I thought this was brilliant. Beautifully shot, very restrained but the details here and there were perfect (like the squeaking shoes & the on/off light at the end). Loved the humor in the beginning. The actor playing Clay Brown was perfect. Compelling film; my only complaint is that I wish more of the humor had carried through to the end.
@KlaraBleu Thanks so much for the comment. Many people haven't seen my short films on YouTube, they're more familiar with my sketches so I appreciate it when the few people take the time to watch my films through. I agree about the ending, but I find that usually when people realize the light switch part was a reference to FATAL ATTRACTION, they laugh pretty hard. Have you watched the bloopers yet?
@JordanCrowderFilms Im blessed with an attention span longer than a music video or prime time commercial. ;-] The bloopers were great, especially Red Clowns ad libs I wouldnt have been able to keep a straight face either.
Yup, the shadows were casting too low, it took you out of the movie as you realized it was the lighting. Should have mounted it higher, and dimmed it a bit. Although really, it's not a huge deal.
Ooo, I liked it a lot; I love irony o.o and side note- that first showing of the 3 stooges, I just saw a few months ago in history class...never saw the Three Stooges till then, so hehe, good stuff, hope to see more real soon
I thought this was brilliant. Beautifully shot, very restrained but the details here and there were perfect (like the squeaking shoes & the on/off light at the end). Loved the humor in the beginning. The actor playing Clay Brown was perfect. Compelling film; my only complaint is that I wish more of the humor had carried through to the end.
KlaraBleu 1 year ago
@KlaraBleu Thanks so much for the comment. Many people haven't seen my short films on YouTube, they're more familiar with my sketches so I appreciate it when the few people take the time to watch my films through. I agree about the ending, but I find that usually when people realize the light switch part was a reference to FATAL ATTRACTION, they laugh pretty hard. Have you watched the bloopers yet?
JordanCrowderFilms 1 year ago
@JordanCrowderFilms Im blessed with an attention span longer than a music video or prime time commercial. ;-] The bloopers were great, especially Red Clowns ad libs I wouldnt have been able to keep a straight face either.
KlaraBleu 1 year ago
wow, funny and sad at the sametime. this is amazing! Great work, Jordan!
theawaitinggargoyle 1 year ago
Creative stuff!
Everybody's a critic, huh?
pepeledog 2 years ago
dude, were you guys at Champlain??
zeppelinchick09 2 years ago
Of course, a few years ago!
JordanCrowderFilms 2 years ago
it was good and boring at the same time. lolllllll
kompa2004 3 years ago
that guy drank a lot of wine
RedhotDrChiliPeppers 3 years ago
depressing
FlyleaF88888 3 years ago
I like how the sordidness of his life is told, but perhaps the action is too slow even for that purpose.
ToraKo9 3 years ago
The music for this film was perfect too may I add.
Auzeh 4 years ago
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Seriously , nice actor, but story = so sucky. And the editing = bad..
Think what the spectactors would say before you guys make any videoes. I was so bored.
kred4u 4 years ago
Fantastic.
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efiiyoy 4 years ago
i liked it, the idea wasn 't so original but it' s well made.
devastor666 4 years ago 4
I like this movie
millhouseprod 4 years ago
I never liked clowns as a kid. Now I understand what its about, reaching that age. Its kinda like that 5* Blessings +++ The Saint +++
saintfletcher 4 years ago
From 8:39 onwards were amazing. Great lighting, great acting and nice music.
You had a problem with the lighting at around 4:41 though, it was nightime but the insides were too bright.
Auzeh 4 years ago
Yup, the shadows were casting too low, it took you out of the movie as you realized it was the lighting. Should have mounted it higher, and dimmed it a bit. Although really, it's not a huge deal.
Shawn7687 4 years ago
One of the best movies I've ever seen. Nice story.
Auzeh 4 years ago
nesquick is a really good cereal.
twelvemuses 4 years ago
I like your video clip and have rated it as awesome. Please check out my clip of clowns and circus acts on Victorian trading cards.
creamofcardstv 4 years ago
tears of a clown :(
aroradreem 5 years ago
Ooo, I liked it a lot; I love irony o.o and side note- that first showing of the 3 stooges, I just saw a few months ago in history class...never saw the Three Stooges till then, so hehe, good stuff, hope to see more real soon
AuroraAlchemist 5 years ago
that was a really good movie man real good
hoodershadow 5 years ago