A Sex Poem

[arcanus121]

Excellent. It catches the sweaty post coital ambience, and then builds up to er... another shattering climax!

[dashpoet]

Always seems to be a popular subject! Enjoyable poem to research and write...

[mindovermatter2009]

Please Sir! Can I have some more???Gosh Mark. That was fan fucking tastic!! Made me thirsty.lol. awe. great job hun. Five shiney starz !!!!!*****

xxx~M.o.M

[dashpoet]

Sounds like you could do with something wet for that thirst! Quench away!

[paraulataviajera]

I love your poem, I love every word!!

will add to my fav!! 5 **** .

Many hugs my friend.

[dashpoet]

Great, thank you!

[NewBrazdolph]

faved!

[dashpoet]

Cheers!

[NewBrazdolph]

loved the words...

[dashpoet]

Thanks Braz.

[NewBrazdolph]

hmmmm...

nah...sex is overrated.

[dashpoet]

You're speaking to a fan!

[TheDaveFrom1952]

Excellent work Mark. Thanks for posting. Five Stars.

[dashpoet]

Cheers Dave, good to hear from you. Glad you like it!

[haliastales]

Hey great work mate - all the best:-)

[dashpoet]

Appreciate your comments! Cheers!

[XaveJamesGrey]

Cool. I like these lines best (if its possible to highlight any from this work) :

"Roused again by breathy adoration/

with wordless affirmation of assent"

(It also brought to my mind an earlier work you did with images of struggle- i thnk a woman in green was tugging on a rope.) Sexy.

[dashpoet]

Thanks James. The lines you picked out were amongst the last I wrote - I'm glad to hear my creative juices weren't spent too quickly on this!

(I wonder which poem you mean? Perhaps 'Grenadier Green'? This one is written as a kind of extended sonnet, I'm not sure I've done that before!)

[ChineseCalligraphy]

That's absolutely stunning. Top marks.

Very rewardning to find such a serious piece.

Sorry not to have cale dby but I am wrapped up in Thi Mai and animations, trees in oceans and two storey toadstools....

But this short done Ill be back on form.

Catch you later M... :)

[dashpoet]

Busy busy - best way to be! Glad you found time to listen to this. Cheers!

[SriCassiopeia]

This was fantastic Mark.

[dashpoet]

Thank you! Hope things are well with you, and sending best wishes, Mark.

[kel2corkey]

Beautiful Mark.

I'd love you to read one of my poems.

[dashpoet]

Thank you Kel. Do you have something in mind? I'd be happy to given the chance. Cheers for now, Mark.

[kel2corkey]

That would be amazing if you would,i'll go through my work and find something suitable and PM you with the words.

[dashpoet]

Excellent!

[IGrazor]

Simple yet effective presentation for this one. Excellent stuff Dash!

[dashpoet]

Thank you. Less is more here... to each their own pictures! Best that way really...

[santiagodevill]

I like the rhythm of this one. You leave a lot to the imagination here! I love the art of the tees, ya know?

[dashpoet]

In some ways, sex in the mind is the best place for it! Cheers Santiago, enjoy...!

[charlottepoet]

probably the title did you in for the comment issue :)

but this was so well put together and just beautiful!

[dashpoet]

It is a bit obvious isn't it?! I'm glad that by the sound of your comment the poem satisfied on some levels at least!!

(The comments disappearing issue is on all my videos - and I'm not the only one affected - it's getting a bit frustrating!)

[charlottepoet]

that is weird? i guess i don't get enough comments to worry about it :)

[TheDisexists]

Loved the strong sounds throughout the poem to evoke the mood. "fucking' fantastic!

[dashpoet]

I agree, it is fantastic... oh, and I'm glad you like the poem too! Cheers!

[Kabuki0009]

Very nice work man, but I don't see see why youtube is cutting your legs from under you,

I don't see anything in bad taste in your poem *****stars; ) faved

[dashpoet]

Hey Kabuki, thank you. It's not just this video that comments keep disappearing from. It's a shame, really frustrating and disappointing. For me, comments add to a video, the reaction from viewers, rapport with video makers, is part of what makes YouTube distinct. I can watch reruns of tv shows and music videos anywhere. The chance to engage with people, encourage and get to know artists of all sorts is special, rewarding in so many ways.

[longhairred]

~sigh~

[dashpoet]

Gasp!

[Idlinfarm]

Yes, wonderful. What does it mean? Is anything ever enough? I wonder why I ask questions. Anyway, I love it, Mark. And hey, stop that smoking.

[dashpoet]

Stimulated mind?! I try! Thanks Ida.

[Idlinfarm]

LOL

[andrewnorris1]

The black screen allows us all to be present and let our imagination run riot. You reading is just as graphic in its suggestiveness. Those languid repetitive 's's are so descriptive in their sound. Definitely a case of less is more and, Man, you give us so much!

[dashpoet]

Great comment Andrew, thank you. I didn't want any distraction from the words - I hoped they were strong enough in themselves! Cheers for now, Mark.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

You had me at "Sex" - :P

Fantastic and faved and five stars ;)

[dashpoet]

Enough Love Poems already! Cheers David, thank you.

[keanghiero]

WOW, Mark

I am stunned.

I really need a cigarette now!

5*

all the best

Kean

[dashpoet]

Dragging deep! Thanks Kean.

[ExaggeratedElegy]

Hey there Mark,

absolutely superb; heady, dreamy, perfumed words, so redolent of the aftermath of the act they describe. 5* and faved. I think I may be writing a repsonse poem to this if I can find the time :)

George

[dashpoet]

I'll look forwards to seeing what you come up with George. Great to feel you are inspired! Thank you.

[liz1060]

Day-am ... definitely a sex poem! And I do want, for your sake and all our hopes, that this is stream of conscious and not retrieved memory -- heheh!

[dashpoet]

I confess... I do still enjoy a cigarette! Cheers Liz!

[ladyofire]

Wow...what a sultry write. Good for you, dashpoet. I would love to collaborate with you some day. How's about it?

[dashpoet]

Hey ladyofire, I'm up for that! Let's see what we can do. Good to hear from you, cheers for now, Mark.

[anglicansag]

WordMaster !

Superb. Absolutely superb.

This poem itself is an existential ride !!!!!

★ ★ ★ ★ ★

[dashpoet]

Welcome along! Thanks you!