TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE your instruments. You were a little off the whole time, especially at the beginning. Also, work on your bends. Be a little more aggressive in that department. A lot of your bends were pretty flat. Anyway, if you're looking to start a band, and you'll be in the Houston or the Seattle area within the next year, I'm down. I love metal.
Let's be real, would you buy a CD of a band named NShark? haha it's just a name I've used forever. But thanks for the compliments! Only problem is not too many of my friends play instruments and definitely not metal. :(
@Nshark I know how you feel I play lead guitar and I want to play metal but my rhythm guitar likes punk the drummer like country and bitches alot we cant find a bass so I might just leave my current band to join a metal band that offered me but they're in another town idk what to do ha
Wow... that was good. Start a band with some buddies that you are comfortable playing with. You are very skillful. Try to find some other dudes to compose more songs with. It would probably get more creative and awesome. Seems like you got much to offer.
This is far most a very awesome job. I wrote a comment but don't know what happened to it @_@ Anyways, you're very talented man. For a first try this is good. I'm not a pro or anything but I enjoy listening to music enough to be able to comment on it XD Can't wait for longer stuff. It's cause of vids like these that I want to quit college and just live of my guitar... from day to day getting better and better eventually getting somewhere.
I can say this is auctially a Very good solo project, Espically for a first time.
I would reccmond if you want this song to really have a good fire toit, Dont be afraid to hit some higher notes with the lead guitar, You seem like your hesitateing alot and its giving the song a slightly grainey feel.
Im not telling you to change your style or nothing, But try recording it and see what your comfortable with! Test the waters baby!
Wow, that was intense man, you are a freaking beast man. If I were you, I would definetly think about starting or joining a band, cause man, that was sick.
Great job dude! There are a few things that could have been done a little better, but the main thing that sticks out to me is the ending doesn't feel like it has any strong sense of finality. All it needs is a cadence (an perfect authentic will work well...sorry about the music theory bable...)and it'll fix it right up. Again, good job!
Yea, I don't have a bass guitar and I have never played a bass, I'm sure it's not that hard but I didn't really want to invest the time to create one w/out really having a bass guitar to do it with.
:52 is a massive ear-gasm
cdewd 2 years ago
It´s not bad, but the drums are too easy. You know, what I mean. I´d appreciate more original drums. But still good ;o)
khundar 2 years ago
The only thing missing is a bass guitar. Otherwise awesome work. Well done =D
BMNicolas 2 years ago
wow this is your own.. didnt read the description nice job dude very catchy. metal =D
iadeftones 2 years ago
Awesome just work on your bends that seems like the biggest problem.But it's not that big of an issue because only a couple bends were off.
ibanezjem224 2 years ago
lol how can you know whether the bends are off, he is the one who created them
JohnRollos 2 years ago
Biggest tip I can give you:
TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE TUNE your instruments. You were a little off the whole time, especially at the beginning. Also, work on your bends. Be a little more aggressive in that department. A lot of your bends were pretty flat. Anyway, if you're looking to start a band, and you'll be in the Houston or the Seattle area within the next year, I'm down. I love metal.
Stacy420 3 years ago 3
You're to good for youtube dude!
Start a band and find some people who want to help you to the top!
Call your band:
"NShark" :P
zalom1modur 3 years ago 2
Let's be real, would you buy a CD of a band named NShark? haha it's just a name I've used forever. But thanks for the compliments! Only problem is not too many of my friends play instruments and definitely not metal. :(
Nshark 3 years ago
No thanks, I would buy a CD with that name :)
If you hear the band names lately... NShark doesn't sound too bad.
It's a pity that you don't have metal loving friends.
Keep up the good work anyway!
zalom1modur 3 years ago
@Nshark I know how you feel I play lead guitar and I want to play metal but my rhythm guitar likes punk the drummer like country and bitches alot we cant find a bass so I might just leave my current band to join a metal band that offered me but they're in another town idk what to do ha
relyin99 1 year ago
Wow... that was good. Start a band with some buddies that you are comfortable playing with. You are very skillful. Try to find some other dudes to compose more songs with. It would probably get more creative and awesome. Seems like you got much to offer.
Best of luck...
Metamorph1c 3 years ago
nice work dude... i actually prefered this to your covers(not saying they aren't good)
nice way to make standard tuning sound heavy too
5yNN 3 years ago
This is far most a very awesome job. I wrote a comment but don't know what happened to it @_@ Anyways, you're very talented man. For a first try this is good. I'm not a pro or anything but I enjoy listening to music enough to be able to comment on it XD Can't wait for longer stuff. It's cause of vids like these that I want to quit college and just live of my guitar... from day to day getting better and better eventually getting somewhere.
Take care!
Magnak 3 years ago
If you had a CD I'de buy it man! Keep do the all original stuff, and be sure to trade mark it man! Kudos!
wocathoden 3 years ago
I really appreciate the compliment, thank you!
Nshark 3 years ago
What tuning do you use bro?
Dethfollowsdethklok 3 years ago
Standard tuning man.
Nshark 3 years ago
This shits good bro, I showed one of my buddies and he had a grin the entire time.
Dethfollowsdethklok 3 years ago
What amp do you use?
350ovalado 3 years ago
I've got to say I really liked that! The 0:50 and 1:25 parts totally kicked my ass ;) Keep it going!
p0nek 3 years ago
Yo man I totally agree, it does rock!
zeynuzok 3 years ago
this was good. What kind of guitar and pickups were you using
metallidethzg 3 years ago
I can say this is auctially a Very good solo project, Espically for a first time.
I would reccmond if you want this song to really have a good fire toit, Dont be afraid to hit some higher notes with the lead guitar, You seem like your hesitateing alot and its giving the song a slightly grainey feel.
Im not telling you to change your style or nothing, But try recording it and see what your comfortable with! Test the waters baby!
TheLittleCuteThing 3 years ago
did you use real drums or a drum machine? either way that was brutal!
Madres92 3 years ago
Wow, that was intense man, you are a freaking beast man. If I were you, I would definetly think about starting or joining a band, cause man, that was sick.
sephirothhater 3 years ago
Great job dude! There are a few things that could have been done a little better, but the main thing that sticks out to me is the ending doesn't feel like it has any strong sense of finality. All it needs is a cadence (an perfect authentic will work well...sorry about the music theory bable...)and it'll fix it right up. Again, good job!
Jimmytuba08 4 years ago
pretty nice, I liked... the uh... scale part th ebest :D
VincentVolaju 4 years ago
man this is so cool you should totally send me a copy of the tabs for this!!!
ryanbowls 4 years ago
Message me with your email and I will
Nshark 4 years ago
It sounded ok but you should probably practise your vibrato.
chimpshred 4 years ago
maaaaan that was sick, youve got serious skills...ok start a band....keep it up bro
Neoclassicalmaese 4 years ago
now that was tight man u should start a band!
godsuxass 4 years ago
that's hot bro, glad to see how far you've come. Hah, I remember when we were playing enter sandman :P
W3prodigy 4 years ago
BRUTAL SHIT!!!
krasz138 4 years ago
This is beautiful...
max60wattss 4 years ago
Youre right
max60wattss 3 years ago
ROCK!
OfcrFarva 4 years ago
that was great, very nice sound to it. just a question, where did you get the drum line?
deepfryer7 4 years ago
I made it myself. I have never made drums before so it was really tough to tab out in guitar pro.
Nshark 4 years ago
are they real drums, or synthetic drums? (as in studio software or something else on the cpu)
deepfryer7 4 years ago
MIDI sounds from guitar pro haha.
Nshark 4 years ago
dude that was awesome, but i didn't hear any bass, if u could write a good bass part i think that ot would make the song even better
cdewd 4 years ago
Yea, I don't have a bass guitar and I have never played a bass, I'm sure it's not that hard but I didn't really want to invest the time to create one w/out really having a bass guitar to do it with.
Nshark 4 years ago
thats pretty amazing dude, ur good at covers, but this takes the lead for best video from you so far, do more of this!!
beanmargera 4 years ago
really good, abitious, I love the ending riff ;) keep it going!
p0nek 4 years ago
That was great! i really loved it, can you give me a tabature and a mp3 of it please?
IcyPick 4 years ago
Just send me a message with your email and I'll send it to you.
Nshark 4 years ago
I like it. I'd put it on my ipod. is there an mp3?
SuperDUPERGary 4 years ago
Yea, just send me a message with your email in it and remind me what mp3 you're requesting
Nshark 4 years ago
ill post somethin of mine soon you gotta check it out k? maybe within the next couple days.. But yours is sicker I already know
antitexx 4 years ago
thanks, just send me a message with the link.
Nshark 4 years ago
Dude Its way good!! Keep Writing you did really good with the leads.. It sounds so brutal right after 0:53.. Again Please Write More!!
antitexx 4 years ago
sounds like trivium, but better
panteraslayer666 4 years ago
absolutely amazing man, keep it up.
Angel0fDespair 4 years ago
Nicely done man turned out great dude ;)
callamanster 4 years ago
Thanks man, and thanks a lot for your help with that one part too.
Nshark 4 years ago
wow i must say that was excellent ive been writing a couple of songs my self that i think sound good but nothing of this calibur this was the shit
cheffboyardee123 4 years ago