Shall I Speak Ill of Him That is My Husband?

[gilbemaye]

ugh honey you need a lot more emotion on that js

[lilmissprinceton44]

dont ever start off pointing out ur flaws darling

[needxtoxbreathex]

I feel that you need some more emotion in it, you sound as if your just reading it from a screen. You have to think, Juliet has just lost her cousin due to her husband, she is so confused on the fact she's upset about tybalt's death but she more upset about Romeo, so she feels guilty. She is a very strong girl so this is a massive thing in her life. An sorry, this really irritated me when you forgot your lines, if it happens, just carry on, I know its only youtube, but its one of my pet hates x

[LovingHate13]

"Shall i compare thee to aa summers day" Not Romeo. That was a sonnet.

Sorry. My OCD senses are tingling.

[MsVANESSA1761]

u have talent

[TornApartPhotograph]

really good, you might want to work on your pacing (seemed a bit slow with too many pauses in certain parts) but other than that was really good. :) any way. if you needed to do it again thats all i could think of. xx

[ag03210]

I'm using this monologue for a college audtion. well done on making sure it's "ban-i-shed" not just banished. so many forget the iambic pentameter. :) good job over all! just remember she was a 14 year old that should have been on suicide watch after this. she is pretty emotional. haha. just remember to really get into character. but you have some talent in there

[shaunsalve123]

more talking at the beginning is so annoying :(

[MissDramaNerd]

Thanks so much! Yes I did notice that I didnt love it in. And I worked really hard on this and then performed it in class and was the best one! Well, according to my teacher anyway :D

[bwaystar123]

ooookk so I am also doing this monologue... first word of advice, take more time before you start, you didn't seem to really lock it in. It was also a little too one note. for ex: you say banished 3 make each one different and climb the latter. you need to connect more, right now it's just repeating memorized words. I'd like to see it again when it's completely memorized and you've worked it a bit in class. Keep workin girl!