[Short Story] A Birthday Present

[Butterflyhearts223]

WHY??

[PinkPiggy900]

It was super cute that the little sister maded her a card! BUT THE SISTER DIDNT HAVE TO GO AND GIVE HER A BLACK EYE! F**K THAT SISTER

[mrayvinm]

That's child abuse

[chocostar205]

i hate that sister -.-" abuse other ppl only

[chewybubbles1648]

wow sad story mathhomework is specialer than a sister i hate her!

[annoyingorange12able]

Would cry and m family would confiscate my com:(

[annoyingorange12able]

I really need to stop watching sad shows I wou

[xVanessax123]

Poor Girl! Maths Homework? Is that more important? T-T

Wow -.- But good episode.

[Skyler6627]

i needa stop watchingsad shows i keep crying then my family keep yelling at me and saying why u crying bitch D:

[kennykid10]

OMG if I was in there I will punch her poor lil sis D:

[MegaChicken30]

my question is......DID THE KID DIE IN THE END OR DID SHE JUST LYE ON THE GROUND LIKE SOME TWAT LOL XD!!! I MAKE COMMENTS LIKE THIS ON ALL THE VIDEOS I WATCH!

[xMyleeful]

BS BACKGROUND CLOSED,....WAHHH I LOOK EVERYDAY IM DYING PLEASE PLEASE....please help...

[shana2o2o]

that wa soo simple

[monkeylove880]

that little girl was soo cute and she always had a smile on her face :]

[HahaLaffyTaffyX]

WHAT THE FREAK ?????

[amb9er]

This is sad... but im just wondering.... Whatd the little girl do with the money her mommy gave her? XD

[o0BlueMagixo0]

when the sister was beating the sibling i was like "cmon..cmon...when will the mom come?? shes coming right...cmonnnn"

[abner3242]

what kind of bitch would do that to thire siblins

[xKandiiGirlx]

Come on,it's just your math homework...IS IT SERIOUSLY WORTH BEATING YOUR INNOCENT LIL SIS UP FOR?

[ZoeLovejoy]

i'm gonna do a happy ending:

The mom finds the little girl and takes her to the emergency room and she turns out okay.

Then the sister has her texting privilges taken away for 18 months. Also, she's not allowed to date or go out with friends. then she's also grounded for 3 years. oh, and no candy.

[chihuahuagirl121]

Jeez that little girl didn't know it was your math homework you b*tch

[PrettyPrincess1770]

my bo hits me (bad) then i smack him with a phone book =]

[RawrRawrRandomify]

The older sister's logic is so in relation to mine that it's funny.

[gabygirlify]

good thing I don't have a lil' sis ( I'm the only girl O_o)

[XAngelSpiritsX]

omg my sister is like dat too Dx she keeps hitting me even though i try to help her Dx

[Ikuto4Life]

@XAngelSpiritsX SAME!!!!!

[XAngelSpiritsX]

@Ikuto4Life Lol sisters suk Dx

[Gamergirl21234]

Wow that was a good story......

[xPancakeHead]

hey i like the video but i can't believe a sister would do that! My sister always bought me things from the corner store when i was young and i used to cut up her homework (i had an obsession of cutting things.. LOL) my sister just redid it! ( I was really sorry too :/) If any older sister like hits their little sis if they did something wrong by accident and still didn't care when the little sis apologizes, They should go get beat up..

[jmccooper07]

I cried so hard reading this cause she was just trying to help T.T I'm still crying

[MaRsC0okieZ]

that sister was MEAN D<

has she ever heard of something called an.......  ERASER? D<!!!

[MistyandAshForever]

@MaRsC0okieZ If she used a pen, how can a eraser be useful?

[MaRsC0okieZ]

@MistyandAshForever O XDDDD lol i knew that owo.....

[Holyalcad]

O.o that was....... Just strange o.o so is she sleeping or did she die from getting abused by what I assume to be a 15 year old girl? Also the homework you get in high school isn't that much.... Way to over react :O

[OuchThatsLipSyncFail]

Owwh cute ;3

Whats it made on? xx

[MsPikapower123]

if i were writing on my bro's math homework he won't kill me he'd probably just make a new one plus if she told you she was making you a present then why the hell be so mad?

[DaJoshDude]

Sister so mean :o

[tatum7605]

Did yuh make this up?

Or did u get it off a websight? -tatum7605

[xPiNKyHEiDix]

i like how it didn't end up with her dying -.-

[fanny628628]

STUPID. 89749578YHWIUGHIYFGGTHIF. DARN SISTER GO FREAKING DIE WHICH FREAKIN SISTER BEATS THE YOUNGER ONE.????!!!! Big Sisters Are Born First To TAKE CARE of The Younger Ones $%^&*(^&*^&*^*& F5 You can call me crazy or w/e. BUT i'm a bigger sis to my half sis.

[EeveeChan132]

tht is messed up T n T poor little sis. y couldnt she jus erase it instead of beating her up o_e ppl nowadays and their lack of caring

[AsianDorksable]

Wasn't the mom supposed to do somehing about it? LOL.

[MegaPrincess1998]

Did her little sis died? ause of her big sis punching her

[Bubbl3sx3]

Omg if I was the big sister I would forgive her. My big sister always beat me up when I was young. Great vid :(.

[MultiOreo2]

lol the little kid should have falcon punched her sister, therefore knocking her unconscious :D

[ZoeyXp]

Omg that's one mean sis!

[ZoeyXp]

Omg that is one mean sister!!!!

[XkimmyXProductions]

STUPID FAG SISTER D: -CRIES - OMG HELP ME I CANT STOP SHES SO CUTE D: IMA KILL THAT BITCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH­HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH­HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH­HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH­HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH­HHHHHH D: -SOB SOB SOB SO B SOB-

[lili1234ist]

@XkimmyXProductions oh,alright!!*pats her head* come on,you know that if u and i were there we could have beat that FAGGOT UP!OMG NOw I KNOW HOW U FEEL, IM GETTING PISSED OFF TOO!!

[hazelcc]

sibling abuse! geez, that older sister could just erase the drawing...COULDNT SHE?! Unless the little sister uesd pen...which I think is impossible? o_o; anyways, BEATING UP THE LITTLE SISTER FOR A FKING MATHS HOMEWORK IS ABSURD.T^T

[LilGreenPandax3]

ish your name rosie? :O

[Wafflemonger123]

who the heck killz some1 for the most retarded reason like that

[Aliiscool123]

this video taught me a lesson o-o

[Dray781]

i <3 this

[mandeyhuga3]

the sisters a fag -.- (the older one)

[xXAznRisingXx]

This is what would happen to me nearly everyday, my sis will beat me up. Though i can't even find my sister's math homework cause its all on her comp xD but, she would beat me up before i would even get to her homework :P

[emilya321cprocks]

Awww this was almost going to make me cry but i didn't it was okay and remind me of my older sister yelling at me but never hurt me... because she would get in trouble and things like that =[ It was a good short story to younger kids and older kids if they ever have a young sibbing =D

[Starrykid101]

D: this is honestly the saddest story out of all the short stories I've ever watched D: Stuff like this video like when a puppy dies for not being good enough for it's owner makes me sad D:

[lolfrankz]

She got PWNED XD

[jessy1683]

@lolfrankz Man ... do u like a little girl got pwned? WTF? i dont is sad but i have a question O_O she die or no? its like shes dizzy or something (i dunno say much english cuz im Korean Live in Brazil) -.-''

[CL0v3]

I would pee on my sister's clothes if she did that. LMAO. :D (PS. I never peed on anyone's clothes. -__- just saw on tyra show a story. lol a fight)

[iLuckiCharms]

DAM 

[SarahhFever]

wow so sad really like the big sister is a ass the little one loved her and she wouldnt let her give you a present like dam im crying

[vampireluvskisses]

If I had a little sister (but sadly I don't -.-") and she was making something for my b-day and it's on my homework I would be mad but then I would be happy that she is even making somthing for me so I'll just finish my homework later ^^

[MsLolacute]

Sister should not fight this a great story though

[FaLLinD0wn]

@chocolategirl241 you know.. Some people spend hours on math homework...

[D3vill33vil2]

man her sis is mean

[dghjgtty]

my sis treated me the same way i was stuck inc ounciling for 3 years cuz of it.

[sneeuwwolven]

what is her maple name, Im going to magic claw her ass!F5

[iLuckiCharms]

hai the video is so sad i cried really hard like hell my sis calls me bad words that wat she do to me and i never get her presents lol

[princessmarrissa]

lol when this happens you have an excuse for getting answers wrong

[VivianLuux3]

Aww! That's just soo mean!

[chocolategirl241]

F*CK U OLDER SISTERif i was a a big sis( i am not a big sis but younger but i dont have any sisters only 2 bros.) I WOULDNT GET MAD AT HER I WOULD JUST REWRITE!!!

[XBlakkuDiamondX]

Stupid sister D:<

[BabyBeegirl76]

I feel the same way for my sister.... when it was her birthday I needed money but my dad wouldn't give me money and my mom was working hard so I cried when it was her birthday and made her a card instead i was so sad!!!!

[youking1959]

WHAT A BAD BIG SISTER!SHES SO MEAN!!

[SStansijieXX]

so sad :( i wanan cry like siao

[PockyThePanda]

Damn fucking big sister

[9missymiss]

is it fiction?

[MirandaXPP]

omg i cried hard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that poor little girl.. she was being so nice unlike her sister T-T

[lady1998theresa]

omg she hurt her lil sis damn who would do a thing i mean i have 3 lil brothers & 1 lil sis but i wouldn't hurt them

[Unexpected1997]

(on her birthday) Happy Birthday Sissy! I messed up your hmk for you! LOL. But seriously who the h*ll would beat up their siblings just cause of a lil hmk? + how'd the lil sis write on a fully written hmk sheet? wouldn't it be filled with words? No offence I cant stop myself. I'm a rlly bad critic :(

[ixPLUSHIIE]

D; The Sister Is So Evil ! How Could She Beat Her Lil Sis ?! D; She Is Just A Small Kid ! She Don't Know Anything :(

-Sobs-

[lady1998theresa]

did she kill her lil sis?

[powerboy128]

wtf

[blackXtulip]

OK! im not gonna do REALLY BAD stuff to my siblings... but i can yell at them :) if they steal my mobile.. ill try getting it back or give up.. or if they hit me or pull my hair.. ill pull it back... XD lol

[xhappypie]

wow that sissters mean

[Luna96599]

i wouldv'e just told the girl to not do it again and give her a blank piece of paper.

no one fights! :D

sad..... but i love the vid

[sweetncandi3]

I would always Lub My siblings <3 no matter what they do to meh.... If they make me a card on my homework ill bring it to school and go "LOOK WHAT MY BROTHER/SISTER MADE FOR ME <3 ISNT THAT SWEET <333"

[blackXtulip]

ya.. ur right... But my lil bro is just so... UGH!

he sometimes gets on my nerves.. yet, he is only 3!!!!!!!

[Kinachii]

I will never abuse my siblings like that ever! T-T

[starprincess2300]

ehh my brother.... oh never mind

[Maplesprite51]

omg thx u i never abuse my sibilings

[XJeffreyLinX1]

I Don't Quite get how she learn anything 1-1 (sister)

I'm sure glad mine Sister isn't like that :D

[josepi56]

The ending was............

[shybabe132]

crying so bad good job

[Sailormoon2778]

the sister should have give the sister the money so she does'nt have to write in her homework

[suziethekittycat]

so sad what kind of bitch of a sister would do that?! T-T

[XkimmyXProductions]

SAD. SAD.SAD. -SOBS-

[xSeraphicAngelx]

T-T Godd .. Im So Gladddd I Dont Have Any Sisters T-T Well , I Got Brothers O-o But THEY Are Totally Different T.T

[blackXtulip]

LOOOOOOOOOOOL ''what are u doing?....''

''MAKING U A PRESENT! -SMILES AND KEEPS WRITING'' -SILENCE- ''THATS MY MATH HOME WORK U DODO!!!'' (NOTE: I USE THE WORD DOD AS IDIOUT OR DUMB) ''OH SNAP!!! EVIL BIG SISTER GOING TO HUNT ME DOWN!''

[lLOVEPlNK]

fk.

[iJeNniFeRr]

Sissy is so sissy. Get it? I think not. xD

[fishyswimmy0w0]

i'm afraid i do

>:D

[iJeNniFeRr]

O.O

[moonlightstar859]

so sad D:

[emoXitachi]

if i was her *wich im not* id get up and smack her face in with a chair >:F

[ILuvCandiii]

i think it would be beter if the sister didnt give her the money

so she goes to a random dudes house and works for him for money

but the dude beats her

and in the end she dies and the sister feels sorry she didnt give her the money.

if only the sister knew it was for a present.

i lyk this way more but this one's ok too :D

[animejob204]

i hate sissy!Dude you can just erase the work she did on your math paper and do it again!

[SerinaTheSailorGirl]

excuse me, may I have a hankie? D:

[animejob204]

*passes the hankie*

[Maplegirlable]

the little girl i wish i had her for a sister i odont have a sister

the bigg "sissy" is a bitch -.-

[Ayu198]

Just redo the math homework, B*tchy sissy -__-

[janel199]

tat sister so violent =-=...poor girl

[cece55443]

aww sad

[CreamyLight]

aww D: mean sister D:

[xoHugzKissesxo]

tissue please?? :'(

[RawritzCookies]

Soo Sad D; I Feel Bad For Her She tried sooo hard</3

[hamster199]

OMG.. SHE'S SO CUTE! the little kid.. omfg at the "Sissy" she's such a faggot D:

[xHoneyDewx3]

wtf is wrong with the sister

i mean even if she was drawing on ur homework

and she said she was making her a present

then u would be like its ok

u don't need to beat her up

[princessmarrissa]

@xHoneyDewx3 lol "Oh yeah teacher, my sister aws making a present for me.." And that IS when you call the teacher just so she understands if some of the questions are wrong..

[XAXOrangeXAX]

aww i hate that sister even if she barrowed money,The girl could even pay it bakk

[yoojin0629]

that poor little girl is soooo sweet but her sissy is sooooo mean....... >:(

[jaksplitter]

wtf?

[misskaylee01]

aww :[

good story! great moral!

[BlahYAYME]

o.o so what happened to her? o.o

[JLee61900]

it was sad but cool. make more vids Cloris =]

[9taillesfox]

Sissy has flying powres ^_^

[sandralee0625]

THAT BIG SISTER! DX. Thats so sad...if I wrote on my sister's paper she would'nt kill me..oh and I wouldn't write on her paper..a blank one?

[xrosieheart]

Oh, the little sister didn't know it was her homework. I guess she just took it and started drawing, but never checked what was on the back.

Sorry that wasn't very clear. :p

[azaukat]

@xrosieheart my brother did that to my english hw once... x___x except he did it on my work D:

[Atrociously]

Wow, you're good. o:

[bluegirl123321]

Oh it's so pretty!

[DanyGummy]

flying powers , lol

this story is really cute *-*

name the girls 8D

[ilymostevilx3]

Clo-Ris of Tape land did you get more? :] TEALLLL ftw :3 stop being depressing, my god.

[xrosieheart]

Yes, I did. My mom bought me teal and orange. But I don't liek the orange. I think she's obsessed with tape too cause she says she wants to buy the white one. o_o

Btw, I'm making a Car Journal, liek the one we have for Thigpen, except it's for our project things.

[LoVeMeViEt]

So sad .

[btecleo]

o.o

[Theatriics]

Awh..

poor sissy :[

[iMichelleeeeee]

wow, x_x

[babydragonball]

I like this video.you will do anything for your love one,i think it is the message in the video.Right?

[xrosieheart]

Yeahhh and how you shouldn't get angry and do something that may cause you to lose your loved ones, because they can never be replaced.

[iRejected]

O_o. What the. I don't get it. Is it supposed to be sad? ):

[xrosieheart]

LOL Pam.

It's just supposed to show how hard this girl worked to get a present for her sister and how badly she wanted to please her. But in the end, over a small mistake, she was beaten up, without her sister ever knowing how much effort she put into it.

[iRejected]

.. At least you didn't make her die this time. Dx

[xrosieheart]

I might delete this and add more to it so that it makes more sense. But I'm kinda lazy.

[iRejected]

Omgosh. o: Haha. Okay. You should (:

[xrosieheart]

I dont have that much free time. D: