Ok so you want a little bit of wisdom as you asked for in the description? I sugguest to you that this song sounds like a first draft. Its a good song but it needs a lot more instrumentation. A booming drum a few lines after the piano intro and with lots of rhythm and some lead guitar accompying it. Most really good songs start out like this so I think you just need to it grow with you. There is no age limit to a song. Good luck.
Of course~ I'm on the internet finally, so I have to go back through all of your songs! I think I'm even more amazed everytime I hear them. YOU, my good sir, are a little bit of wisdom.
im going to have to disagree with your 'best' song being your best, but your second best song (this one) is amazing. Keep going, you're very talented.
You look like T.R. Knight
spurpop 8 months ago
Your allready famous in norway buddy :)
zardas123 2 years ago
you need to find a way to record this...nice job
sumthan41 2 years ago
oh my gosh this song is just awesome!!!
it's kind of my favorite right now :)
do you write the songs??
YOU ROCK!!!
Amootto 3 years ago 4
I like where this song is going
thesoulsong 3 years ago
wow...just wow I love your voice and I love how you play the piano 5/5
TiaraSakurai 3 years ago
wow. your amazing. i hope you become famous someday! good luck! :)
pokeexpert9 3 years ago
wow.
the best songi have everytime heard
hiihr2 3 years ago
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You suck and so does your band.
Cliffs0fDover 3 years ago
there awesome there gonna be famous soon there better them you
funnyricepilau 3 years ago
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Man! I forgot how good this song was :)
Vorlan 3 years ago 2
Not yet, but hopefully by next week!
trickofdisaster2 3 years ago
You have very sweet voice and I like your songs a lot :--------).
Bumbabambu 3 years ago
Thaaanks!
trickofdisaster2 3 years ago
Ever thought about getting a studio version? Not because "This" is the music i'm normally listening too, but the text is beautiful.
Regards
DanWesterholt 3 years ago
i think you're really great. :)
ilyilyalphabet 3 years ago
can you put up the lyrics?
mccarthyistcommy 3 years ago
mickey mouse...lol. its true
jennaestar 3 years ago
That is a very nice song. I have a question but I'll send you a message.
RexDanielRoss 3 years ago
go you man.
nickpalazeke 3 years ago
Thanks!
trickofdisaster2 3 years ago
don't ever sing again....ever...
nadaboom 4 years ago
i was gna see if you have a video of you singing
but tbh id rather listen to this guy than check out some haters crappy videos of him thinking he can do a better job if they actually exist .
sure maybe he hasnt got the greatest voice
but the song is epic
so bite your fckin tongue next time
JoshJubb 3 years ago
Wow josh, thanks so much!
trickofdisaster2 3 years ago
ROFL
the mic and the guys glasses in the poster form a mickey mouse head XD
MoRgUe27 4 years ago
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thekid517 4 years ago
i love it great voice
thekid517 4 years ago 2
Thanks!
trickofdisaster2 4 years ago
this is a really good song
you should be proud you created it
MoRgUe27 4 years ago 2
Ok so you want a little bit of wisdom as you asked for in the description? I sugguest to you that this song sounds like a first draft. Its a good song but it needs a lot more instrumentation. A booming drum a few lines after the piano intro and with lots of rhythm and some lead guitar accompying it. Most really good songs start out like this so I think you just need to it grow with you. There is no age limit to a song. Good luck.
30framessec 4 years ago 2
I do plan to have all those things. This is just the accoustic version. Thanks for listening
trickofdisaster2 4 years ago
I luv it!! You have a very pleasant voice!! Nice song, nice music, nice you!!
Luvs
Natasha
xoxo 5*
la1880 4 years ago
you've got some songwriting skills , nice work!
calysar 4 years ago 2
personally i like this one better than broken i guess but im a sucker for piano and this one has awesome piano
ConwayStreet 4 years ago
This is really good =]
mzbluepunkrocker 4 years ago
im a punk fan. this isnt quite my favorite genre of music. but it fuckin rocked. nice job. holy crap, wanna jam sometime?
bassmaster31 4 years ago
WOW nice song and also nice playing skills!! Keep it up. Queen Chioma Singer xxxx
QueenChiomaSinger 4 years ago
Good Job!!
Cmkx05 4 years ago
Of course~ I'm on the internet finally, so I have to go back through all of your songs! I think I'm even more amazed everytime I hear them. YOU, my good sir, are a little bit of wisdom.
IzzaTHEgreat 4 years ago
im going to have to disagree with your 'best' song being your best, but your second best song (this one) is amazing. Keep going, you're very talented.
Digitalis83 5 years ago
omg, you're such good singer!! :)
jayvonmaur 5 years ago
wow tht was amazing u should go to a record company and sing tht
94music 5 years ago
Thanks!
trickofdisaster2 5 years ago
great song! your stuff is good! maybe you can release a cd sometime in the future..
spencehewitt 5 years ago
i have to say.. that was great! keep it up! hopefully you may release a cd someday...
spencehewitt 5 years ago