This is a Really cute song! I dunno if i'm too picky with grammar or what, but it bothers me a little that you say "up of a chorus" That doesnt make sense..? It would make more sense to say " I havn't had time to think up a good chorus" The of is just distracting and annoying.. lol Otherwise i Love it! great song.
Hah, I didn't even think of that. Yeah, you're right, that would make more sense, I'll try that out next time I try this one live. Thanks for listening!
great :)
bryder222 1 year ago
This is a Really cute song! I dunno if i'm too picky with grammar or what, but it bothers me a little that you say "up of a chorus" That doesnt make sense..? It would make more sense to say " I havn't had time to think up a good chorus" The of is just distracting and annoying.. lol Otherwise i Love it! great song.
Idontgiveahoot2 3 years ago
Hah, I didn't even think of that. Yeah, you're right, that would make more sense, I'll try that out next time I try this one live. Thanks for listening!
Asyss 3 years ago
@Asyss you should have said "to think of a good chorus"
TheJacobHolmes 1 year ago
haha thats awesome!
hope to see more in the future!
AFLIsAwesome 3 years ago
its catchy enough dude lol
forsakin89 3 years ago
Haha
This song rocks!
nice job=)
GiarryB 3 years ago
1,000 views! Yay! Still only one comment though, hehe =P
Asyss 3 years ago
Muhhaahahahaa..
Thats Really Gud But Fuunny, x
WhaatDen 4 years ago
Indeed, it actually wás funny :)
banzaiman28 3 years ago
Thanks =)
Asyss 3 years ago