Molly's Song (You're Not There) (ORIGINAL SONG)

[mishrathium]

love the chord structure on this one! Pure excellence. ~ Raz

[dnarbbrand]

Thank you for your comment - just played what i heard :)

[jrocker426]

great song can i have the tabs?

[dnarbbrand]

glad you like - I do it by chords - don't know tabs

[jrocker426]

hey man my ex was named molly and i keep listening to this song do u think i could get the tabs?

[tomvband]

I think this is your best song. You're into it,.....Molly must be a real person, eh? The chords work well as Curtis mentioned. The story is good.

[dnarbbrand]

Thank you sir - no Molly doesn't exist - I wrote this with my mate steamrocket we just love sad songs lol

[CurtisMateer]

The chords work well. Definitely one to consider revisiting and laying down a vocal line seperately over top of them.Backing vox, oohs and ahs and the like, might go nicely...one never knows until it's tried though I s'pose...Pete

[dnarbbrand]

Really funny you say this we are working on another version of this as you speak with another youtube buddie who is doing the backing track - hopefully it will see the light of day

[maxineshammer]

as they used 2 say on the old tv programme -

why don't you.... get a life and then a sense of humor! If you still have time after that, maybe learn to sing and write songs yourself OR do us all a favor and run away and play with your "own" friends (oh, sorry... I meant FRIEND!!!)

[wilsondylanmccartney]

I DARE you to make a good song and post it.

[dnarbbrand]

I Dare you to make a sensible comment and post it!

[wilsondylanmccartney]

I only take double-dog dares. Now go listen to some Paul McCartney. Or Brian Wilson, Burt Bacharach, Barry Gibb, Irving Berlin, Cole Porter, Richard Rodgers, John Lennon, John Williams, Stevie Wonder, and kindly shut your mouth. If you still have time after that, grow some hair, put on a decent shirt, get all the squigly lines off your video, and don't ever post a video on youtube again. Thanx dude ;)

[Oswlek]

The chord progressions to this one are terrific. A love all the changes to minor and major7th and the like. You used a lot of non-standard chords but it still sounds perfectly natural.

[dnarbbrand]

Thanks - wow an assessment of chord structure - you are better than me wouldn't have had a clue - just do what sounds right in my head.- thanks for stopping by

[nidgetucker]

good song think you don't rate yourself much but you should geezer, its not easy putting a song together t's a Craft to quote Chuck keep it up, i can hear you in my head amped and recorded for real Believe.

[dnarbbrand]

great compliment thanks wish i could take all credit but was co written with my good friend steamrocket - thanks for stopping by and leaving comment

[marty2310]

GREAT!!!

[dnarbbrand]

Thanks a lot Mate - appreciate your input

[maxineshammer]

Guys where do you come up with all this stuff? Ure like a uTube juxebox! Cool lyrics again - agree wiv Msellie that its a sad story but (according to Elton John) sad songs say so much xxxx

[dnarbbrand]

you are so kind - yes think we were caught in one of those moments - hope you will like the rest of the songs when we post them - quite a few in the pipeline

all the best

[steamrocket]

Mind you, Elton also said he wanted to Kiss The Bride when we all know he "meant" the Groom! - so don't believe everything he says #:-))

[maxineshammer]

ha ha! you guys are hilarious! keep on posting stuff!!!

[guitarsix6]

Great song would be fantastic with more backing music thanks for the share 5*

[dnarbbrand]

thank you on behalf of steamrocket and myself we appreciate your positive comment

[steamrocket]

What we need is someone with FAR greater musical talent to lay down a backing track (hint,hint!). Know anyone (hint, hint!)? #:-)

[mommarox2]

melancholy song that one can relate to.

really enjoyed the lyrics and tunage

endless starz

[dnarbbrand]

Thanks for your positive comments - appreciate you stopping by

[efbeckley]

nice song, thanks for sharing, 5*!

[dnarbbrand]

glad you liked it

[cbrb40]

Haha I'll let him know when I get to his channel. ;)

I gotta hear all these,don't wanna miss not a one. :) keep posting them my friend! You guys are just great! You got all these potential hits. would be nice to make money from all of it :))

[cbrb40]

Hey that's so cool you two got together again. It's almost like Lennon and McCartney reuniting. :) Not quite on their scale but close enough. :))

Great song! I just love the chords you put together. Always great melodies! The words are sad like Ellie said but they do make for great pop songs.

Nice rhythm playing.

Awesome! :))

[dnarbbrand]

Thanks - we have got quite a few more that we are working on - one is called a million times which i think is one of the best things we have written - it has been finished for about 6 months now but i have refused to do it until steamrocket comes over and does it with me - so hassle him lol

also got another one called History as well as You Bring me Down so lots more :)

[steamrocket]

Not forgetting "Set Me Free" and "Nothing Lasts Forever"! I'll sort that date out once I've got the raw version of Million Times to work on again (hassle, hassle)! #:-)

[dnarbbrand]

How could i forget Set me Free but Nothing Lasts forever has a bit to go BUT we both forgot Shine your light on me lol

[MsEllieJ]

Sad and lovely.

[dnarbbrand]

Thanks maybe we should write prt 2 where she comes back lol

all the best

[steamrocket]

Haven't got my head around the idea of a concept album or musical yet, but maybe we can give it a go. What do you think? Shall we try?