from what i can tell, you got the lows taken care of. im assuming you're doing them properly.
except you say "spread it on your face" where "let them know in hell" belongs, no biggie
yeah you got good lows
highs need work.
and its take ONE final breath,
but you know the lyrics damn well.
tell me, listen closely to the first time he says "the moisture in your eyes is dehydrating" instead of moisture DOESNT it sound like water? first time he says it only
ur lows are good, there a different style then phils though, ur highs are alright needa little more work ur using so much air to do them, try to stay up to the pace other then that its good
your lows r really. yo've got a good high too. amplify that shit and u may not have to work sooooo hard to sing it loud. therefor, being able to have some more breaths lol
Great job man, sounded really good. The best thing about Phil Bozeman's vocals is that he enunciates his words so well. Work on that, (curving your throat to form the sounds of the consonants) also work on your breaths, (breathing at the right time, etc)
I'm a terrible vocalist but I can point out some things. great job, put some more vocal covers up.
thank you sir! and ya phil's enunciation is rediculous... i try my best and usually the words come out pretty cleanly... at times they get muffled though *usually when im running out of breath*
and ya the breathing is rediculous... i dont know how phil can breathe so little...
all you screw off. This is my old guitarist! he is a cool dude, and has some vocal talent he is workin on. (lee.. this is mike) I was impressed with the cover. i wanna give you a couple words. 1. Get your lows lower, and highs higher, your on the brink, you just gotta find the sweet spot!! BRAVOOO.. 2nd you should stop doin covers and try and find YOUR sound. you got a good sound. i can hear it. just FIND it. Great job man. PS. YOU ROCK for not cupping like all the emos out there
and i am working on some of my own stuff... its just that its hard to do so when you dont have a band to play it... ive been workin on guitar more than vox though... i have seen lots of improvement on my lows as of late... gutturals a more... guttural... highs are about the same :P
no im his old guitarist because our band split up... not because i was kicked out... dude why do you bother commenting on my videos? jealous? cuz it fuckin seems like it
try to keep your highs under control, dont go out of the range. this aint bmth. more pronunciation in the lows will actually make it sound much more fluid. also, dont bend over when on long notes or any notes for that matter, it'll actually make it sound much more forced since your compacting your lungs. a forced sound is the opposite of what you want. other than that your not terrible. lastly, focus on the words and sounds that are stressed in the original song and make sure to imitate that.
it was awsome so shut the fuck up ur making no sense hes not even fat ur the one probably sitting at the pc eating a bag of doritos u dumb fat shit, i bet YOU suck big ones ur just mad bc u think ur better and i dont see u posting any videos which gives u NO room to talk so i would shut it if u cant prove it u fuggin asshole >:( and btw ur username SUX ASS!!!
iloveyourkunt- dont even start talking about people being fat. trevor from the black dahlia murder aint the smallest guy in the world, do you have a problem with him too? what about corpsegrinder from cannibal corpse? dont even fucking start kid.
maybe his headbanging was a little weak and unecessary, and at times off tempo? which it was, but your comment isnt going to change that now is it? please leave youtube.
no. its like, only a couple yearz.
furrny1998 1 week ago
WUT THE FUCK IZ THIS BULLSHIT!!! >:O
furrny1998 1 month ago
@furrny1998 a really REALLY old video :D
Cypher858 1 week ago
hnnnnnnggg
Metalguitaristable 1 year ago
@Metalguitaristable glad you liked dude! check my new channel! cypher858
:)
Cypher858 1 year ago
ahh alright dude but not good enough for whitechapel....
watchthispk 1 year ago
@watchthispk
yeah i know, my lows have gotten better since then :-\
i was only 15 at the time of this video xD
Cypher858 1 year ago
heh where did you get that clock? its trippy as hell.
123four20 1 year ago
@123four20 at a target actually xD
Cypher858 1 year ago
you look like an emo covering this song
Tscargs4549 2 years ago
@Tscargs4549
labels are retarded.
Cypher858 1 year ago
phail
jk47hm4 2 years ago
Dude, you should do a cover of my band:
Search Aegaeon
Epicbrutality 2 years ago
i love your lows, i want them, you oughtta check my highs if you get around to it =]
thisisthomasjordan 2 years ago
from what i can tell, you got the lows taken care of. im assuming you're doing them properly.
except you say "spread it on your face" where "let them know in hell" belongs, no biggie
yeah you got good lows
highs need work.
and its take ONE final breath,
but you know the lyrics damn well.
tell me, listen closely to the first time he says "the moisture in your eyes is dehydrating" instead of moisture DOESNT it sound like water? first time he says it only
HexOfTheRitual 2 years ago
ur lows are good, there a different style then phils though, ur highs are alright needa little more work ur using so much air to do them, try to stay up to the pace other then that its good
Check mine OUT!!!!!
rangers4life92 2 years ago
thanks for the criticism! and you got some good stuff! if you wanna collab let me know :D
nukem858 2 years ago
Uhh..... Maybe sit a little more still next time.
But as for the vocals...there decent.
holwad9454 2 years ago
you made a fool of yourself with the dancing. but holy shit, your great, where do you live?
JeremyJamessMusic 2 years ago
hah! I KNOW xD
it looks stupid if you get too into it by yourself but i cant help it :P
it looks better on stage
and i live in minnesota
nukem858 2 years ago
you suck you inhaling bitch.
21221011224885 2 years ago
i didnt do a single inhale.
nukem858 2 years ago
LEE ^>^
this is the first time ive actually watched these...
youre very very good :D
-bells ;)
thelastsomething 2 years ago
thanks a ton bella :D
glad you liked it!
nukem858 2 years ago
wow much better dude
u have really good lows
they kinda remind me of mine
i might try this is exile
prorock91 2 years ago
i was thinking of that too! maybe we could collab!
nukem858 2 years ago
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Let me know what you think of my covers
6tem6per6 2 years ago
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6tem6per6 2 years ago
your lows r really. yo've got a good high too. amplify that shit and u may not have to work sooooo hard to sing it loud. therefor, being able to have some more breaths lol
greg66456 2 years ago
hah ya fersure, i got a vocal amp and a mic now so i just need to figure out how to get my camera to stop being gay...
nukem858 2 years ago
i got a new vocal vid up. amplified this time. go check it out
nukem858 2 years ago
fucking nice man.
you're kick-ass on the
low parts. good job. :D
Whitechapel393 2 years ago
why thank you =D
nukem858 2 years ago
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6tem6per6 2 years ago
Great job man, sounded really good. The best thing about Phil Bozeman's vocals is that he enunciates his words so well. Work on that, (curving your throat to form the sounds of the consonants) also work on your breaths, (breathing at the right time, etc)
I'm a terrible vocalist but I can point out some things. great job, put some more vocal covers up.
NealHXC 2 years ago
thank you sir! and ya phil's enunciation is rediculous... i try my best and usually the words come out pretty cleanly... at times they get muffled though *usually when im running out of breath*
and ya the breathing is rediculous... i dont know how phil can breathe so little...
nukem858 2 years ago
Yeah man he's a monster. Just as long as you know what you're working towards, you'll be fine dude. Keep practicing :)
NealHXC 2 years ago
hah big thanks =D
nukem858 2 years ago
i love how into it youget. haha. ....lobsterrrrrr
xDpunkBx 2 years ago
lobster :P
nukem858 2 years ago
Your just not very good.
RylanVSPredator 2 years ago
thats a matter of opinion and honestly i dont care for yours...
nukem858 2 years ago
Than don't put videos up on youtube pussy.
RylanVSPredator 2 years ago
i put it up for the people who enjoy it... i just dont care for your opinion.
nukem858 2 years ago
Well I don't see how anyone can enjoy it.
You lick balls at performance.
RylanVSPredator 2 years ago
again... your opinion...
nukem858 2 years ago
Okay fat ass.
Ask ANYBODY if they think you move cool.
RylanVSPredator 2 years ago
wow you are really annoying
and im getting sick of this... blocking you
nukem858 2 years ago
i think you did a good job(:
EllieJayden 2 years ago
your a dick
omgih8youcone 2 years ago
all you screw off. This is my old guitarist! he is a cool dude, and has some vocal talent he is workin on. (lee.. this is mike) I was impressed with the cover. i wanna give you a couple words. 1. Get your lows lower, and highs higher, your on the brink, you just gotta find the sweet spot!! BRAVOOO.. 2nd you should stop doin covers and try and find YOUR sound. you got a good sound. i can hear it. just FIND it. Great job man. PS. YOU ROCK for not cupping like all the emos out there
pball1331 2 years ago 2
hah thanks mike :P love you dude
and ya cupping is for fags :D
i love your tips though
lows = lower
highs = higher...
erm okay? xD
wow
and i am working on some of my own stuff... its just that its hard to do so when you dont have a band to play it... ive been workin on guitar more than vox though... i have seen lots of improvement on my lows as of late... gutturals a more... guttural... highs are about the same :P
thanks for the comment dude
nukem858 2 years ago
Cupping is for fags?!
Ha!
Okay...?
That makes no sense.
RylanVSPredator 2 years ago
cupping the mic gives it an unnaturally deep sound that should be achieved through actual vocal work. not the way you position your hands... dumb ass
nukem858 2 years ago
No, it makes sure that your scream goes directly into the mic so that you can hear the whole scream.
RylanVSPredator 2 years ago
hah you dont know shit man
nukem858 2 years ago
don't even try to debate with him. you already lost. so, if you have a little problem with it, bitch about it to me. thanks. :)
xDpunkBx 2 years ago
Damn he was your old guitarist?
That sucks.
I can see why it's OLD guitarist.
He licks.
RylanVSPredator 2 years ago
no im his old guitarist because our band split up... not because i was kicked out... dude why do you bother commenting on my videos? jealous? cuz it fuckin seems like it
nukem858 2 years ago
Ha!
Yeah I'm so jealous.
You lick.
I'm better than you.
RylanVSPredator 2 years ago
hah... w/e man
why do you care so fuckin much?
nukem858 2 years ago
lee mintz... nobody likes you
gigglebunny4 2 years ago
rot in hell?
nukem858 2 years ago
try to keep your highs under control, dont go out of the range. this aint bmth. more pronunciation in the lows will actually make it sound much more fluid. also, dont bend over when on long notes or any notes for that matter, it'll actually make it sound much more forced since your compacting your lungs. a forced sound is the opposite of what you want. other than that your not terrible. lastly, focus on the words and sounds that are stressed in the original song and make sure to imitate that.
sean8 2 years ago 3
thanks! will do :D
nukem858 2 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
That is the wimpiest headbanging I've ever seen, you look like such a pussy faget
and I like how your holding your fat rolls down so they dont jiggle.
Your a homo and you look like your about to suck a big one everytime you start singing
ILoveYourKunt 2 years ago
thank you for your honest criticism... i look forward to hearing more from you in the future random youtuber with a horrible username
nukem858 2 years ago
it was awsome so shut the fuck up ur making no sense hes not even fat ur the one probably sitting at the pc eating a bag of doritos u dumb fat shit, i bet YOU suck big ones ur just mad bc u think ur better and i dont see u posting any videos which gives u NO room to talk so i would shut it if u cant prove it u fuggin asshole >:( and btw ur username SUX ASS!!!
XxXEmoGurlGaaraXxX 2 years ago 3
thanks for your support :P
however there is no need for retaliation like that :P
just let assholes be assholes... no need to lower yourself to their level :P
thanks for the sub though :D
nukem858 2 years ago
your welcome and sorry ur right, i just sorta get mad when ppl sit there and critisize other people so rudely in public and it doesnt even make sense
XxXEmoGurlGaaraXxX 2 years ago 3
i hear ya... its just no better to respond in such a way.... its reactions like that that makes saying those stupid things so fulfilling for them
nukem858 2 years ago
iloveyourkunt- dont even start talking about people being fat. trevor from the black dahlia murder aint the smallest guy in the world, do you have a problem with him too? what about corpsegrinder from cannibal corpse? dont even fucking start kid.
maybe his headbanging was a little weak and unecessary, and at times off tempo? which it was, but your comment isnt going to change that now is it? please leave youtube.
sean8 2 years ago 3
nice headbanging!!!
tbonepearson 3 years ago
hah, thanks man :P
nukem858 3 years ago
..................
FatalCombatFatality 3 years ago
lol very nice i love it! make more videos like this one..
haunted1818 3 years ago 2
will do
nukem858 3 years ago
heyy this is reallyyyy good! and good choice on song:P
tallbs20 3 years ago 2
THANKEEEZ! glad you like ittt
nukem858 3 years ago
DUDE THIS IS EPIC!
trecoolfreak20 3 years ago 3
why thank you :D
nukem858 3 years ago
lol...
plantman7589 3 years ago
i like it i like it i like it this is alexx by the way danni's bfffffl (:
alexxCAUGHTFIREEx3 3 years ago 2
I've heard you do this song before.
:]]]
I'm jealous of your skillz.
Bella9879 3 years ago 2
this is still a much better version than the one you saw :P
nukem858 3 years ago
my babbyy
xDpunkBx 3 years ago
I IZ NAWT YUR CHILD O.o...
nukem858 3 years ago
You rock man keep up the work
pronas09 3 years ago
RAWRRRRR i eet choo 0.0
nukem858 3 years ago
meanie....
pronas09 3 years ago
whos this loser?! :D
outloudAMY 3 years ago
some fag... not sure really
nukem858 3 years ago
NICE :P!
ashyashy1993 3 years ago
tanksh verry much :O
nukem858 3 years ago