool :-D
porolita22 3 years ago
i wrote this 3 years ago when i was 16. it took a loooong time it did to create the vid. writing all the words one by one then going back and doing funky edits but it is fun.
i WILL worry about the dare because i have NO excuse in not doing it except for i'm all different sorts of busy.
miketme 3 years ago