ALLES KLAR, Herr Kommiss-a-a! Und zwaaa - hätt' ma daaa - keine Mund-Haar-Monika - vielmehr 'nen Mik-aaah und 'nen Gretsch-aaah - drall-al-A: SUPASTAAA!!
xD sorry for all these comments but when I was writting i wasn't taking care of the limits :P and at the end I was like a thousen letters over the limits xD So I had to cut it in 4 comments!
Finally, I'd say that your bigger problem is the lake of nuances : ) And lil bit of life into your performance...dude you're playing music, and that should be a pleasure, I think you do not show it enough, even if it a sad song or whatever.... But what I'm meaning is what you put in your music will affect us, and the most difficult but best thing to do is to capture the audience.... you should take care of it...
But maybe it was your purpose :) but this has left me a bit disappointed you know ...
Third, your guitar goes with the same power from the start to the end... ( but you play well, don't worrie :P ) I'm thinking that if you do a sort of picking at the chorus, it would be better ( to break this monotonous ). And maybe, you could have add another "you" with a guitar too, doing some solo at the back, that could be really cool ! and highlight you video effects =D
Hey dude! =D Well, I'll give you a comment from my point of view, hope it will help you to get better : )
So firstly, I think you should take off the reverb on your voice... it kind of makes it to "space" if you see what I mean : )
Secondly, I'm sure you can get higher than this ( talking about your voice....) because I believe that if you take it with your low voice all along, it makes it monotonous..Because I was wondering about when you were going to take it high...
Good performance.
JMH
JMHamilton1 1 year ago
ALLES KLAR, Herr Kommiss-a-a! Und zwaaa - hätt' ma daaa - keine Mund-Haar-Monika - vielmehr 'nen Mik-aaah und 'nen Gretsch-aaah - drall-al-A: SUPASTAAA!!
notpopebuthope 1 year ago
^^A-M-A-Z-İ-N-G^^ i love this song^^5*****5^^
horizont20001 2 years ago
well played ... good rithm and voice ! really nice song ! 5 stars
BlackWolfgang70 2 years ago
Everything you sing is wonderful! Bravo! ★★★★★★
ZotMalakhov 2 years ago
wahnsinnig schön...
find ich sehr cool, das man dich da 2 mal sieht, und beim anderen noch öfter, wie machst du das? :)
tewui 2 years ago
xD sorry for all these comments but when I was writting i wasn't taking care of the limits :P and at the end I was like a thousen letters over the limits xD So I had to cut it in 4 comments!
TheHourstops 2 years ago
take care dude !
Bye!
PS : ^^ I'm the first to leave a comment ! :P
TheHourstops 2 years ago
Finally, I'd say that your bigger problem is the lake of nuances : ) And lil bit of life into your performance...dude you're playing music, and that should be a pleasure, I think you do not show it enough, even if it a sad song or whatever.... But what I'm meaning is what you put in your music will affect us, and the most difficult but best thing to do is to capture the audience.... you should take care of it...
TheHourstops 2 years ago
But maybe it was your purpose :) but this has left me a bit disappointed you know ...
Third, your guitar goes with the same power from the start to the end... ( but you play well, don't worrie :P ) I'm thinking that if you do a sort of picking at the chorus, it would be better ( to break this monotonous ). And maybe, you could have add another "you" with a guitar too, doing some solo at the back, that could be really cool ! and highlight you video effects =D
TheHourstops 2 years ago
Hey dude! =D Well, I'll give you a comment from my point of view, hope it will help you to get better : )
So firstly, I think you should take off the reverb on your voice... it kind of makes it to "space" if you see what I mean : )
Secondly, I'm sure you can get higher than this ( talking about your voice....) because I believe that if you take it with your low voice all along, it makes it monotonous..Because I was wondering about when you were going to take it high...
TheHourstops 2 years ago