this is actually a good song and your lyrics are good too but you need to work on the sound mix. the guitar is overpowering your voice. forcing you to almost yell. try strumming softer so you dont have to force your voice to come out on top. you'll find you can gain much more control of your voice as well. i'm not trying to down you, in fact i think your pretty talented . youd be surprised at how much better you could sound if you toned it down. 5 stars for effort though
great! awesome lyrics too!!
ilajil 1 year ago
Wow! Great original. Five stars from me :)
bremwhite 1 year ago
@bremwhite thank you guys :)
YourOwnDisasters 1 year ago
this is actually a good song and your lyrics are good too but you need to work on the sound mix. the guitar is overpowering your voice. forcing you to almost yell. try strumming softer so you dont have to force your voice to come out on top. you'll find you can gain much more control of your voice as well. i'm not trying to down you, in fact i think your pretty talented . youd be surprised at how much better you could sound if you toned it down. 5 stars for effort though
coopkabob 1 year ago
@coopkabob thank you :) il deffinitly try
YourOwnDisasters 1 year ago