1. Your timing was off
2. During the intro, left hand should be an octave higher
3. The intro ends with the interval B-C sharp on the right hand, not just c-sharp (0:12)
4. When the first verse starts, the left hand should consist of two-note intervals, not just single notes
5. Next (0:18), you played both halves of the riff exactly the same way, although the first half should be different
6. 0:23-0.25, notes played by the right hand should be coupled with their counterparts an octave above
ivasenko48 1 year ago
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1. Your timing was off
2. During the intro, left hand should be an octave higher
3. The intro ends with the interval B-C sharp on the right hand, not just c-sharp (0:12)
4. When the first verse starts, the left hand should consist of two-note intervals, not just single notes
5. Next (0:18), you played both halves of the riff exactly the same way, although the first half should be different
6. 0:23-0.25, notes played by the right hand should be coupled with their counterparts an octave above
ivasenko48 1 year ago