Love Comes A Jonas Brothers Love Story Chapter 9 Part 1

[lolaemogirl123]

wut ish this song called

[bubblesrock19]

Erica: Your not going to tell me are you?

Joe: No.

Erica: Fine

Joe tries to kiss Erica. But she puts her hand up

Erica: Nuh-Uh. You don't talk. You can't kiss

Joe: But-

Erica: No Buts.

Joe crosses his arm over his chest

hahahahah that was seriously funny poor joe i'll kiss you!!

[Jobrosarehott21]

Haha. Awesome chapter! Do you read my stories? Just wondering. If not go ahead and check them out if you have time. Danke!

[PeaceLoveJonas1000]

yeah i do read your Fanfic great job!

[PeaceLoveJonas1000]

Stop giving ExtraOrdinaryFamily hell! It's an honest mistake!

[joejonasluva83]

GREAT STORY!!!

[poly820]

haha i like pluto, its my fave planet/moon haha

[JBFanTrish07]

omg I love Nick and Lola. Their so cute, their sarcasm and pluto talks. lol

Erica and Joe were pretty funny in that chapter 2. lol

[soccerchic1234]

ExtraOrdinaryFamily, what is YOUR point?

[ExtraOrdinaryFamily]

didnt really have a point.

but,

i was corrected if the parents say its fine then its leagle.

but then again,

its fanfiction.

i was just simply bringing up on what i had my own fault,

and again,

i was corrected.

[ExtraOrdinaryFamily]

how old are the jonas brothers because kevins like 21 or so and shes 17 and thats ileagle to date someone under 18 if your over 18.

kool story though.

[JONASinger3000]

uh no its not!!!!!!!!!

[ExtraOrdinaryFamily]

instead of making an effort to say i'm wrong,

JONA Singer3000,

Try and correct me nicley.

hey then i would know somthing new.

[rachelxojonassxo]

yeah it is; he'd be considered a pedophile or something. in order for them to date, she'd have to wait until she's 18 for it to be legal. BUT! it's just a story so its the author's decision. :]

[joejonasluva83]

no, its illegal to have sexual activity. not dating. dating is fine, just no , well u get the point. lol.

[ExtraOrdinaryFamily]

oh ok, thankyou for setting me straight,

BTW for who ever thumbed my down,

i didn't mean to insult the story, or author,

its a good story.

[nickjonas612]

lol "its not pluto. theres a dwarf planet too!"

[xxturtles4lifexx]

and the dwarf planet too! is there such a thing? i thought she was being sarcastic lol

[jonasbrotherlovers40]

i went on ur profile and i think ur a joe fan

well i love ur vidoes make more

LOVE STAR

[PeaceLoveJonas1000]

yea how did you guess jk. jk. thanks

[MrsNickJonasIsHereHJ]

lol Pluto. I thought that the scientists declared that it wasn't a planet anymore last year... or was it this year... or did they even say it... O_O Wow I have bad memory problems! xD Cant wait for the next chapter!