Equalizer needed. Tempo was perfect, and lyrics carried message throughout whilst keeping the listener's interest. You built a good progressive structure, don't let it go to waste. I recommend adding a solo which is sudtle in nature throughout. Until a sharp climax at the end, where it takes lead and blows the mind of the listener. Though without a rhythm guitarist, you can forget about doing my suggested alterations Live. You're music is your music though, so do what you feel to be necessary.
hmmmm. this is defiantly different. Its pretty neat. Lets see. The video was a little harder to understand, and I'm not sure if there was tonz of depth, but there was some.
Like I said. This is really different. Not something I would choose right away, but I like it. Keep up the good work.
ooh dude ii like this song! hi !.. well im from mexico .. when are you going to come over heree..! speciially to guadalajaraa.. i reaally luv your songs im a good singer too.. jaj lol well sorrie for mi english.. and mi spanish.. that's because i talk spanish.. lend me a comment! to keep in contact
I guess you posted the music video on your profile already. GREAT!!! I really enjoyed making the music video with you, guys, and YOU ROCKED. As for the actresses, they really did a great job.
trapped like a rat.she runs like a girl.
garzaeduardo 3 years ago
wow thats cool
jumpcho160 3 years ago
that girl is very pretty.. treat her with respect..
jazztrio2008 3 years ago 3
that was a complement mate, just saying i would have her all day and night and my dick does have an off switch when i sleep.
junkiescumbag08 3 years ago
that's not a complement, mate.
Nichole537 3 years ago
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that girl is a dirty ride man, i'd fuck the b-jaysus outta her
junkiescumbag08 3 years ago
thts fucked up man. Does your dick have an off switch?
Nichole537 3 years ago
This is not the best sound quality... A bit too much echo over the whole thing. It's hard to hear exactly what's going on.
In spite of that, what I can hear sounds GREAT.
PlankKydo 3 years ago 2
Take out echo and its all good. Lol. u guys rock!
666random666name666 3 years ago 2
Equalizer needed. Tempo was perfect, and lyrics carried message throughout whilst keeping the listener's interest. You built a good progressive structure, don't let it go to waste. I recommend adding a solo which is sudtle in nature throughout. Until a sharp climax at the end, where it takes lead and blows the mind of the listener. Though without a rhythm guitarist, you can forget about doing my suggested alterations Live. You're music is your music though, so do what you feel to be necessary.
qualityisrare 3 years ago
if you edit out the echo, it would be that much better, but it's still good.
batteryacidjunkie38 3 years ago
uhmm its echoey but if you take that out it sounds like u guys wud be pretty good!! nice sound
Slipknotgurle666 3 years ago
if this u band rock on if not still rock on and this will teach you to always follow your dreams
Tgi345 3 years ago
i think it is a kool video and kool song
blackroses230 3 years ago
wow i want to see u guys sing other songs like bubble by ferge srry im bad at spelling!
Zauenae2578 3 years ago
the song is good its just the sound quality kinda sucks.
TheYoSong 3 years ago
omg why is that girl so pissed at the camera. is she bipolar?
orangecountygirly 3 years ago 2
hmmmm. this is defiantly different. Its pretty neat. Lets see. The video was a little harder to understand, and I'm not sure if there was tonz of depth, but there was some.
Like I said. This is really different. Not something I would choose right away, but I like it. Keep up the good work.
hockeyhunn 3 years ago 3
Hey Runonfragment, cool music...I really enjoyed Concrete Wave...very cool...take care!!!
aussieguitarist1963 3 years ago 3
lots of echo ? the video is well, , the sound, to much echo back tin can sound,
love the lyrics, righton, could be the site making it sound this way
rchrdhazze 3 years ago 2
coooool!
caniino22 3 years ago 2
the audio quality sucks, but the music is pretty good
TI6ERdarapper 3 years ago 2
i wish audio was of good quality,sounds alright.not bad... btw why wouldnt camera man let that girl alone?
solidsnakepk 3 years ago 2
cool:)
ladyzka 3 years ago
Great potential, like markrunon said about the audio?,
whtgingermoon7 3 years ago
nice song!
dude.. when are you going to come to mexico..
especiially to gdl..
please tell me..
my english isnt really good coz'i talk spanish
zorrie!
please lend me a comment
hotiie69 3 years ago 2
hotiie69 3 years ago 3
awsome video
johnbolushy 3 years ago 2
kr neki...
aljaostir 3 years ago
4**** Nice video
Titiloqui 3 years ago
Nice.
Lexa499 4 years ago
pretty cool i guees
halo3ismylife 4 years ago 2
kinda kool song. corny vid though
illusion6006 4 years ago 2
Kool dudes.Check out your cousins on youtube...ziggy gielstein for a cover of aguileras beautiful.
Chickenhawc 4 years ago 2
I loved it but the sound quality was altered a bit to weird
will90fire 4 years ago 2
Yeah whats up with the sound?
RichardOpio 4 years ago
sorry guys about the audio. but it came out a little weird on this one. the dvd version will not have this strangeness!
RF
markrunon 4 years ago
Thank goodness.
will90fire 4 years ago 3
nice vid
Bladerules45 4 years ago 2
i really liked and i liked the video but it was also kind of weird but other then that i really liked it
yellowtowhite 4 years ago
Great sound !!
beekeeper000 4 years ago 4
great video,love it!!!!!!!!!
momathome772003 4 years ago 2
Ya'll did a great job on the video and the song is kickin! I loved it! Keep doing wot ya'll do cause ya'll are good at it.
Much Love, Indian Fire:)
indianmom72 4 years ago 2
love it. great job guys =)
honeydukes623 4 years ago 2
nice!
snakevenom56 4 years ago 2
5/5
AlphaOmega11111 4 years ago 2
love it guys!! keep up the awesomeness!! XD
HUmarDart 4 years ago 2
You guys rock! Not to mention, you put together a very good vid!
erinandcompany 4 years ago 2
I guess you posted the music video on your profile already. GREAT!!! I really enjoyed making the music video with you, guys, and YOU ROCKED. As for the actresses, they really did a great job.
Chris
christopherrevon 4 years ago 3
I like it!
rebeldiamondgirl 4 years ago 2
Sounded great. That chick is kind of cute.
BluePounder 4 years ago 2
This sounds great.. The video is awesome.. GOOD JOB
babyblue058404 4 years ago 2
sounds great. JOIN THE HOODYs. We are the future. HA!!!!
Funkywalk2 4 years ago 3
good song i like it keep up the good work
varrador 4 years ago 4