Jonathan Day - Short Film

[crawfordsjamie]

that's some talent right there.

[killert00thbrush]

It's interesting looking back on it. My stuff now is so much better. But I was proud of it at the time. =P

[SuccessBelongsToYou]

Leuke

I've viewed many short films.

This one is amongst the best 1%.

You have a special Gift for The Creative.

Thanks for sharing your Gift with us.

SuccessBelongsToYou

KenLittle

PS

You& Johnathan Livingstone Seagull

would make great friends.

[killert00thbrush]

I'm really glad you liked it! =) I look back on it now and see all the flaws that I'd like to fix, but it's nice to hear people still like it.

[LinksYouthMorwell]

that is awesome.

in a way.. its touching.. comedic.. and real.

a brilliant mixture of humour and realism.

good work.

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks a lot! =)

[HamatoKameko]

Lovely. :)

[killert00thbrush]

=) Glad you liked it.

[ifte990111]

Refreshing....good hope to see more work of u...

[killert00thbrush]

=D Thank you!

[ElizaB156]

which beach in australia is that?

it looks really pretty.

[killert00thbrush]

Tassie. =)

[jiujitsumac619]

how long that take to make?

[killert00thbrush]

A couple of days filming, and a few days editing.

[woo2hoo2u2]

Very beautiful! And very relaxing! Came across your videos by accident, but it's been fun watching them! You are very talented!

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks! +=) I'm really glad you like them.

[AustralianHalo]

Nice, what grade did you get at school for this? :O

[killert00thbrush]

An A. =)

[mashroom1993]

Sry for the posts, it wasnt intentionally.

Thats a real masterpiece.

it has touched me deeply.

PS: What has this to do with HArry Potter?

[killert00thbrush]

Glad you liked it. =)

Ahh... nothing?

[tenten313]

awesomeness...i watched alot of your videos today...i found you while looking at my friend's page. no im not a stalker. it was maraneo's page. maybe you know him. anyways. HI

[killert00thbrush]

=D Sweet. Glad you liked them.

[tenten313]

^_^

[ClicErechim]

Take a look: Isle of Flowers (Jorger Furtado, 1989)

This is the Short Filme with English Version.

[ClicErechim]

Wow! This short movie is a masterpiece. You could win a lot of international awards with it. Seriously! Congratulations!

[killert00thbrush]

haha, don't know if it's that good. Glad you liked it though. =)

[ClicErechim]

Oh, it is, my friend! It is! I read the Richard Bach's Jonathan Livingston Seagull History once and I loved, even it was so mellow yellow in that time. Here in Brazil a group of young guys produced a short film in the end of the 80's who won a lot of prizes around the world with a simple idea like this yours...

[killert00thbrush]

sounds great. =)

I love that book.

[R0W3Y44]

i must say man this is truely amazing stuff. Its really passionate to ur video work. Although its not edited to look all snappy it rely does give it a soft sad feeling i think u got an A on that video for school

I give it a 10/10!

O yea AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE!

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks a lot. =) Really glad you liked it.

[paris101pinky]

aww this was sad =( lol

[killert00thbrush]

Not too sad I hope!

[paris101pinky]

not that sort of sad, its touching :P

[rpalmer92]

Epic short film.

[killert00thbrush]

^^ Thanks very much!

[Ghost77Riders]

I added this video to my site Ghost77Riders. Love this video! GR77 of Canada

[killert00thbrush]

Ahh, cheers!

[Ghost77Riders]

Great video! I wish you were here to create some great vid's for me! GR77 Alberta Canada

[Aussie26846]

brilliant!!

[killert00thbrush]

Cheers! =D

[toplimbo]

sorry, had to watch this again.

its hilarious.

the timing of the narrating is spot on.

Whenever i think my life is tuff, i'll just think of jonathan day.

[killert00thbrush]

=) hehe, glad you like it that much.

[Ghost77Riders]

Great video! I must tour ""A"" some time soon! GR77 of Alberta Canada

[killert00thbrush]

=D Thanks very much!

[toplimbo]

haha, nice video.

was this inspired by Jonathan Livingston Seagull by any chance?

[killert00thbrush]

Cheers.

I wasn't thinking of it when i came up with the idea, but I have read it. =)

[moiwmee]

Your voice is sooo sexyy

[killert00thbrush]

=P haha

[famousactors2be]

man , that was great , your my insparation...xox

[killert00thbrush]

Aww, thanks. ^^

[katums141]

its nice... it sorta.. reminds me of stuff.. I enjoyed it heaps! Bravo!

[killert00thbrush]

As long as you enjoyed it. =) hehe

[vincejoneslive]

Good shizzat

[killert00thbrush]

=) Ta.

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks. =D

[sarahsum1]

I really enjoyed this, very well done :-)

[killert00thbrush]

=] hehe, thanks a lot.

[kirsten0894]

great work

your a good narrator

but i got a bit bored from it toward the end

but other than that sweet

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks very much.

Yeah, it had to be as close to 5 minutes as I could get it for school, but if it hadn't been for that i probably would have cut a minute off. =)

[DoUBeliveNRockNRoll]

absolutely amazing.

i really loved how 'Jonathan Day' was wearing all white...like a seagull, it really set the mood. lol

[killert00thbrush]

Yeah, glad that got across.

[princessme813]

this is so good, I love the music in the background, goes so well.

THis is azmazing

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks a lot! =)

[RHCPelmo]

aww this is a beautiful video

well donee

[killert00thbrush]

=P Thanks a lot! hehe

[ChristyG42]

wow. amazing.

i had goosebumps and almost cried...

you're an awesome narrator too.

[killert00thbrush]

That's quite intense! =)

[inlovewiththeboosh]

aww this is amazing tbh

made me go ^-^ and :)

and i loves your accent too

and i agree with itscheeweetv it is artistic

[killert00thbrush]

hehe, thanks very much! =D

[CostaSusana]

You bet I enjoyed it!!

It was so peaceful.

You put another smile on my face =)

I wish I had counted all the times you made me smile since I first began watching your videos =)

Susana

[killert00thbrush]

Smiles are great. =) I'm glad I've given some.

[lucysaysrelax]

this is amazing

[killert00thbrush]

Thank you very much. ^^

[StylidiumLane]

I think I am a seagull too

[killert00thbrush]

=O Really?

[StylidiumLane]

Yep, I love to fly & be near the ocean. I featured this on my channel too btw.

[musicmusic1]

first i thought u said a seeker from harry potter :P

but then i realised a seagull

its a beautiful, love ittttttt & the music is gorjuzz

[killert00thbrush]

lol, harry potter. =P

Glad you liked it.

[kiwicrash3]

To Awesomeness

[killert00thbrush]

lol =P

[elemenow]

hillarious. reminds me a little of 'wayne anderson - singer of songs'.

you should check out some of nanalew's mocumentaries.

[killert00thbrush]

=) Glad you liked it.

[vaishnavi7780]

dudee...thats gifted artistic

[killert00thbrush]

=] Thanks very much.

[cboy400]

single muslim ?

[killert00thbrush]

If only we could chose the ads. =P lol

[Tracie0Wicetend]

The poster is duping people into thinking it's him, it's not. Video is childishly edited. Choppy. And boring. Rated poor.

[killert00thbrush]

If you read the credits, it says pretty clearly that I'm not the actor. =)

Thanks for the feed back, could you tell me how you think it would be improved? I'm not sure if you've done any editing work before, but if you have I'd love to hear some more details on how you'd improve it. =)

[DoubleDareLike]

The video is awesome. You are awesome. Thank You.

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks a lot! =P

[ThinkFastBoom93]

wow this is so amazing :0 so artistic in it's own way

very beautiful film of yours (:

[killert00thbrush]

=D Thanks very much!

[XxSweetRevenge19xX]

That was amazing!!!!

I loved it, Leuke!!

Good job. ^^

:D

[killert00thbrush]

Glad you liked it! =)

[itscheeweetv]

wow... amazing... let's call that let's see... a masterpiece? :)

[killert00thbrush]

^^ Maybe going a tad far, but thank you.

[itscheeweetv]

haha yea well... if you do this stuff for fun or for school you can call it like that i.. guess? anyway... if u think it's a bit to far... let's call it... artistic? :)

[kilterdude]

You have an uncommon elegance in your voice, not just the sound of your voice but with how you position words. It is an art, and you are talented at it.

[killert00thbrush]

Aww, ^^ Thanks a lot! That's really nice of you. =)

[BubblyEmily2212]

Lolz i know i have commented on a few of ur videos , but u have such a great way with words its amazing =]

[killert00thbrush]

=D It's cool! Comment away.

[killert00thbrush]

=D hehe, thanks very much!

[z1234567890abc]

This is a comment just because ........

All the darkness in the world could not put out the light of one small candle.

And as if by magic,

Thousands of candles can be lit from a single candle.

Yet the life of the candle will not be shortened.

Happiness never decreases by being shared

[killert00thbrush]

Good old candles. Always saving the day. =)

[Sunblam]

This is so sweet.

It's really awesome that you turned something initially seeming so odd into something so poetic and nice. :)

[killert00thbrush]

Glad you liked it. =]

[bunnifuzzyball]

hehe!

"the beach is the only place where I've ever felt at home, that's how I know I'm a seagull"

You have an amazing voice btw :D

[killert00thbrush]

Cheers. =P

[jess4dinner]

Hey, wow. I completely agree with carl8855's comment. It really is a wonderful piece of work! Congrats on the script award too!

[killert00thbrush]

=) Thanks a lot! hehe

[carl6855]

Hard not to repeat what others have said but the whole film from script, acting, filming to editing was very polished and professional. Beautiful.

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks very much. =D

(I know what you mean about repeating. lol, I'm always looking for new ways to say thank you.)

[kathleenxrose]

amazingg. veryyyveryyy good. (:

[killert00thbrush]

hehe, thanks. =)

[loser2old4utube]

Really great Leuke! Very well done!

Were you inflenced by "Jonathan Livingston Seagull" by Richard Bach?

[killert00thbrush]

Well I wasn't actually thinking about it when I wrote the script, but i have read the book. So it might have been subconscious.

[Cadwaladr]

Absolutely brilliant, Leuke. Is there anything you're not good at?

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks mate. =P We have yet to find something. lol

[XxLivyHeartbreakerxX]

LOL.

this was great.

it made me laugh so much.

especially:

"My name is Jonathan Day. No one knows I'm a seagull. They wouldn't believe me."

best part. :]

[killert00thbrush]

=D Glad you liked it.

[clareisbaresfareface]

This is done so well!

[and the voice is almost soothing]

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks very much! ^^

[Tiednbound]

That was really, really good. Have you ever read "Jonathan Livingston Seagull" by Richard Bach?

ISBN-10: 0743278909

ISBN-13: 978-0743278904

[killert00thbrush]

Thank you.

=D And yes, I have read it. Great book.

[waoOoma]

I really loved it! I think we could all kind of relate to his story...I know I have a place where I truly feel like I belong..and everywhere else I feel like an outsider.

[killert00thbrush]

Yeah, I think most people have something like this. =]

[rdt999]

Beautiful! Amazing! Thought provoking!

 This is what you tube should be about!

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks a bunch. =) Glad you liked it.

[LittleShiela]

:D Favourited :D

[killert00thbrush]

^^ Thanks very much!!

[z1234567890abc]

OH OH OH this is the first Leuke film that isn't exactly X:00 min's !!!!!!!

[killert00thbrush]

=P Nah, got a 2:30 from awhile ago, and a few 0:40ers. lol

[z1234567890abc]

I'm guessing this is filmed around Holbert/Taz

looks like you live in a very nice , pleasant place Leuke .Very well done film, who would of thought you were so sensitive and emotional the voice over was quite soothing. you know out of all the people I have met I have yet to meet a normal person I guess everyone has there own personality I guess it would be a very dull place if we were all the same.

My best wishes for you in all that you do.

And DON'T FORGET TO BE AWESOME!

[killert00thbrush]

Yeah, all filmed in the local area. Thanks. =)

Yeah, everyone has their own thing. =P People get boring when they try to be the same as other.

[killert00thbrush]

lol, that would probably end up as a bit of a different story.

[TBCmaelstrom]

Oo wow... thats quite an amazing story :P! keep it up nice job +1

[killert00thbrush]

=P Thanks very much!

[D0UHA92]

Aww, poor Jonathan

I love the beach too, the smell, the sound, the feel

I makes you soo relaxed

This is really nice, keep it up

[killert00thbrush]

Yeah it's a nice place. =)

[Deruvius]

This is really quite fascinating. And great inspiration for those who wish to try their hand at short films (aka, me and my friends) An interesting concept shown beautifully with limited resources.

Your narrative voice rivals that of David Attenborough!

[killert00thbrush]

Ohhm good luck with that! =) I'd love to see anything you make.

=D Thanks!

[AngryAussie]

Always good to try something different. Really nicely done Leuke!

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks Andrew! =D

Yeah, I like to try and change up what I do. Keep people on their toes. =P I can't be happy all the time.

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks very much. =P

[coollikeyodais]

Is that Jonathan Livingston Day aka Seagull? JLS was my student.

[killert00thbrush]

Nah, but if he becomes a seagull he might meet him. ;)

[shweps5]

Quite inspiring and interesting,

definitely worth watching.

You're a good narrator.

cheers

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks! hehe

[SultanaStorm]

naw that was sweet. Did you get a good grade? A+ worthy =D

[killert00thbrush]

Yeah, my practical work got good marks. =)

[johnofjordan]

I liked that.

Is it bad that I wanted to throw Jonathan a chip? ;)

[killert00thbrush]

My media teacher wanted that scene in there. =P lol

[mynameismollie]

that was really lovely and sweet :)

[killert00thbrush]

=) Glad you liked it.

[pommypictures]

souns like someone needs a hug.

[killert00thbrush]

I can't think of anyone better to give him one. =P hehe

[livontoast]

Leuke!;D

That was incredible! I realllly enjoyed it;D

[killert00thbrush]

=D Thanks Liv!!

[jayleemei]

That was beautiful. It really made me think.

When he said he was a seagull, I thought he meant that in the literal, but then the more I watched, the more it made sense.

This was really inspiring. Thumbs up! (:

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks a lot.

=) I like making people think.

[pallas1957]

This Explains Why I Saw That Guy Crapping On A Statue And Eating Bread Crumbs Off The Sidewalk.

[pvampire]

Wow..seriously..wow! I hope YT features this Leuke....that was very very nice! You really have a great talent. Thanks for posting this. BTW..that narration was especially incredible!!! You have the perfect voice for that you defiently need to get into media of some form! :]

[livontoast]

I agree with you!;D

[killert00thbrush]

Thanks very much mate. =)

We shall see. =P Send them an email. lol, that's how they get most of the features.

[pvampire]

One step ahead of you...that was the first thing I did! I just watched an 8 hour series on my Blu Ray called "Planet Earth" by national geographic. Your narration voice was ten times better than that! I dont know if you realize it but your voice is gold! You should send that tape to an agent or something...anyway, I love that video. How long did it take you to make? I hope you got an "a" for that one! :]

[killert00thbrush]

hehe, aww!

Yeah, a few people have said that. =P It's hard to know if they're just being nice. But we'll see, I might end up as a voice over man. lol

It was mad over about 3 weeks. =)

[tuckerjames24]

wow, total awesomeness! You did something very special.

[killert00thbrush]

^^ I'm glad you think so. hehe

[maniacalmike]

Very cool! Poetic, even. I liked your narration.

[killert00thbrush]

Yeah, a few people have said that.

Thanks!

[paisleypower30]

You better have gootan an 'A" on this from your teacher.