WOW. this is amazing. so strange to think it was only a few years ago I was helping you out with your short films, you've come such a long way since then. so proud :D Kerry xxx
i liked how it didn't have any diologe it allowes the viwers to come up with their own story eventhough we all get the idea of the short film....good job i loved it and it portrays lots of emotions.
I like the idea. When a spouse dies in a marriage and they are old/retired people, it's common that the one left behind dies shortly after. Not suicide though...
GAH! I can't get my comment to post.... Anyways, I liked what you had, there was nothing wrong with it, it just could use a bit more story if you remake it. As for the bird, I didn't even notice it until someone mentioned it in the comments. I say keep it in, it's a natural sound to be there.
Hm.. I think the story that you have going on is pretty interesting.
While watching the video though, I found that the random bird chirping kind of distracted a bit from the sort of seriousness that was there. Maybe have an instrumental background, and darken the colors to show sort of the "degeneration with age"?
Of course.. I'm just the random youtube person commenting on this video, and you guys are the ones that ultimately get to decide. Love the concept though. xP
Well.. I agree that the bird chirping sounded real, but considering how almost silent the part on the train was, having the bird chirps coming in loudly just sounded sort of out of place (to me, at least).
wow, really well done, but when the title pops up in the movie, make it halfway come up when half the screen is dark from the shadow of the bridge, and then the other half of the title comes up as the clip fades.
the ending does not teach anything. sure its possible but we dont want movies that are realistic thats what real life is for. we want movies that show what we should strive for. but i respect your choices anyway.
neoknux009 - valid point, but i'm used to writing and directing films that are effusive and/or hyperreal exaggerations of reality ('how to say i love you' & 'olivia explorer' as examples) but loneliness (especially through old age) is a subject that really affects and touches me, and sometimes you just can't turn a subject so sad in to a film with a happy ending. that's just my decision for this film, but thanks for your opinion.
hayley! i love you. <3 we're waiting in the airport for a flight to république tchèque, there are some boys we met from uk who are watching your films with us now. val says salut. voyez-vous dans l'espoir auguste d'I. xox
WOW. this is amazing. so strange to think it was only a few years ago I was helping you out with your short films, you've come such a long way since then. so proud :D Kerry xxx
minx261 1 year ago
that was good
luvcomedy123 1 year ago
so beautiful
lebloobloo 2 years ago
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Did he die? :O
DJTrancestar100 2 years ago
powerful stuff
thorinkyle 2 years ago
wow..BRILLIANT.
letsdance33904 2 years ago
Wonderful film.
backbendz 2 years ago
Another film to make you think. You are all quite talented.
KindaJustMe 2 years ago
exceptional yet again. So bittersweet.
Alot of talent to be found here.
Well done, (:
sugarjunkiie 2 years ago
amazing job as always
beedanger327 2 years ago
All of your films seem to have really low volume. Does it have to do with the camera?
doodlehh 2 years ago
Interesting
Neenja324 2 years ago
absolutely exceptional film. short but to the point, and brilliant. i love you guys. you have so much talent.
xoxAshh137 2 years ago
Beautiful and sad. You are very talented film makers.
ghostwritten87 2 years ago 2
Great cinematography.
tobeanastronaut 2 years ago
Wow! Great film. Very sad. Could have used some music.. but really well shot!
ranger7theseries 2 years ago
:( thats so sad.
superfunnydove 2 years ago
Goodbye...
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QueenLanaofSheba 2 years ago
I believe Eddie Dylan is about to reunite himself with his late wife... :)
avalonwings16 2 years ago
i liked how it didn't have any diologe it allowes the viwers to come up with their own story eventhough we all get the idea of the short film....good job i loved it and it portrays lots of emotions.
Froggirl20260 2 years ago
why was this re-uploaded again?
piggyotoSUSHI 2 years ago
wow,... that's sweet and sad to, even though the man was speechless it speaks through the heart it made me cry inside
yaizeerox28 2 years ago
I like the idea. When a spouse dies in a marriage and they are old/retired people, it's common that the one left behind dies shortly after. Not suicide though...
tsjoencinema 2 years ago
very sad. very sweet. good job !
sheegybobeegie 2 years ago
GAH! I can't get my comment to post.... Anyways, I liked what you had, there was nothing wrong with it, it just could use a bit more story if you remake it. As for the bird, I didn't even notice it until someone mentioned it in the comments. I say keep it in, it's a natural sound to be there.
BrettAllbritton 2 years ago
Hm.. I think the story that you have going on is pretty interesting.
While watching the video though, I found that the random bird chirping kind of distracted a bit from the sort of seriousness that was there. Maybe have an instrumental background, and darken the colors to show sort of the "degeneration with age"?
Of course.. I'm just the random youtube person commenting on this video, and you guys are the ones that ultimately get to decide. Love the concept though. xP
FromOverTheRainbow 2 years ago
I disagree i liked the bird chirping, its real.
DoctorDesu 2 years ago
Well.. I agree that the bird chirping sounded real, but considering how almost silent the part on the train was, having the bird chirps coming in loudly just sounded sort of out of place (to me, at least).
FromOverTheRainbow 2 years ago
wow, really well done, but when the title pops up in the movie, make it halfway come up when half the screen is dark from the shadow of the bridge, and then the other half of the title comes up as the clip fades.
just a suggestion
blah22322 2 years ago
ruined
vypermansbro 2 years ago
the ending does not teach anything. sure its possible but we dont want movies that are realistic thats what real life is for. we want movies that show what we should strive for. but i respect your choices anyway.
neoknux009 2 years ago
neoknux009 - valid point, but i'm used to writing and directing films that are effusive and/or hyperreal exaggerations of reality ('how to say i love you' & 'olivia explorer' as examples) but loneliness (especially through old age) is a subject that really affects and touches me, and sometimes you just can't turn a subject so sad in to a film with a happy ending. that's just my decision for this film, but thanks for your opinion.
- hayley stuart.
pretendwedontexist 2 years ago 2
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The ending ruined it. Only cowards commit suicide. No matter what the reason.
noir41 2 years ago
it's beautiful :) I wanted you guys to post it sooner so I could put it into my faves. :) Nice.
789456Anita 2 years ago
that was great! only the ending depressed me ]:
amaislegendx3 2 years ago
really nicely done. i loved it. :D
gogabbygo 2 years ago
Nicely made!
christinespage 2 years ago
This was great .
ghostofjamie 2 years ago
Superb!
PerthPete1 2 years ago
that was great!
debalinn 2 years ago
I loved this, but I didn't like how it implied that he would then jump from the bridge.
legalass17 2 years ago
wth? You ruined it! I didn't even start watching it (I was waiting for it to load, scrolled down and saw this comment) Thanks a lot.
cheezitrule 2 years ago
stupéfier. beau. tragique.
hayley! i love you. <3 we're waiting in the airport for a flight to république tchèque, there are some boys we met from uk who are watching your films with us now. val says salut. voyez-vous dans l'espoir auguste d'I. xox
somemachines 2 years ago
Hayley you never fail to amaze me. (That rhymed.)
You and Francesca work very well together, you should treasure your friendship.
I'll probably see you both tomorrow at your film screening. Is it at 7pm? If the time alters text me.
Noah. x
NoahJoa 2 years ago
This is really great. Captures the feeling entirely.
clumsy0ninja 2 years ago
Very nice, especially in three days!
peesemould 2 years ago
I liked it
RaynTheOldManJenkins 2 years ago
Stunning locations, vibrant colors, tragic story and remarkable for three days work. Well done once again pretend we dont exist productions! x
IwasGone 2 years ago
me likey
0justBETHANY 2 years ago
fantastic 5* =)
ukp42 2 years ago
Is heartbreaking! Beautifully made shots and story especially within ONLY 3 days!!!!! Great acting!
Middlebutton 2 years ago
Nice
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pieopolis2424 2 years ago