A couple things. I agree, the closeup when Don squeezes Mark's shoulder could be integrated better. Not sure how without seeing the raw footage. Also, let's simulate Don pausing the security camera footage on Bill's disgusted reaction and hold that for a second. Last thing, i think there needs to be more of a pause between the line "it ain't nothing you haven't done before" and the door opening. Otherwise, I like the way these scenes are coming together. Nice work, Tristan.
thats zit, I want to see the rest
turtleyto 3 years ago
Wow, that was pretty good acting for a short film done by amateurs, I hope to se more of this soon.
turtleyto 3 years ago
A couple things. I agree, the closeup when Don squeezes Mark's shoulder could be integrated better. Not sure how without seeing the raw footage. Also, let's simulate Don pausing the security camera footage on Bill's disgusted reaction and hold that for a second. Last thing, i think there needs to be more of a pause between the line "it ain't nothing you haven't done before" and the door opening. Otherwise, I like the way these scenes are coming together. Nice work, Tristan.
JLSosa23 3 years ago
I can't get it to encode with good quality for youtube for some reason.
tristantheking 3 years ago