Great Job! Good message. One thing, you need to slow down! the rythum of your English is almost French. Look up "Iambic pentameter", that is the way, English is actually spoken. Hear the pulse of the language, it is more causual and relaxed than the way you are speaking. Just trying to perfect! It would go like this: "Sooo.....withIN a SEN-tence....you ought to take a BREATH......allow a PAUSE........and place EMPHA-sis on certain words with-IN it." Sorry probably not much help!
though casual in tone, you made your point :)
loved the concept of episodes- birth, making, enlightenment, roller-coaster! :)
kattykomal 3 months ago
Look on here for IAMBIC PENTAMETER, listen to it. Couldn't hurt.
rockshot100 3 months ago
Great Job! Good message. One thing, you need to slow down! the rythum of your English is almost French. Look up "Iambic pentameter", that is the way, English is actually spoken. Hear the pulse of the language, it is more causual and relaxed than the way you are speaking. Just trying to perfect! It would go like this: "Sooo.....withIN a SEN-tence....you ought to take a BREATH......allow a PAUSE........and place EMPHA-sis on certain words with-IN it." Sorry probably not much help!
rockshot100 3 months ago
that was a great speech!
nikhilbalaji 4 months ago
very nice like it Esha
MadhuThirumanas 11 months ago
good speech isha!!
nvedia 2 years ago