(Also somewhat contradictory if you think about it: If you have such a clarity and control over your emotions, than they are not so overwhelming right?) Most of the time, we can not really voice are deep seated emotions with great precision, it eludes us too much for that, that's why the text message was somewhat dissonnant, or artificial here, compare with the other.
Overall still an excellent, and surprisingly high level of work.
mmmm, i see what youre saying...I just learned how to make text move like that (now that im using premier pro) and i thought it looked better, and i changed the words up a bit so they made a little more sense...but thanks for the advice, its GREAT to hear from you again !!
The differences from the original one are intriguing to me. I liked the added shots, such as the one, when the subject walks away from the camera. (0:37-0:40 sec.) That is really a strongly emotional one, underlying the main theme of heartbroken, poignant feelings. Personally, I preferred the text messages on the first video better. It was vaguer, more enigmatic. Here on the second one, I felt it was too direct and thus somewhat didactic.
(Also somewhat contradictory if you think about it: If you have such a clarity and control over your emotions, than they are not so overwhelming right?) Most of the time, we can not really voice are deep seated emotions with great precision, it eludes us too much for that, that's why the text message was somewhat dissonnant, or artificial here, compare with the other.
Overall still an excellent, and surprisingly high level of work.
wotan20 5 years ago
mmmm, i see what youre saying...I just learned how to make text move like that (now that im using premier pro) and i thought it looked better, and i changed the words up a bit so they made a little more sense...but thanks for the advice, its GREAT to hear from you again !!
kylerichards33 5 years ago
The differences from the original one are intriguing to me. I liked the added shots, such as the one, when the subject walks away from the camera. (0:37-0:40 sec.) That is really a strongly emotional one, underlying the main theme of heartbroken, poignant feelings. Personally, I preferred the text messages on the first video better. It was vaguer, more enigmatic. Here on the second one, I felt it was too direct and thus somewhat didactic.
wotan20 5 years ago