Honeymoon

[myfamilyrocktheworld]

its creepy world out there if u dont take care of yerself.

and marrying the wrong person, its even more terrible

[ShareYourUnderwear]

What a terrible husband. I'm glad she got out of that creeps truck though.

[7trisarahtops]

basically, he sucks.

[xxrebel2uxx]

But apart from that, Wtff? Lx

[xxrebel2uxx]

Stunning photography at 10.00

[emal510]

@hany6432

This movie is shit. I should have figured this out with out your help but thank you.

[Elliotmz93]

Brilliant! At first I was considering giving this a miss because of the length but it had me on the edge of my seat all the way through, @hany6432 has some great points about the film, but what I like is the constant interpretations and judgements you're made to feel about certain people. I really liked this, thanks :)

[MyFuzzymonkey]

This is very good! It's a good interpretation of a situation you might find yourself in if you don't take care. There is a lot of bad and ugly in the world and it's do easy to get involved and trapped in it. She is this sweet innocent bride that's smitten by this handsome foreigner and shes basically fallen hard for someone she knows very very little about. Shes let her safety and innocence completely open to be hurt and ruined by this horrible man, which has left her alone and in danger on the

[hany6432]

heres my 2 cents:

1. The guy married her to get the passport 15:54

2. The place is promiscuous (kissing / transvestite / couple in car), being there suggests he was "meeting some1"

3. The couple in the car had the same color one door mercedes, he was anticipated to be in it, but he was having sex somewhere else, (hence the phone call in the car?)

4 the truck guy was trying to protect her, what he said about the people "outside" was true.

5. dropping her short of the car - he will leave her again

[xXxBigTimeChrisxXx]

sorry but i didn't really get this video

[nurani8]

the guy was mentally retarded...

[alexmurrell]

The lack of story leaves the viewer in the same position as Dawn.

[giannirigido]

good acting and effects but a horrible story!

[JElleBelleMich2C]

With who is she dancing? Is not his husband because her husband has a watch ... I really like this short movie.. it's like i'm in it ..somehow, i get all the fellings!! but it left me really depressed (and i also don't understand everything that the man of the truck says..

[tammiegoal]

I think I get it but not sure in the end the guy carries her half way to the car knowing he can't commit he leaves her half way standing wondering when he he will commit is this about commitment ?

[Geapsod]

where have he been???

[Arenicolous]

Wow, I really don't get this. The guy's an asshole... Is that it? What's going on at the end scene? Is there something to this that I'm missing, besides it being horribly depressing?

[neddysoi]

i really really love this film.

[MittensTheKittens1]

look at 1:55

maybe it'll become a little more clear

[nrgshkl093]

@MittensTheKittens1 doll!  WHY???

[SuperDevildick]

what the fuck 2/10

[therealKINDLE]

What a wanker! From the Very 1st Minute! He doesn't even know I Spy! Great Farther He'll be! And then the violent reaction when she turns the Radio off! And practically telling her to get lost for a while so he can go & ???.

And at the end of it, apart from the Fact that he left her ALL Bloody Night(!), he only carries her for a short while, & not all the way to the Car. It's as if he expects her to live in his world! The only bit I didn't get was the creep in the Truck. Was he goin2 Rape her?

[amrassaid]

Does anyone have an idea what he was saying over the phone in his language?

[henburger]

amazing. the whole scenario only makes the mistake of her marriage all the more collossal. im left with a sickening feeling, full of confusion. i feel like she would. just as i did throughout, constantly terrified.

[STRETCHYEMO]

simply amazing

[TheLizGang]

I am confused with the whole rock deal...

[kreitan9]

The plot was good but there were to many close up shots, to much blur, and the camera was a bit shaky.

[her1337ness]

heart breaking

[muercegalo]

a really good work..

[ceeryill]

I honestly don't get the whole meaning to the video, like what it was trying to portray.

[xxx86ig]

too sad

[xxx86ig]

too sad

[Whatvr]

a fuk up guy

[NyndeLOL]

so sad

[768kik]

I had stop after 1:44. Something is going to go bad...

[myfairladyxo]

ohmygoodness, my stomach was in full lurch mode from the start. I just wanted to hug the bride :( I felt like it was happening to me as I was watching this.

[gord1234ful]

honeymoon in LAS VEGAS

check out this video its your suite

WYNN SALON SUITE THE BEGINING

[sidharth0384]

I liked the Cinematography

[mwaisberg78]

very shady/dodgy guy from start.

[youbaboon]

zorane!

[LeuJinx]

i think this movie leaves a lot of people dissatisfied because there isn't any closure in the end; it leaves the viewer empty and feeling like they wasted their time.

...but then, that may have been what the director intended...

[youbaboon]

actualy, scotish gal meets apsurdity of serbian/balkans' existance. same feel you get while watching kusturica movies

[banollabarakiaty]

@LeuJinx isnt it called a cliff hanger?

[melimoon]

Wow awesome... a nice way to tell how far fears can go...

[willberain]

this is really good film.

happiness became to the despair and illusions became a nightmare. and naivety may be the worst gift when we meet the reality. I disagree with comments "nothing happens here".

[iv4000]

I don't like the plot. I waited for 30 minutes for something to happen... And it didn't...

Almost meaningless...

[flange321]

I think this could of benefited from an extra 5 minutes at the start and 10 at the end in Respect to the clarity of the story. But from what i see by the reactions at key points in the script. Bigamist may be the least of her worries.

[kevinyankee2]

and hwo did you get special permission to submit 30 mins of footage?

[cajunrory]

Start with a script. then shoot have something to say.

[NeedlessQuestion]

Poor, no real reason as to why it was half and hour long.

[profittlich]

many people here are giving this film a bad name. they obviously did not understand the movie. and callig this film anti-men is just nonsense. like one user said here before she is a puppet without a master and has a very childish, maybe even limited point of view,falling for the wrong guy ending up that miserably. and the dance scene just proves that. through the unexplained story the viewer gets an inside view of the woman's personality and is lured around the presented world. piece of art

[profittlich]

plus i forgot to mention: if you don't agree just check at 1:55

see what's there?

all thees bad comments are misplaced...i recommend watch it again and check for details

[bienienow]

@profittlich I agree with you completely. and i think this was amazing.

[sweetness306]

lol

[monipie]

she is a puppet without her master...duh!

[fokrobot]

wOw, such negative comments down here!?

imho, this is one fine piece of cinematic art, you can watch several times io. to explore alternative perspectives from different angles: there are several points of view with each character's backstory or priorities and everyone's reality or imagination makes crime / intrigues / cold feet / doubt / fear / panic / nightmare / shock / paranoia / (after) death, actually possible, hence: a great mystery !!

Emilia Fox (Cashback) is brilliant again !!!

[chicos25]

oh that's a good movie indeed!

there are indeed different points of view.. and Dawn, with a very child-like perception of surrounding world and people is having a great lot of trouble.. well everyone is different... looked as if she faced the people for the first time..

[JTProductions3]

Yeah left me a little confused. Like what the hell did her husband HAVE to do that was so important! And why was the car gone when she went back to the carpark. Like why would you leave your newlywed... Didn't make sense to me... ive seen better from futureshorts

[EllaJennifer]

I don't get it Ö

[lstealbikes]

personally this video was a waste of my 30 minutes. i was hoping the end would tie it up but no it was just really stupid. i think you could conclude the guy is a douche in less of the time

[lstealbikes]

are they smoking marijuana in the beginning? because normally people dont share cigarettes.

[Palafico3]

I get it now. Its going in a loop. He doesn't realize his mistakes, and she is still miserable.

[fragmentmondayxx]

Wow, i've never seen anything like this.

[neychev]

yeah, yeah, yeah, all men are bastards (and all women - silly romantics)

... could it be more one-way than that !? :D

[inmepete]

@dotchoo, the storyline seems a little to erratic IMO. There is to much imagery and not enough explanation.

[TheMeltingSnowman]

I get the film, but for me personally it didn't quite fit right, there was a definate uncomfortableness for the viewer, which no doubt was intended, but still, I didn't warm or sympathise with her character. Interesting, but didn't quite do it for me I'm afraid.

[radiowriter]

Some powerful scenes. Would make a great 20 min. short. Clunky metaphors (personal dislike, most films) but overall thought provoking and very edgy. Husband, lorry driver, bloke in car bonking, drunk lads - hmmm wonder if the writer has a man issue???? Well expressed if so. Overall...very good inc. Z-Cars ending (loose ends not tied up).

[Mojochi]

A bit drawn out, & leaning toward fetishist, but solid metaphors, & good performances, can't say I appreciated the cinematography though. It's too distorted, even forgiving that it was intended to convey the chaos of her situation

[gwobbasalubert]

The comments don't do this video justice. It is serious and, I think, very real in so many ways. So many unpleasant ways. At the end it's clear that this is a really tough decision for her.. she doesn't have lots to fall back on. It's real that going with this guy could look to her like her best option. Scary.

[lstealbikes]

that sucks that shes got such a week ego that she has to rely on someone

[usamimiproductions]

strange, but i liked it. was kinda dreamy the way it was edited.

[inmepete]

i was disappointed that absolutely nothing was explained at the end.. It was was of those stories that needs an ending and explanation to explain all the complexity that happened and there was nothing.. its like only publishing a book when its 90% complete.

[dotchoo]

@inmepete what explantion do you need? the guy used to get citizenship and didnt care about her andthe scene at the end symbolic, him leaving her just standing there, alone. it's simple story, really, what more do you need to know

[SolarCreed]

Well that must have takin ages to upload....

[im0mature]

It's beautiful to watch and well-acted, but the story was a right mess.

[infatuated87]

I know that this is some kind of metaphore...but I didn't get it;/ iloved the film but maybe sb knows what it really presents/stands for?

[FourthDimensionAnim]

Wonderful acting and cinematography. I got sort of confused when she saw the two people in the car making out. I got that he was supposed to look similar to her husband, but it left me half thinking it was him in that car! I was confused at times too, but overall I loved the story idea!

[putitdownslowly]

30 min. - will someone give me a summary. lol maybe I'll come back. Like'd the beginning.

[hazymat]

Focus issues.

Almost unwatchable during the lorry cab scene.

[dotchoo]

@hazymat i loved the lorry scene. so dark, i like the part where the guy's eyes are shaded and you can see every shade on her face 10 times amplified

[avrilalien]

It's not really bout the plot as it is bout Dawn's psychology

[blacktalon12]

Super weird story... He leaves her then comes back and no explanation as to what he was doing? Ughh.... Future Shorts is notorious for those types of stories I guess.

[TheKinkyShrink]

beautiful short movie.

[potatochip1]

Wow that was an amazing little film, perfect length, it literally flew by, and it had some wonderful acting and cinematography.

[egeneric]

cold feets or blackout ?

[olive1913]

a short movie should be shorter. "Juvenile" and "What's Virgin Mean" did great example, still it was a nice movie.

[bluematter08]

@olive1913 A short movie is technically anything not feature length.

[magicmike96]

the blur bugs me at certain points...

[NoirKittie]

This is why you do not rush into marriage :(

Poor Dawn.

[cargogh]

I hope she starts realizing soon that sharing the same name only means so much.  Run.

[BrittMalone14]

i wish we would find out where he went all that time

[comedyman112]

honestly i really love your work, but i just wont spend 30 minutes of my time just to watch this :|

[325minutes]

@comedyman112

Then why spend 10 secondsof your time for a comment :)

[joe83alone]

I Like it but i have some points..

I'm not a critic or anything i just like short movies:

4:00 it was raining while the guy's suit and hair are totally dry...

5:55 coffee cups are empty and she can't act drinking it...

17:40 the phone call was so stupid! no emotions nothing! she didn't even ask where is he?

20:55 what the.. ? do u call that an accident ??

25:03 " I just went to do somethings" ?? what the heck? this is so poor scene scenario!

Ending.... hmmm i dunno im just not satisfied..

[owengood29]

if the director wanted you to know where the husband was he would. hence the "i had to do some things".

she displayed no emotion on the phone because the man beside her was possibly going to rape her.

there wasn't an accident she passed out.

his hair is dry? did you touch it? how do you know exactly how long he's been outside? maybe it isn't raining...

the cup is empty? perhaps she was going for that last sip which shows she's been waiting a while. not a huge issue.

no movie has no mistakes

[jadeboo]

wow that poor girl!!!

i hope my honeymoon is nothing like that!!!

xx.

[200miles]

I didn't understand well the ending because it's a bit weird but I liked this film in general. The actress was awesome and the actor played either nice, even so nice that I would punch him for what he've made her to endured. Such an experience should make her to think once again of what sort of person her husband is. A good film & a good work.

[Kmezon2]

totally not fake

[fenixprz]

I think the fact that you really couldnt stop watching it is what made it successful. Point is mute. I couldnt look away.

[xXxXxusaxXxXx]

ugh i just watched 30 minutes of this excpecting it too come together in the end! can someone please explain his to me

[ytmachx]

She really screwed up.

[Fir3bird23]

This is why you ask questions before you tie the knot o.O

[EricRamirezRodriguez]

Par de idiotas

[slopcier]

kinda didn't make any snse till the closing scene, not in a surreal way either. and felt kinda badly made. allthough that final scene made up for everything and could possibly cut it on it's own. very powerful ending. liked it :)

[LightspeedBC]

Do people seriously need to be given a clear meaning in a film in order to appreciate it? Some people need to learn to make their own judgements and not rely on being spoon fed all the time.

[Chinaguy100]

be a bit considerate ..... im just saying +_+

[l00k4truth]

I cannot understand this short film. There are two possiblilities. Probably my English isn't enough good for translate it.

... or I'm really stupid.

[nnoott1989]

i hate this ! 5 stars !

[nambypamby34]

That was too long...

[benwilkins27]

what a load of shit!!! Some of the videos on Future Shorts are really good, have a meaning and are cleverly put together in a way to make you think about what is happening, in most cases it's about general life, this however has an unclear meaning and leaves me wondering what the message is meant to be. Apart form lorry drives being pedos, and people you think you may know, you may not know at all!!!

[benwilkins27]

Also just to add, surly there should be a deeper meaning to a film that just wasted 30 mins of revision time.

[KiranGlitch]

delayed reaction of the car crash

[nnoott1989]

it didn't crash she fainted lol!

[KiranGlitch]

i kinda guessed that

[jenniffercoco]

oh poor girl.. :(

[LeanderEve]

hmm.. i like it. maybe because of the atmosphere. I always wanted some kind of "we are meant to be together, our names are like...". For me its like a warning, cause i tend to trust the person i love very much, maybe a little too much...

[GreenMeanieUK]

like everyone else said i didn't really see the point to this film.

But i liked the lorry driver scene but wasn't to keen on the part were see nearly get's ran over.

[fishwish9]

i wasted 30 minutes...for that?

[QuietMindedMeToo]

an the point of that was...?

[Hoppskotch]

Couldn't enjoy it because I couldn't understand it. Maybe its better for women who can identify with the character. But maybe I'm just dumb as well.

[invaderpink]

nope im a women i have nooo idea what just happened LOL but i liked it spet for the end

[Hoppskotch]

what did you like about it? I was 100% confused :P

[invaderpink]

i liked the dress and the creepy guy lol

[MorganStack]

Excuse me but what on earth was the point of this film? I sat through every minute expecting that it would all come together by the end but it didn't. It seemingly has no message or overlying issue. The only thing I can gather from it is that people are rotten. I really hated the bridesmaid. The film revolves around her belief that marriage is pure, but at the same time she hasn't even established a basic trust with her husband

[MorganStack]

@MorganStack If she is in this situation why doesn't she gather her emotions and tackle the issue. Another thing that really irritates me is her blatant staring. You can't just stare at people like that. That is not right.

[jenniffercoco]

why are you replying to yourslef?

[CensoredSubmarine]

@MorganStack I believe that the film showed everything that a couple go through before deciding to get married and all the doubt that comes with it (e.g. a stag night which was represented by the drunken men) in one night after the decision had been made and maybe it was her reflecting on the whole ordeal. Also I believe it explored the concept of abandonment and what people will do in those situations, but thats just my opinion.

[MorganStack]

Perfectly entitled to your opinion. I probably forced upon my own opinion too heavily.

[JoeCubicle]

I didn't fall in love with it and at the same time It was watchable. I fast forwarded through a few parts that were too long. I watched it in 18 minutes. One thing the piece did really well for me was put me there in the moment. There were some very tense moments that were very tangible. These moments could have been achieved in a wee bit shorter time, perhaps a re-edit would move things along. It was weird and I was left without closure, I've watched worse.

[jcSoco]

no comment!!

[olizk]

The plot is poor, uninteresting. Also, some of the shots are purely done just to satisfy, perhaps the director or someother amerture video maker's excitment of having a 5d mkii.

Waiting for every line to be delivered wassuch a pain, on top of that, very few lines actually helped to develop the story as it was progressing.

The acting was good.

Just poor script , poor directing.

[Casadorperfect]

@olizk for the first time... I agree with this kind of comment. I do not think this is interesting and YES I did watched the entire video. 30 minute's long.

I don't really got the point and on top of that what are you suppose to think after seeing this?

the scripts are just too poor like olizk said.

[olizk]

thanks ! Im glad we agreed

[GammaRazor]

To the 1st posters, Yall haven't even watched the full thing yet, ^_^

[pappestiel]

@GammaRazor lol