Preciate the comments. I like to hear criticism that's the only way to get better. And yes I actually did freestyle this, Alot of people lie and pre-think or write. I will upload something I'm working on. I wrote the verse and I put some complicated metaphors in there that some people will probably miss.
Dunno why everybody is talkn shit for . the song has good beat and sound and I think you got a good rap and your voice stands out .instead of soundn like every body else . so thats good ... . guess people are hateing cause there mad that you have a talent none of them have
This shit is iight,you need 2 come hard,im from da south so i feel ya,but come harder. Keep doin ya thing though,u sound like titty boy form playas circle,come wit ur own voice. Keep it goin though.
i understand that u r influenced by wayne, n therefore i believe u tried to sound like him....but idk wats wrong wit ur voice, and try to sound more complex wit ur words....ur lyrics were cheesy n not much going on. i like the beat, it was ok. keep doing ur thing tho.
truthfully, this is a good track. the beat needs work. it sounds really cheezy. good flow. just like a couple others said, you put a little too much emphasis on the words you use. if this is really a freestyle, then you have a real future. if its not, then i would give it like a 7 out of 10. that means you are better than plies or birdman. id give them a 3 of 10. i really like the sound of 3:25-4:00
I think da flo is kool.Dont think ur emphazing 2much i think that was dun purposefully 2 rip this beat.I myself flo and i say u flowing better then alot of these garbage rappers that are backed by these corporate labels.So keep doin ur thing.
pretty good make me think of weezy a bit but something in the voice is strange but i think that its just the thing ur using to record that do that. but keep working its nice
a really really upgraded version of lil wayne.
spiderman7889 2 years ago
Preciate the comments. I like to hear criticism that's the only way to get better. And yes I actually did freestyle this, Alot of people lie and pre-think or write. I will upload something I'm working on. I wrote the verse and I put some complicated metaphors in there that some people will probably miss.
bhagans 3 years ago
Dunno why everybody is talkn shit for . the song has good beat and sound and I think you got a good rap and your voice stands out .instead of soundn like every body else . so thats good ... . guess people are hateing cause there mad that you have a talent none of them have
punker833 3 years ago 2
This shit is iight,you need 2 come hard,im from da south so i feel ya,but come harder. Keep doin ya thing though,u sound like titty boy form playas circle,come wit ur own voice. Keep it goin though.
Deron3003 3 years ago 3
i understand that u r influenced by wayne, n therefore i believe u tried to sound like him....but idk wats wrong wit ur voice, and try to sound more complex wit ur words....ur lyrics were cheesy n not much going on. i like the beat, it was ok. keep doing ur thing tho.
robbbyyy25 3 years ago 2
truthfully, this is a good track. the beat needs work. it sounds really cheezy. good flow. just like a couple others said, you put a little too much emphasis on the words you use. if this is really a freestyle, then you have a real future. if its not, then i would give it like a 7 out of 10. that means you are better than plies or birdman. id give them a 3 of 10. i really like the sound of 3:25-4:00
chunkolard 3 years ago 2
I think da flo is kool.Dont think ur emphazing 2much i think that was dun purposefully 2 rip this beat.I myself flo and i say u flowing better then alot of these garbage rappers that are backed by these corporate labels.So keep doin ur thing.
2true2real 3 years ago 2
pretty good make me think of weezy a bit but something in the voice is strange but i think that its just the thing ur using to record that do that. but keep working its nice
SomeoneTakeMyIdea 3 years ago 2
lyrics are nice
keep workin on it but try complexity for a change. more complicated similes and metaphors
Mixarrow is right, change ya voice.
eraContraband 3 years ago 2
You are ok.. I dunno about your voice but lyrics are str8..
Mixarrow 3 years ago 2
shit
maxjoin 3 years ago 2
I don't really like the beat and you over-emphasize your words a lil too much, other than that it was really good.
Flamazide 3 years ago
I don't really like the beat and you over-emphasize your words a lil too much, other than that it was really good.
Flamazide 3 years ago
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you are bad.
bryan3184 3 years ago 4
FIRE!!
belld06 3 years ago
FIRE!!
belld06 3 years ago