Doctor Whoof Adventures: Partners In Crime

[ToastyDaMosty]

Ethiopia

I lost it 

[Quintuplin12]

Short, sweet, and done ABSOLUTELY PERECTLY!!!!

[pierocks94]

@redwings13400 Discord isn't a political figure, just a god.

[redwings13400]

Make that 2 counts of political assassination now, with Discord being turned into stone. Also, I think Twilight got a 7th count of disturbing the peace in Lesson 0.

[falsepride22]

@ShadowScythe12 I thought that counted for the grand theft since she didn't "kill" the bird and the ash thing is part of a pheonix's life cycle it reformed right after, she mentioned Nightmare Moon right after that which I assume was an explaination for assassination since she and the others did attack her. Also it was Fluttershy who stole the bird but I think it sees Twilight as an accomplice since she didn't report her and was helping her try to take care of the bird.

[megadragonmon]

I love the ending. "There are alot of libraries in the universe."

[Soniclord65]

These are the best things ever. Bar none. Best. Things. Ever.

[BorderWolf42]

198,895,385 late library books. XD

[falsepride22]

Political assasination? Unless taking out the Nightmare part of Luna counts as murder.

[ShadowScythe12]

@falsepride22 It meant Celestia's bird (Once it turned to ash)

[LooniLuci]

2:10

Am I the only one who sqee'd a bit cos of that line? X///D

[Dagonboy6666]

I see you left out qutie a few of the crimes the Doctor has comited.

[darkironyoshi]

@Dagonboy6666 But there is just sooooooo many and so much time.

[Xenex025]

is it me or does twilight sound a little different?

[Tonarion]

I just love these Voice Actor.

Twilight sounds alot like Amy Pond and Doctor Whooves appears to be somehow derived from the Eleventh Doctor in my opinion :D

And I like the idea of Equestria being a planet. I am writing fanfics where Equestria is pretty much planet Earth in an alternate universe.

[FearTheBeans]

For those who dont know, Equestria is actually a place. it's in south africa. i remembered when the doctor said twilight was from ethiopia

[Nulono]

Equestria is a country.

[animefan809]

lol political assassination and grand theft

[WorldWalker128]

Somebody needs to make a collection of all these things somewhere.

And then sell them. I'd buy them.

[yoopergamerboy]

Late library returns? DOCTOR! You have a time machine!

[SilveerStarr]

"Grand theft? Political assassination? Oh my, naughty girl."

I don't know why I like that line. xD

[sindreive]

The month is olmost up! We await......

[AGrayPhantom]

Political assassination? I don't quite remember it that way...

[galiant609]

The running parts was a bit not-thrilling. The music at the running part flooded the footsteps.

Anywho.. loved it so much. MOAR!!

[IpwnU38]

I bet fluttershy would freak if she was in twilight's shoes, considering she'd be charged for the same crimes.

[VinnyVanYiffy]

WHY YOU NO ADD CLOPPING SOUNDS?!

[mickeymouse14]

This is amazing...its like the future of fanfiction o 3 o

[MyRkAcc]

Twilight is bad ass

[randomperson11111123]

All those Half-Life 2 sounds, I feel ashamed for being able to recognise each one of them and where they appear in-game ...

[Capnbritish]

@randomperson11111123 OH GOD MY DIRTY SECRET, please don't recognize the World of Warcraft ones or the Oblivion ones too!

I HAVE SAID TOO MUCH *runs*

[redwings13400]

This is the first doctor whooves I've heard who I actually like, and I like this doctor a lot! Twilight though, just has something off about her. It just doesn't sound like Twilight. The script is good though, and I'm excited for doctor whooves to become an internet reality.

[redfox2tails]

Oh sure, Twilight, let's completely forget about the two counts of planetary demolition and focus solely on the exorbitant number of late library book returns. Priorities, she has them.

[Tjprower]

@redfox2tails I thought the same at first, but think about it:

2 counts of planetary Demolition. Formidable.

198,895,385 over due LIBRARY FEES. WTFBBQ

I don't know about you, but I'm not sure I'd EVER be able to do that in 10 life times, let alone one.

I think Twilight is rather justified with her amazement.

[redfox2tails]

@Tjprower And, in retrospect, to be fair to Twilight, the library book info was before the planetary demolition. She was probably still reeling from that charge since I'm fairly certain Equestria has no equivalent for traffic violations.

Of course, to play Devil's Advocate for a bit, you could always ask "How much damage is caused from just one count of planetary demolition compared to a late library book return?"

But yeah, it could easily be 'either - or' for all intents and purposes.

[tenshi415]

I had a feeling something like that was going to happen

[riggsg]

YES! HUGE Fan! Squeak, you are the best! I look forward to whatever you have next!

[falkoren]

My only issue is the unnatural pauses between dialogue towards the beginning especially. It didn't feel like conversation was flowing properly. This could be where, in a show, body language expresses the character but in the radio show it just seems a mite bit awkward.

Aside from that, I enjoyed it. :3

Please do make more.

[MartySnowdog]

Books, so much bloody books. never give Doctor you books- you will never see them again

[ThePoetzy]

"and the doctor was played by the jam jar" thats some jam jar. :\

[aragrist]

There seems to be a slight pause between Twi and the Doctor speaking to one another. Maybe close the gap in their voices a little more to make it sound more like natural back and forth speech.

[gskaloyan]

Allon-sy! I'll be subscribin to follow this project close.

[ThatIsNotMyMama]

In the immortal words of the Doctor himself, "Absolutely brilliant!"

Keep up the damn good work. I'm looking forward to the whole thing and more episodes!

[Super2Donny]

Greetings from Hong Kong :L

[EmperorJewel]

Jamjar you are an awesome voice actor when it comes to the Doctor's voice.

This is a great idea and please continue to write this. I will love you so hard!

[sdbegotist]

I sense influence from "The Infinite Quest" here.

[Rexco33]

@sdbegotist That's where I got the idea!

[SwordSaint32]

I liked it and the story reminded me of a episode of red dwarf which i didn't mind. But I think twlight needed to be worked on both in voice acting and script though i know how hard it is. So i can understand.

[lulztopus]

The David Tennant impersonation is spot on!

[Iggyandtheape]

the dialogue sounds a little choppy, but a funny story anyway.

[Rexco33]

Can't wait for Dream Lord pony ep when I get the script done!

[Rexco33]

LOVE IT LOVE IT! Got the idea from the BBC animated who! Good expansions!

[TibsisTops]

this is definitely your BEST audio work yet! gold stars for Dash for his supreme audio work :) and of course, props to your cast for their excellent performances and yourself for the wonderful script

[Rexco33]

@TibsisTops I wrote the script, he just cleaned it up, lol!

[TibsisTops]

@Rexco33 well then props to you as well! :)

[Sparkxtube]

Ethipoia?........its Equestria! Loved that part.

[nyugvo6]

also, this doctor is the best yet. keep him.

[nyugvo6]

the doc could be LOUUUUUDEEEEEEEEEEER

[AlwaysAmazingSlyWit]

Oh my Luna, I am so excited for the series! Squeaks! THIS IS AMAZING!

[Dracit1]

SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!

[NarricTechna]

The clanging on walkways doesn't sound like hooves on metal, nor like its a four legged animal. Best I could suggest for a audio reference would be the coconuts from "Monty Python and the Holy Grail" (off the top of my head) .

Really funny episode. Especially like the library joke XD

[Capnbritish]

@NarricTechna I did try a lot of things to try and mix the sound of hooves with the sound of metal but everything just sounded wrong and distracting to me. I'm fairly sure that if a horse was to walk on a metal grate the sound of it's hooves wouldn't resonate very much or at all.

[Witchenboy13]

A Cyberprison? I like it! what version of the theme song is that though? it's nice!

[SqueakAnon]

@Witchenboy13

It's a version of the Ending theme from the original Dr.Who Radio Plays, remixed by a brony by the name of Zharkaer. It's quite nice!

[strangebenhur]

@SqueakAnon is it from the eighth doctor audio dramas?

[woot2111]

You forgot to mention his upteen billion counts of murder in the first degree, and more than a couple counts of genocide.

[IphisIcelos]

@woot2111 I wouldn't bring that up. Bit of a sore spot. And he can destroy your race. Just saying.

[BlueRam1409]

Has anypony actually thought of using the pocketwatch as a way to explain why the doctor's in Ponyville? Just a thought for any aspiring Dr. Who/MLP fanfic writer out there. :)

[bionicdragon5]

I can't wait for the actual episodes!

[jessybxx]

As one of those who actually KNOW Doctor Who I have to say you're doing a fabulous job here. The mixture of fun and epic is spot on. Great work with the music and effects, too. And now, I'll keep gnawing my nails in anticipation of the full episodes. Keep it up! Greetings from Germany =)

[SqueakAnon]

@jessybxx

Wow, Germany! I do love the internet, global audiences rock! In anycase, thanks! We'll keep it up! You can thank Dash for the awesome editing, and the amazing voice cast for giving this life! Hope you enjoy the full episodes when they release!

[Marthio]

@SqueakAnon You've reached Holland too. I know of a few people in India as well and about three in Japan.

Keep up the work :D

[Ephrones]

@SqueakAnon This was fantastic! The audio is SO much better than in the last episode (I just found them and am going through them).

Greetings from Germany, too :)

[EpicZantetsuken]

oh btw, this is awesome, i love it. i wish i'd actually seen even a single episode of Dr. Who, so i udnerstood more about it, all i've done is read part of the wiki XD

yeah i know, i fail, it's on my to-do list though! :P

[SqueakAnon]

@EpicZantetsuken

Well, it's nice to know it even appeals to those who don't know the entire backstory. (Though that had better be HIGH on your to-do-list, because it's awesome.) glad you liked it! Thanks!

[EpicZantetsuken]

SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AAAAAAAACE

space space space, gotta see it all, stars galaxies orion, the big dipper t-the big dipper!

dad, are you space?

yes son, now we are a family again

[42Forty2]

Traffic Violations? It's SPACE. How can you have TRAFFIC LAWS in SPACE?

Anyway, I can't wait for the full episodes. Keep it up!

[Serpentking789]

@42Forty2 To be fair, most of those traffic violations are probably for leaving the TARDIS in no-parking zones.

[Capnbritish]

Eee, this was awesome fun to edit together. Can't wait to do more work with you guys.