"Support the Red Cross and change a life, starting with your own."
change A life?... starting with your own? so... I'm changing one life? just mine? hmm... BAD ENGLISH!
Sorry, I've just heard that stupid radio commercial on my favorite station a million times and it's just painful. I really appreciate the Red Cross and what they do, but this motto is just embarrassing!
What would be better?
"When you support the Red Cross, you change lives, starting with your own."
"Support the Red Cross and change a life, starting with your own."
change A life?... starting with your own? so... I'm changing one life? just mine? hmm... BAD ENGLISH!
Sorry, I've just heard that stupid radio commercial on my favorite station a million times and it's just painful. I really appreciate the Red Cross and what they do, but this motto is just embarrassing!
What would be better?
"When you support the Red Cross, you change lives, starting with your own."
samuelmos 1 year ago