I think the melody line is freakin' awesome! Altough I just have to comment that you need to better synchronize you too. Wait.. let me listen to it again.
One more thing. You should not sing the same voice. Add a script for the second voice, and try to see how it works out.
This is very good! I like the lyrics but you should practice more on interpreting... if you need one more vocalist just whisper from your desk...;-),keep it going and I wish you to have as many songs as possible...both of you have great talents, make sure that you develop them and use them well... cheers! antonio!:-)
One of the best songs ever!
You are really talented! Both of you!
Best of luck!
Rpp3rbest 2 years ago
Hey Sami,
I think the melody line is freakin' awesome! Altough I just have to comment that you need to better synchronize you too. Wait.. let me listen to it again.
One more thing. You should not sing the same voice. Add a script for the second voice, and try to see how it works out.
My opinion. Otherwise, excellent!
Good luck.
fe00h 3 years ago
This is very good! I like the lyrics but you should practice more on interpreting... if you need one more vocalist just whisper from your desk...;-),keep it going and I wish you to have as many songs as possible...both of you have great talents, make sure that you develop them and use them well... cheers! antonio!:-)
kvlr24 3 years ago
wow :D it's really cool song i liked it
keep going guys :)
best wishes
shams7777 3 years ago
Ooooooh, so nice my friend
it is the first time 4 me 2 discover tht u r talented in tht field
:D
I ll spread it as much as I can
best wishes
magdyzizo 3 years ago
I think its really nice. The paragraph is really good. Yet the music needed to be more ligning with the lyrics.
The words are really very poetic but somehow I didnot get the cohesion between them and the title.
Bas I really like this one so much :)
Omniamoni 3 years ago