'The Concrete Garden' - Dan Tee (Original SCARY Poem)

[TheRedhub]

unibrown

[dan9tee]

@TheRedhub Unibrown?? :D

[TheHypePullsHost]

haha the warning makes it

[redsoxfan245]

ur badass accent makes it ten times more scaryer!

[MisLunas]

buenisimo!!!! 5**********

[desgonag]

Beautiful and scary. Can i please use your poem to recite in a speech. I promise to credit your poetic work. Cheers!

[dan9tee]

Oooh, absolutely! I'm flattered you'd like to use it. Thank you for your ace comment. Let me know how the speech goes. Dan =:D

[MoriKAshi]

hey, can i use this for a song im making? thanks

[dan9tee]

Sure, no worries. Just gimmie a credit and I'll be happy! Cheers! Dan =:D

[MoriKAshi]

Ok. Ill give you credit for sure! Thanks!

[tigerus3]

tonight we won´t sleep thanks to you. lol 5 stars

[dan9tee]

Sorry!!!

[irishcircusgirl]

i found this sexy not scary!

[dan9tee]

Well, those were horny ghosts who were after me!! Thank you thank you circus girlie!! =:Dan

[FieryAshes]

Oh my God, so awesome ^_^ I like it. But it's hard to scare me even if it's like midnight here at the moment, sorry Dan. =:[

[dan9tee]

I was hoping this would scare you senseless... Doh! Lol =:D Thanks for trying to be scared though. I appreciate that =:)

[FieryAshes]

No problem, I'd try my best to be scared for you lol. =:]

[dan9tee]

It's the effort that counts in these things... =:D

[LaiYouttitham]

That what pretty creative it did scared me too!

[dan9tee]

Sorry to scare you budd.. =:D

[gemycat]

scary!!!!!

[dan9tee]

Hi gemycat-Angie, thank you for being scared!! That was the intention!! I hope I haven't given you too many nightmares here... I gave myself some for sure!! Ah!! Cheers m'dears. Dan =:D

[feelgoodnation]

Yowza....creepy,creepy....scar­y scary!

[dan9tee]

Hehe, sorry to scare you Angie.. I hope you're out from behind the sofa now. It's gone, the scary Dan is gone now!! Dan =:D

[feelgoodnation]

Thank you Angelic Dan! You are my hero! : )

[dan9tee]

My pleasure =;)

[1summersweet]

hey Dan, scary! haha.. S.

[dan9tee]

Hi summer sweetness, I'm glad you were scared.. Mwahaha! It's taken me a while to get myself UN-possessed after that ordeal, but I'm fine now. All better. Thank you!! Dan =:D

[vmandanici]

Was it just me, or did you just get whisked away by Snap Crakle & Pop, the 3 satanic midget wizards that reside on the Rice Crispies box? Are you still alive? Will you be responding?

[dan9tee]

WoooOOooooo, it's Dan from beyond the grave. I've come to warn you that Snap, Crackle and Pop are on the rampage in graveyards, sheds, public toilets and occasionally at the breakfast table.. They get you when you least expect it!! They are keeping me as their zombie slave and are feeding me soil and mud. The soil's okay actually, quite tasty, but the mud is too bland for my pallet.. Thank you for checking up on me. Now please spread the word about the three CEREAL killers!! =:DK

[FGAlxPx]

Very nice pictures your draw with your words. Even without gore! I never thought that possible...

[dan9tee]

Thanks Alex, it's great you got the imagery. I'm not subtle very often with horror vids, but this seemed like a good opportunity. I've got loads of poems, so I might do another one!! Most of them are very silly indeed.. Thank you my lovely (people tell me I flirt too much, but I tell them I flirt just enough!) =:D

[FGAlxPx]

*winks* (gore in my eye)

[dan9tee]

Oops, sorry for splattering gore your way... Have you seen 'Black Sheep'? Now that's a great gore-fest!! "Baaaaaaa!!" =:A

[FGAlxPx]

I have not, but I just watched the trailer online and it looks tempting. I hope they show it in theaters here... Ha ha, weresheep.

(Makes me think of PETA though.)

[dan9tee]

I'd definitely recommend it! What's PETA????

[FGAlxPx]

People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals. They burn people who wear fur, that kinda thing...

[dan9tee]

LOL, I don't think any sheep were harmed in the making of the film, so PETA shouldn't be on the case. Whereas the humans... I'm not so sure! =:D

[Oddsweb]

hmmm very talented man you are!! :¬D great poem, and nerve tingling delivery.. :¬D

[dan9tee]

Thank you kindly Samantha. I had to something for Halloween, other than the three parties I went to! I didn't dress up for the party yesterday 'cause I was meeting some people about the documentary. It was a great day, but I'm knackered now. I hope all is going well in the world of Oddsweb! Hugs to you. Dan =:D

[Oddsweb]

cool, so when do we get to see the documentary??? and yes all is very well in Samanthaland.. :¬D

[dan9tee]

Hi Samantha, just noticed this reply.. It's a bit tricky with the documentary actually because it looks as if it's possible to sell it... That means I can only post things that don't appear in in.. What to do, what to do.. It's good news for me personally, but obviously bad for my youtube friends.. I'll see though. There still might be something I can show. I'll do my best!! =:)

[Oddsweb]

Well even if you tell us when its going to be broadcast, that would be great..and yes that is GREAT NEWS !!! :¬D

[dan9tee]

Thanks for understanding Samantha... It's still possible I'll be able to post something, but we'll have to see. Thanks again for your support. Since your reading I've felt 500% better about where I'm going in life. And contracts ARE on the way!! A local talent agency is putting me on their books as we speak!! =:D

[Oddsweb]

ok, now I am getting all excited for you!!!

WOOOHOOOO!! *cough*

Sorry couldnt contain myself there! :¬D Keep me posted...if you dont mind! :¬D It is always great to hear good things happening to great people :¬D

[dan9tee]

Aww, thank you Samantha. I will certainly keep you posted, especially as it's you who has foreseen these things!! *GIVES SAMANTHA A ROSE* =:)

[JossLoner]

very good ;-)

[dan9tee]

Hi Joss, thank you kindly my dear =;)

[beachfrontal]

very spooky, the ganga green night shot thing helped it along,weirdo hahahaha david

[dan9tee]

Hehe, thank you kindly David! I was trying more for an 'opium blue' effect, but hey.. Cheers budd, I'm glad you found it sufficiently spook-tastic! Dan =:D

[beachfrontal]

did you recieve this morning "stop them killing the dolphins" i've sent it again to all my contacts in case they didn't, yours should be there any minute now

[dan9tee]

Hi David, sorry I didn't read the message. It's been a bit mad with messages at present. I'll try to check out the video shortly though. Cheers budd. Dan =:)

[4DRY4N]

Hey Dan scary words man, awesome vid ! 5* A.D. :))

[dan9tee]

Thanks muchly A.D.! Always glad to scare a friend! =:D

[orangepeels03]

im so shaking..brrrr..its getting cold here bro..lol..*

That was a scary poem*

Tnx 4 sharing*

*M*

[dan9tee]

Thank you kindly M. Sorry for scaring you!! =:D

[TomsterMusic]

GOSHH! You WROTED that?! GOOSIEBUMPS! That was entirely COOLNESS!! I had to go turn the heater up after that! LoL! I giveth you FIVE spooky stars with cobwebs on them! ..The BEST kind! MuahHAha!

NOT receiving YouTube videos currently?! MAN.. That's scarier than Halloween! LoL!

AWESOME POEMM VIDEOOO!!

♫ ToMygO! ♫

[dan9tee]

Cheeers Tomygo!! I'm glad you like it. Believe it or not I'm primarily a writer (short stories, poems, scripts, journalism, songs, should I include songs??!) so I've got like 200 poems to choose from! I may only like about 20 of them, but that's not the point... hehe =:)

It really sucks about not receiving videos.. I've turned on all the click box thingies, but no joy.. Definitely send me your videos when you post them.. (though you have anyway!)

DaNygO (wait, that sounds like 'Dan Ego'..) =:D

[TomsterMusic]

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NOW I'm gonna watch! Muahahhaa!

::Grabs popcorn::

[dan9tee]

Hey TomStaaAaah!! Make sure that popcorn isn't haunted.. That stuff can be lethal! It's okay though, because I'm a qualified Exercisist (I'll run that demonic spirit off it's feet!) so no worries. Tanks for da update on dee onaz! And tanks for watchin'! Dan =:D

P.S. I'm not receiving ANY videos at the moment, so I've been missing everyone's... It's a nightmare.. YT needs a facelift or labotomy or something to sort that out!

[Gigolo8]

Very atmospheric, great for Hallowe'en!

5*

[dan9tee]

Thank you kindly Geoff and Chook! I'm glad it was sufficiently creepy! Say hi to Chook from me!! Happy Halloween (kinda late now)!! Wooo! Dan =:D

[enjoythevoyage]

I am in the corner in fetal position, sucking my thumb! Is it over yet? Another nightmare tonight! GREAT job! 5 scary stars!

[dan9tee]

Hey enjoythevoyage, thank you my friend. Sorry for scaring you... Just watch the video again imagining that I titled something like 'Armpits of Wrath' and it won't be scary anymore! Hehe. Dan =:D

[enjoythevoyage]

Armpits are scarier!! LOL!!

[dan9tee]

Doh! Sorry enjoythevoyage.. I thought the armpit thing would help.. Ah well.. I'll just carry on digging this hole over here... =:S

[PaulW2007]

WooooooOOOOOOoooooo! Where do I send the laundry bill? 5/5

[dan9tee]

Hi Paulio! You mean I get a soiling charge? Doh! I knew there'd be a drawback to doing a scary vid.. I hope the stain comes out okay.. Cheers kindly for the 5 budd! Later my man. Dan =:D

[21stCenturyCat]

nice work my friend

[dan9tee]

Hey 21st Century Cat (I know your name's Steve but I'm just being official and polite etc..)! Thank youuuuuu!!! I was in the mood to scare and couldn't hold back... =:o Kind Abasudikan regards. Dan =:D

[amyloader]

#52 - Top Rated (Today) - Entertainment

#47 - Most Discussed (Today) - Entertainment

[dan9tee]

Thanxx!!! =:P

[Riverman1971]

I was watching that with my eyes half closed just in case u roared at the screen or something!! lol. Very good AmYgo. 5*

RobSter

[dan9tee]

Yo RobSter Amygo!! "All for one, and one for three or four or something!!" Would I really roar at the screen..? What do you think I'm like, I mean... Rrrrrrrr!!!! Oops... sorry =:I My bad. Cheeers Robmeister!! Dansterere Dan =:D

[speedypuffy]

wooww how did you do this? can you tell me your secret?:) perfect effect did you use any programme?

[dan9tee]

Hi Speedy, After Effects is a wonderful thing! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Horrific regards (I gotta remember that one!). Dan =:D

[classican]

Good stuff.

[dan9tee]

Hi Pete, thanks man! I hope you weren't too scared... =:o It's not geeenerally my aim to terrify my subscribers.. Dan =:D

[JerryRigs]

COOOL Dan, reminded me of Blair Witch!

[dan9tee]

Hi JerryRigs. Whoa! I love that you compared this with Blair Witch! That film scared the pants off me, even though I knew for sure it wasn't real! Thank you for your COOOOLnesss! Dan =:D

[Racerboy2000]

Lol dan, nice effect @ 0:55.

[dan9tee]

Hi Racerboy, it's wicked you enjoyed that particular effect. It actually freaked me out a little while I was editing it because I hadn't realised it would look quite like that!! Made myself jump =:o Thanks kindly man. Dan =:D

[samsarajade]

cool special effects!

[dan9tee]

Hi Tia, I'm glad you like it! I didn't want to go overboard with the effects (and unleash the full arsenal!!), but hopefully they're just subtle enough for mind and indescribable discomfort! Thanks m'dear. You are one groovy baby, baby! Dan =:D

[amyloader]

You scared me :(

xx

[dan9tee]

Oh Amy, I'm sorry to scare a young and impressionable mind such as yours.. I will slap myself on the wrist and get my mum to tell me off next time she sees me (she can be harsh!). Dan =:D

[amyloader]

Sounds like my mum.lol

[dan9tee]

Amy: Hehe, I reckon our mums would get on! We must never let them meet, or it will be them who take over the world =:O

[amyloader]

Now that is a scary thought.lol

Amy xx

[dan9tee]

My mum will probably read this too!!! No!! =:O

Okay, she's not THAT bad. Actually (aware that she's reading this), she's an amazing, wonderful, lovely lady with a great attitude and mothering skills! =:D

[amyloader]

Haha,i would just like to say i love my mother very much really, she's a chicken. xx

[dan9tee]

Amy: So is mine really.. Hehe, they really would get on! lol =:D

[ParkourKings]

u sound some much different did you use some effect or something ?

[dan9tee]

Hey parkour Chris buddy! I used a filter to boost the bass in certain parts of my voice. It's a great effect because it sounds natural and it's hard to put your finger on what's different =:) Cheers dude! Dan =:D

[iggy35]

Yikes!! lol

Hope you had a great Halloween!

[dan9tee]

It was a pretty good one thanks. After three Halloween parties though, I'm all Halloweened-out I think.. Thanks budd! Dan =:D

[iggy35]

roll on christmas lol

[dan9tee]

There's been a Christmas tree in the supermarket since September!! I'll think Christmas is over by the time it arrives... =:S Well, Christmas is all about Jesus, so I'll go hang out with him for the holiday! =:D

[Tahllulah]

Dan!! Dan!!! Are you okay!? Daaaaannnnnn!!!!!!

[dan9tee]

Hi Cindy, I'm afraid I didn't make it... Doh! Those ghouls really take the biscuit.. I'm just trying to make a deal with the Grim Reaper to come back to life. At least he's letting me type this message, so it's not all bad! Cheers m'dear. Dan =:D

[Tahllulah]

oh MY! It looks like they took the biscuit AND Dan....

[dan9tee]

I've just noticed, they've left the biscuit! Those cheeky ghosty people.. Well, I'll tell them off for taking my soul n' stuff. They'll never learn unless someone stands up to them! =:D

[Tahllulah]

LOL! How can I LAUGH at a time like this...? Amazing! Anyhoo, eat the biscuit, Dan...that could just be the secret to getting out alive!

[dan9tee]

"Look into the light..", "Eat the biscuit.."... I'm getting a lot of different advice here, but I think I'll go with the biscuit! As long as it's gluten free I'll be all good.. and alive! Yey! =:D

[eefgirl]

yes it's creepy sweetheart very well done

[dan9tee]

Thank you kindly Eef. I hope I didn't scare you too much!! Dan x