I suggest working on dynamics of separate parts, melody, bass, middle... your dynamics are pretty much the same in every one of these parts. As a suggestion, the melody only should have this level of dynamics, most of the time, the rest, mostly the middle, could be much much softer. Tempo, you do interpret a lot in rubato which is great but sometimes a bit too many changes.
I suggest slower with more constant tempo to work on dynamics. Lstn Thibaudet/Ashkenazy, for slw/fast version.
I suggest working on dynamics of separate parts, melody, bass, middle... your dynamics are pretty much the same in every one of these parts. As a suggestion, the melody only should have this level of dynamics, most of the time, the rest, mostly the middle, could be much much softer. Tempo, you do interpret a lot in rubato which is great but sometimes a bit too many changes.
I suggest slower with more constant tempo to work on dynamics. Lstn Thibaudet/Ashkenazy, for slw/fast version.
Good luck
pournam 8 months ago
nice rendition, shared it on my Twitter page with the Twilight fans..
pattypoor3 2 years ago