Vudu Kat & KarmaLoopCodes' New Era Rap contest - Butters

[CRUSH3Rdlux]

The flow is interesting; every time ya think there wont be a rhyme, a rhyme appears. El oh el

My only advice here would be to make sure you vary the way you step into a line. You have kind of a mono-toned sound throughout the whole thing. It was good lyrically, and quality was great. Don't worry about auto-tune or anything like that, solid quality is all you genuinely need, and you've got that.

Good entry, brother.

[vudukatacomb]

Very nice entry and nice vocal quality. I wasn't feelin all of your lyrics, but that's a matter of opinion to be honest.

My honest opinion would be to avoid using the word 'fag' or anything that can be misconstrued as hateful in your lyrics, unless you are directing them at a specific individual.

Keep it up and in a few years you'll be right in the mix with the best at your age!

vudu kat

[dasheepslaya]

@vudukatacomb i'll keep that in mind, thankyou for the advice it means alot.

[theapolloone]

not bad man good luck on the contest keep it up!

[samwise327]

haha not bad william

[GabyThinkPositive]

tight bro holla at my entry when you get a Chance!

[EmceePluto24]

you can flow pretty well man! thumbs up! and at 16?! niice, keep it up! peep mine when ya get the chance bro=)

[tjnovak27]

Nice