Forbidden Love [Nessie Cullen FanFic]; Chapter 1

[Pinksmileyyyy]

taylor swift how could u take my true love jacob :'( i love u jacob

[hopebreanna13]

I love this it fits how it would be completely,you really understand them.Please write more and remember it doesn't matter what other people think its about how you do.

[querenmm99]

wow i love it i love it i love it i wanna scream of how good it is ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh­hhhhhh i cant scream thou cuz alll my family is asleep

[LisHage]

Pretty good!:D

Check out my series too if you want! It's not fanfic, but whatever..:P hehe.

xo

[littlestrapplady]

this is awesome!

[meloveicecream1]

thats really good

[JacobBlackLuver95]

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!

[XOXTomBoyGirlXOX7531]

i loved it! im making a story about them too! :D

[BLueBiirdx3]

Loved it. =]

Please make more. ♥

[OfficiallyClaire]

ooh, that was intense. forbidden love makes me wanna cry... MAKE MORE!

[inuitgirl99]

wow that wasreally one of the best stories about renesmee and jacob

pls pls pls pls make more it is really good

[pinkandpurpleluver]

Make more! those was really good! Also plz read mine!!

[endraka]

LOL Edward is fatherly maybe overpertective like he was with Bella!!!

[kirbyfanz95]

Lol,Edward's so fatherly...it's strange.

Keep going please...

[MeImAScene878]

omg!

[4everTLfan]

wow that was soo good please continue :D

[shiningstars2012]

I dont really like the video but the info is good

[ggroks]

OMG!!! please make more!!!

[casada913]

OMG MOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!

[italiangrl1589]

aww that was rly good you should continue it so everyone knows wat happens..lol good job but you rly should continue : ) super funny : )

[annaburger101]

that was one of the best ones i've ever read PLEASE make another one

[Cheese1711]

PLEASE CONTINUE!:D

[nannerbug0312]

good. i like it. please make more!

[omglol546]

u shuld ttly make another 1 tho

[omglol546]

that was great but just kinda awkward?!?!?!

[xxTreexxHuggerxx]

awe,

only one? :(

ahwell, it was goood.

[crazyfacecartoon]

that was pretty awesome, you definately need to write more, your really good

[tunfiskenbob]

Hey, that was really good, i've read alot of fan-fictions, and that was a good plot. If you wright something more will you let me know?

[eschouest193]

That was really good you should write more i would love to read

Good Joe- Emmy

[longlivebellaedward]

i read the chapter, and i was laughing the whole time:

My parents are Bella and Edward Cullen. Jake had a crush on my mom before I was born.

okay, awkward!, i love it!

"No, it's really my fault. I thought something that I shouldn't have. It's my fault."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!­11

[sbpro07]

Awesome!!! :)