Untitled Longing... Chapter 216

[cutierose1234]

Alex is a fucking creep.

Who puts a person down on a ransom note?

But, I was just wondering, what would he do if he actually got her? Obviously he has some kind of attachment to her so would he hurt her? Most probably. Rape her? Likely. I guess he'd be the abusive "boyfriend" type, right?

Okay I'm rambling again haha

I really hope Alex keeps his word...not that I trust him one bit but what if the money doesn't cut it for him? Hmm...

Loved the chapter, again :D

Love you xxx

[jessicannamaria]

Woah. Creepy Alex.

But I like Nick's change of acts :)

I suppose thats what you were talking about earlier? :)

[brothersjonasluver2]

Ughhh, alex retard, Nicks gonna be the hero :) Amazing chap :)

[SOphieROcksHArder]

LET HIM HELP !

loved it

xx

[iLynnerd16]

ohgoodness! I just realized something!!! can't the police track the number? like seriously! those police need to track the number! and then life will be better again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh and I know this sounds kinda weird but uhh I kinda want them to stay with alex for a longgg time cause all this drama is just sooo great =D

[xxlillianxx19]

can we kill alex?!?! pleasee!!! Like i said in another comment i want to beat the living daylights out of him then drench him in carosine oil until hes almost ready to drink it and then tie him to a wooden staek surrounded by millions of other litle wooden steaks and then light the bastard on fireee!!!!!!(: <3

[JonasMuizc]

I so agree lets do it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[iPodluvr287]

OMG!!!!

[kyraredwall]

post next one soon please!

[sarahsmoothie123]

yeah.

let him help

[TheOfficialJBfan]

Alright Nicolas is finally taking action!!!!

Give Summer and Joy back!!!

[xJONASNESSx]

Yay Nick's taking action

[zefronbleu101]

OMG i hate alex so much. like, SO MUCH.

ughhh

can you please please kill him at the end of the season? we jonas fans would throw a party.

[bratierocker71]

awesome! your jewish?thats so cool! i didnt know people fast on Yom Kippur? i celebrate and fast then it ended like 2 weeks ago though.

[ramansidhu007]

aawwh joeeey and brookeee <3

[JonasLove916]

I agree with The13Queen, I'm ready for Alex to drop dead. I seriously hate him. I hope they find Summer soon. How long has it been? Two, three days? I can't remember, it seems like so long. Of course Joe loves Brooke! And he needs to tell her soon ; )

[misslyss96]

PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!! :D

[The13Queen]

They better find them and when they do they better kill alex. Im ready for him to just drop dead already.

[SpaceGirl929]

Alex is a hoe!!!! i can't believe he hit her and drew on the phone!!!! he needs to die... currently...

[samigirl3211]

Omg we could kill alex by doing what they did a long time ago which is tying each of his arms and legs to a goat and letting them walk away in four different directions!

perfect for him slow and painful!

[poly820]

OMGOMGOMGOMG

im dying

like seriously

i want to read this whole story

right now

lol

[madison50364]

Alex is just becomes a bigger fattie with time! Ugh. Kill that kid! I hope they do anyways. I'm not going to do a creative death though. Plenty others do.

Nick is such a sweetheart. Love that boy so much. He's amazing. :D

Sorry. I don't have much to say.

Um, of course Joe loves Brooke and that must be a heck of a lot of money!

Um... yeah, that's it. Bye!

[SKATERgirl0x]

awgh!!

well what else is he gonna do, though ?

sit around , cry , and mope ?

check , check and check .

awgh! nick is So adorable. i lovee him

but joseph's mine . lmaoo

[MissTrollQueen]

gawd Joe told him he loved brook ages ago. he siad 'Nick bro, i think you and i are on teh same boat' right before Nick told summer he loves her and jsut after kevin and joe find out. anyways thats just me rambling.

i loved it so much. poor nick

[limegreen164]

post soon!!!

i practically live for this series!!!

i hope they get back soon!!!!

plz?? :(

[ILoveMusicFreaks777]

aww THEY TALKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ohh..i hope Big Rob sucker punches Alex in da face!

[xXMsLittleSunshineXx]

OMG yess they talked to each other!!! WOO HOOO!!! that was really... wow

the momnet the song.. speechless

[coeyjbfan93]

awe, i want her back so bad! and joy of course!

[carolbo3103]

omg so intense!!! ugh!!! plz plz plz post soon!!!!

[PushinMeAwaystory]

Omg omg omg omg omg pleaseee post soon alex is going to DIEEEEE!!! by death of me :)

[kevinjonaslover123]

Another awesome chapter!!

[musicismylife500]

I should have known it was Alex....>:| not cool.

Whoa, Nick wants to help! :)

Alex wants to double that money offer...but what if he just decides to keep Summer and Joy anyways? :(

[JonasLuver44]

aww I just want them back together! gosh! hahahah please post soon :)

[WeLoveBittaBetta96]

Im glad Nicj is feeling at least a little better. Let Nicholas help!!!! Amazing chapter!!!!

[lydiaxo33]

nick go get her i know you can

[kissme264]

Nick should help by punching Alex's face in!

[berrysis3]

lovedddd it as always im sooooo happy nick gotta talk 2 summer even though it didnt last very long:( atleast he knw shes ok:) well alive anyways

[charmedangel95]

:D At least something postive happened. Joe shouldn't let Brook eout of his sight!

Nick the moment you get to punch Alex DO IT!

[xxlilxxkweenxx]

I LOVE this story soo much!! =D

Alex NEEDS to die!!

[xxlillianxx19]

LET NICK HELP!!! AND I MEAN IT YOU BETTER FIX THIS!!!!! BROOKE BETTER ME SAFE.....or else

[hottiechik598]

woooo :)

laved it

[cecesingergrrl]

I love it! SO MUCH! I don't have any more adjectives to describe it anymore! I am like really obsessed with your series! And I really hope that Nick and Summer can get back together soon :)

[therealthingnow]

Great chapter! Post more!

Wooo Nick fight 4 your loved one!!

Awesome

[xxDasweetiexx]

Ugh i hate Alex.

Joy and Summer must be okay!

[kookoobb]

Ah! He has to get to Summer!

[EliANDLilmel]

thanks for posting!

Hating alex

Liking drew more each day

Sad for nick/summer/joy

Still cant find you on twitter...

[EmmzyJonasFan]

Omg amazing! Alex is dumb (; can he not just die already? Summer and joy must return! (: xxx

[lrx001]

this is one of the best series ever! im addicted! i luv it so much! i hope everything turns out alright! if u wouldent mind would u post again plz? it would mean a lot to us all!

[stephanijp94]

yey he's gonna get her back!:)

[jonaslovex2]

ahhhhhhhhhhh theyre gunna get summer and joy back soooooooon! -hopefully- lol i cant wait til theyre back together!! ahh post again soon. :]

[j3call]

ahhh! they r going to get her back!!! i hope hope hope. cant wait for the next one!

[thecuteromanticone]

Love it, as usaul. =D

Why can't Drew just run away with Summer and Joy?!

[CarysLOVESjonas]

NO WAIT! the money all in pennys (:

[DemiDuhh]

omg go nick !! :D

[CarysLOVESjonas]

awesome. post more? (:

and also how much money are they giving him? like a penny? :L

[ZANNESSARULE1234]

i follow yuus on twitter and ur great

[xoxojonaslovrxoxo]

I just got home and I loged on and saw you posted. I'm not joking it seriously made my day! I love this chapter sooo much! I am so close to crying right now because of it!Please please please please post more soon!!!

[cutestuff112]

Pure awesomeess (:

Ily for making this series (:

♥

[iLynnerd16]

first comment?

anyway I saw on twitter that you where posting so I got on youtube and kept refreshing the page so I could read it! following you on twitter was the best thing I have ever done.

[Shay081793]

haha thanks xD

Yeah, first comment :) Congrats!