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  • I like it!

    - Without the darkness, how could we recognize the light?

  • Joyous!

  • @1stPrincessKelly Thank you! I am glad you liked it :)

  • Nice poem! I love to hear original poets

  • @meanmrmustard89 Thank you - I really appreciate you stopping by!! Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful imagery. Reminds me of a short poetic story. I really like it!

  • @TonyeStarr1 Thank you! I am pleased you enjoyed my writing!! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful imagery. Reminds me of a short poetic story. I really like it!

  • Very nice poem you have wrote.

    I have submitted my Shadowed world poem as a Video response.

    I would be greaful for some feedback.

    Im going to subscribe to you anyway.

  • Hello! Thank you for your comment and vid response - sorry for the delay in replying - I have been away. I will take a peek at your poem :)

  • So Wonderful SunBeam! Thank you

  • Hello...:) Welcome to my Channel...Thank you kindly for commenting on this poem - gave me the chance to listen again...hehe :) I enjoyed making this video to present my poem - it gives back to me greatly when others enjoy it too - so thank you :) With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • beautiful my dear, i am a poet also, blessings to my poetical sister :)

  • Ahh.....thank you. What a beautiful comment :) I appreciate your kindness! Sunbeam :)

  • You are quite right...."I found this place of heaven, because it was on the other side of the hell you pushed me through"....

    wrote this Club17(syllables, forces to go to the core of the matter)

    Club 17. 10-2003

    To know Heaven you need Hell as black needs white, by Reality forged!

    Loved your poem.

    Written at Secret location.

  • Hi Gian! Thanks for that comment and sharing your Club 17. Really apprecoate you stopping by! Sunbeam :)

  • Your words are a blessing to us all thank you for your beautiful presences and timely gift *****

    Hugs from the heart to yours shining

    Rab x

  • Thank you Rab :) Your words lifted me up a little today :) Sunbeam :)

  • well, . . .

  • speechless?.....

  • yeah, . . . i guess, . . . words are interesting, . . . while we can entertain intangible and otherworldly concepts by giving them some tangible form, streaming them in shaped sounds, there are of course, instances wherein our words pale before the thing itself; so, . . .

  • Your poem and video is lovely. Keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing your talent.:)

  • alagumbo: Hello - I am sorry I am so late replying to you! I appreciate you stopping by my Channel and your kind comment. Sunbeam :)

  • THANK YOU !!!

    very good poem!

    and what is that piano song?

    thank you

  • Chia1432: Hello and welcome to my Channel.

    The piano music is a piece called 'Awaiting Return' - the website where you can download it is in my text box over to the right.

    Sunbeam :)

  • Your poems are outstanding.

    Have you written or published a book of your poems? I suggest you do one day. They are very well written as well as vocalized. Wonderful work. You have me almost at a loss for words. Very nice.

  • Hi Chuck :) Thank you. I have many poems and am progressing getting them published into a first volume of Sunbeam's poetry. I would like to take them out to a wider audience. I am touched that this poem moved you. Thank you for watching :)

    Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful video! Thank you so much for sharing this - well done! xxx

  • Hello :) Welcome to my Channel. I am glad you enjoyed this poem/video - here's wishing you the best for the weekend!

    Sunbeam :)

  • Powerful words.

    Thankyou.

  • tuktukskagal: Hello :) Thank you kindly for stopping at my Channel and listening to this poem. I am glad you found something in my words:)

    With kindest wishes,

    Sunbeam :)

  • This made me ponder on the expression,"it is better to have loved and lost, than not to have loved at all." I think a new verse could be added to the effect, "It can be a great thing to have loved and lost, so that we might attain new heights of peace, enlightenment and joy. Thank you for the inspiration Jill! :)

  • I think my whole poem 'breathes' the sentiment of your new verse! Am pleased this poem caused you to ponder - thank you for taking the time to view it!!

    Sunbeam :)

  • Great Jill!

    Danny

  • Thanks Danny!! :)

  • Amazing! to good.

    Jason

  • Aww..why thank you kindly :)

    Sunbeam :)

    (That was 2 smiles on 2 lines - see how easy it is....no 'crabby looking dudette' here...LOL ;)...)

  • beautiful and insightful thank you so much!

  • kasia4450: Hello - thank you for taking the time to watch and comment - much appreciated! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • that was moving- poem,video and music

  • hhhaller: TY! I really appreciate you stopping by! Sunbeam :)

  • Lovely words, inspiring, uplifting and beautiful...thank you!

  • Hi Michael :) Oh - that really means a lot from you, one who has inspired me several times already and we only just crossed paths! I am so glad I know of your Channel - if I ever need a pick me up - I can head over there and spend some time with you and the two four-legged ones. Thank YOU for that!! :)

    With best wishes

    Sunbeam :)

  • Gorgeous. Thank you for posting. :D

  • legzandherpiano: Hello and welcome to my Channel! You have an awesome Channel name!! :) TY for stopping by! Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful light was encompassed by wonderful poetry and the melody.

    I was very healed.

    i love this video.

  • JAPANYASUMASA: Hello again, my friend :) I am so pleased this poem meant something to you. With best wishes for the week ahead! Sunbeam :)

  • Wow, Jill. So beautiful, so well-written. True art and infinite talent.

    To say I completely empathize would be putting it mildly. My sister, I've been there, as I'm sure have many, many women. In fact, my wonderful husband is the heaven that was waiting for me after I endured my hell.

    Love you, girl. Thank you. :-)

  • Aww - that is just fantastic and inspires me too!! I hope I have a wonderful husband out there somewhere too and we will find each other some way, some day :)...(I made that bit of the poem up...cos I know that kind of gorgeous, honest love does exist and I am 'calling it to me' in this poem! I will never lose hope!!)

    Thanks so much for watching! Always great to see you!

    Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful! Great stuff love! Cheers.

  • Hey Jimmy! Great to see you - hope you are doing well! Sunbeam :)

  • The shimmering background of your channel made up from the light of your love suits you perfectly. You're amazing Sunbeam because from behind the clouds, you're always able to find the silver lining to create abundant beauty from any obstacle. I always make sure to listen to your poems and watch you recite them as they give me the extra boost and sunshine for the upcoming week.

    Thanks very much & please keep writing and sharing with us.

  • TY for such a beautiful comment. You have started my Sunday off wonderfully :) I am so pleased you enjoy my poems. I am focusing now on getting my first poetry book together and setting up my website, which is taking a lot of my energy, but will be worth it, as both will enable my poems and 'sunbeams' to uplift a wider audience! So, I am posting a little less on YT right now - though another song will be bubbling its way forth soon...lol :)

    TY for your amazing support. It means a lot to me! :)

  • This calms me.

  • Me too :)

  • I came here, on this beautiful autumn morning, to spend a moment with you, and enjoy the splendor of your heart. <3

  • Hi Tom :) Sweet...You know you are welcome anytime. Wish we could have a real cup of tea together and watch those autumn leaves....though my voice isnt quite as 'poetic' when I am just chitter chattering...lol :)

    Have a wonderful weekend, sir - I hope you enjoyed the chinese and being organised by a good woman!! ;)

    Love Sunbeam :)

  • this poem truly touched me.

    Thank you.

    Mirasol

  • Mirasol - Thank you so much for both stopping by here and also for leaving a comment. I am honoured that my poem spoke to you in some way. With very best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • Excellent!

  • lelouchemile: Thank you kindly!! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • très joli kisssssssss

  • kestellekif: Thank you very much!! Sunbeam :)

  • magnifique

  • Merci beaucoup!! :)

    Sunbeam :)

  • c'est une tres belle video +5 merci de l'avoir partager bonne apres midi

  • Merci beaucoup :)

    Sunbeam :)

  • i want to write this kinda thing too.. amazing.. I LIKE !!!!!!!

  • butterfool: Hello :) Welcome to my Channel :) Thank you very much for such a kind comment! Have a wonderful weekend! Sunbeam :)

  • That's a beautiful poem, you should feel proud of yourself. 5*s :-)

    gerdenshed...

  • gerdenshed: Thank you so much for your support...it has a lot of hope in it too :)

    Happy Saturday you!! Sunbeam :)

  • This was great! Wow , I love the way you brought it to life.

  • StackeyB2: Hello :) Thank you so much - I am glad you liked this one. Happy Saturday! Sunbeam :)

  • Hi Sunbeam, Justin told me about this poem today as we were on the beach. He is right, it is flawless. I do believe that we sometimes have to endure the nightmare to get to the dream and our Utopia. I am going to have to spend an evening soon on your channel listening to your poetry. Robby;) ps, added to my faves;)

  • Hi Robby :) Oh - I am so flattered that you two were discussing my poem at the beach...I LOVE the beach..!! TY for coming back and taking a look.

    Come back whenever you can - you are always welcome - I will put the kettle on ready to make you a nice cup of tea and save you a comfy chair, so you can relax while I read to you!!

    TY so much for your continued support and encouragement (and Justin too!!) - I really appreciate it!!

    Sunbeam :)

  • This is flawless!

    justin=)

  • Hi Justin :) Thanks so much for stopping by another poem - really appreciate your support and that you enjoyed my work!! Have a wonderful day! Sunbeam :)

  • I like your poem, the music, imagery and your delivery!!! Simply beautiful.

  • alejandre321: Thank you very much - so pleased you liked it! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • Wonderful Sunbeam-have you been spending time in pre-conscious again?- lovely, just lovely..

    Richard

  • Hi Richard :) This was written a little while ago - and popped out as I was about to watch a movie!! But I guess it did rumble up from there somehow!!....Sometimes I think our hearts and souls work on this stuff in silence and then - out it comes!! :)

  • Shine On Sunbeam!

  • Amazing video!!

    Wonderful poet!! I love your world.

    Much emotion.!!!

  • mozartiikodesu: Hello again :) Thank you so much for stopping by! I am very glad you enjoyed this poem! It was written at the end of a challenging period in my life - just as the sun started to come out again :)

  • I'm going to subscribe. what a beautiful poem. =)

  • theseaangel5: Hello!! Welcome to my Channel! I am not sure how you found me but I am very glad you did! Thank you so much for such a lovely comment and for subscribing - come back anytime - you are always welcome here!

    I am so pleased you liked this poem and really appreciate your support!!

    With kindest wishes, Sunbeam:)

  • This is a wonderful poem. It makes me uncomfortable, which is only a testament to my bad judgement and wicked ways. You seem to reach down and open me like a tin can. Such honesty and plain spoken truth is unnerving. If it weren't so beautiful, I'd run away.

  • moondogg55: You honour me with your comments. I am glad you are not running. Come sit awhile with me anytime - you are totally safe here :)

    I value your support and contribution to my poetry through your feedback more than you know, my new friend. Thank you!

    Sunbeam :)

  • This one so far is one of my Favorites!

  • Hello again!! A lot of people like this one - a wonderful poet on the Channel 1imageofme put this together with a fabulous poem he wrote called 'Out of the darkness'....It was like the two belonged together in a way - I will try and send it to you later - so you can see it - I think you might like it!!

    With best wishes

    Sunbeam :)

  • Very nice, 5*****

  • safeharbor7: Hello! Welcome to my Channel! Thanks so much for watching and the stars!! Come back and visit anytime - you are very welcome!! Sunbeam :)

  • I love poetry and this poem is beautiful! Your imagery and diction is flawless, and your emotions spill out for the reader to feel for themselves. Your poem is abstract, but clear enough for us to understand. This is great. Do you write many poems and do you write other pieces?

  • Hello :) What a beautiful comment! My 5 facts video has a little more on my poetry (and this poem) and my writing in it, as does my 'Hello YT' video...but basically - Yes. I have written a lot of poetry and other bits and pieces.

    I work full-time in a regular job and run a home etc, so I struggle with time - but am determined to get my poetry and other books out into the world at some point.

    Thank you so much for your support. It means much! Sunbeam :)

  • Beautiful, my beautiful Sunbeam.

    You are a beautiful soul. "Clear and pure/Honest and giving" -- oh, how I cherish that...

  • ...and, as oldiesedit said... I shall also cherish your video in my favs section.

  • wordchain: Thank you so much for the fav - I really appreciate that!! And am thrilled you like it so :)

  • wordchain - Thank you so much - I often tell it 'as it is' in my poems - without the complications that can come in other forms of communication!!

  • Oh Jill, this is truly beautiful! So true and communicated with such wonderful images and insightful words! I will cherish this in my favorites!

    Karen

  • Hi Karen - Thanks for stopping by!! Really glad you liked this one! Sunbeam :)

  • what a beautiFULL heart & spirit you create with sweet sunbeam :):):) you illuminate perfectly how poetry is always magic :):):) thank you for this wanderFULLy whimsical WOWfest :):):) always dream~~~dare~~~dive!!! :):):) you'll NEVER walk alone, john :):):)

  • Hello :) Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed this little walk 'into the light'!! :)

  • blissful prose...you have a way with words!!!

  • Thank you kindly!! I appreciate your comment very much! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • Lovely poem ... I enjoyed your reading of it very much.

  • Hello!! Welcome to my Channel - thank you for such a kind comment - am pleased you liked it. With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • However this poem is the imagination of a pleasant waypoint on a journey of neverending growth of all parts stumbling around.

    Let us hope that our hero wasnt kicked from the frying pan into the fire;-)

    The gloominess can rise the light if at least a window will be opened.

    Thanks xxxSunbeamxxx for this high expedient poem !!

  • You're welcome - thank you for taking the time to listen!! :)

  • Shall we be grateful for having made the acquaintance of an enforcer who seems to have been born in order to hurt? For an angel for the purpose of leveraging the bright aspect of all those she/he would stripe?

    My incipient being carried by confidence vanished when I felt misery for the perpetrator's destiny. What a cringing, by what kind of light she/he may be cherished?

    My being a victim with the perspective of a sunbeam may imply a fateful ineradicable guilt of just having been involved.

  • man what a cool poem!very uplifting!

  • Hey you!! Thanks very much - glad you liked it :) Have a great day!! Sunbeam :)

  • I really like this Jill .... oh oh i think i feel some music coming on :))

    mel.

  • Ooh - really?...How exciting!!! :)

  • What darkness we endure is never so deep as where we emerge. A lovely poem of realization and hope from you, Sunbeam.

  • Thank you, sir. A beautiful, touching comment - much appreciated :)

    The darkness may feel like it weakens us as we step through it, but infact it strengthens, I think - and some places can only be arrived at through a journey with more challenging scenery, it seems!

  • How true.

  • Good poem...beautiful reading...

  • Thanks Teddy!! Glad you enjoyed it!! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • HOW DID YOU KNOW?!

    Where you there watching me?

    Or is this a place we all go?

    Only for me I was sitting under a tree...

    )))HUGZ(((

  • Angels know a lot of things ;)...lol...The human experience is largely shared, sir. We may feel separate - but really that's a bit of an illusion, I suspect. I think this might be a place we all go at some time or other. Thanks for watching and commenting!! Sunbeam :)

  • This is beautiful-really made me think. Looks like we might be neighbours-on the youtube scale of things! Hi-pleased to meet you!

  • Hi! Nice to meet you too. Thanks for stopping by and commenting!! I see you stopped making vids for now - let me know if you start up again and I will check them out! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • thx for pointing me in this direction.

    its beautifully written and read. the meaning and hope in this poem struck a chord.

    5 stars

  • I'm pleased!! :) I am a great believer in 'holding on' when things get a lil gloomy...the light isn't far away and the more we trust, the closer it gets somehow...

  • "....the more that sorrow carves itself into your being, the more joy it can contain" - Kahlil Gibran: THE PROPHET (paraphrased)

    ;=]

  • Oh my - I am sorry - I just spotted I missed replying to this...it must have been cos when I first read it - it took my mind to some other zone. Seriously - words can do that to the Poetess in me. Thank you for this reference - it helps me right now more than you realise. Sunbeam :)

  • Thank you for this poem, Jill.

  • You're very welcome :) Thanks for watching and commenting :)

  • Light is a symbol for life and hope. Thank you for the video and nice music!

  • Hello :) Welcome to my Channel. I agree - I love light!! It can change almost everything for the better. Thank you for taking the time to watch and comment :)

  • This is beautiful. I love to hear poetry as spoken by the author as the author brings all the right emotion which seems to be lost in reading for ones self. Thank you so much!

  • Thank YOU, Eva - for taking time to watch!! I love to read my poems - helps bring them to life more somehow....is wonderful when people enjoy it as well - an added bonus!! Sunbeam xoxo

  • beautiful and deep poetry! thnx for sharing this wonderful creation and video! it was a pleasure :)

  • Hello! Welcome to my Channel!! I will be coming to check out who you are in a moment ot two!! :) Thank you for stopping by and watching - I really appreciate your comment! Sunbeam xoxo

  • Lovely way of looking at life. It's been true for me. When things look the worst, something beautiful is right around the corner. And we don't appreciate the blessings nearly as much when we haven't endured great hardships. Thanks for this!

  • Hello :) Welcome to my Channel! Yes - I agree with all you say. I think sometimes about that saying 'The darkest hour is before dawn'....That says it perfectly. Thank you very much for watching and commenting! Sunbeam :)

  • I love this poem !!! My favorite words "I found this place of heaven, because it was on the other side of the hell you pushed me through." Amazing !!!

  • Hello!!! Thank you....Yes - I like that line too. It is something to remember anytime we feel like we are going through 'hell'...'heaven' is surely not far away if we hold on...that's how I comfort myself, anyways!! Thanks for watching - really appreciate it!! Love Sunbeam xoxo

  • Well done.

  • Many thanks, sir :)

  • Truly beautiful, thanks for sharing :)

  • Hello you :) Welcome to my Channel! Glad you liked my poem, With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)

  • I got goosebumps. Wonderful Jill my friend. Love it. Happy Easter to you and a big Hug. Heidi xoxo

  • Hello Heidi :) Lovely to see you.....Thanks for watching ((Hugs)) Sunbeam xoxo

  • hmm.. that was so uplifting, I'm speechless.. Loved it, thanks so much for sharing !!

    Keep up the good work !

    I wish I could give much more stars than just 5 !

    Take care and God bless,

    -Anindya.

  • Wow Anindya! You made my day - thank you...Ummm....Now I'm speechless...lol :)

  • Sorry Jill thats me euk22 I forgot were I was. I just hate when that happens!!!LoL Duke

  • lol..That's ok :) I'll take two comments for one any day...lol...Thanks Duke. Hope you have a wonderful day :)

  • Very Beautiful and Deep!!! Thank you Jill***** Namaste

  • .......:)

  • Amazing commentary on the duality of life. Another great one my dear!!!

  • Hello you :) Thank you for watching and commenting....Hope you are doing well :)

  • REAL BEAUTIFUL....you deserve 10 stars ;-))

  • Mary!!! Thank you so much. What a kind comment!!....Welcome to my Channel also....Lovely to see you. ((HUGS))..Love Sunbeam xoxo

  • Hi Sunbeam. I am so impressed with this poem I hardly don't know what to say ;o) It is truly beautiful and compelling. You are a great writer. I'll be back soon to hear more. -Ron

  • Ron - What a beautiful comment! Thank you. It gives me a lot of joy to know my poetry has touched someone. Have a wonderful day, sir and come back whenever you like!! :)

  • Hi Rick :) Great to see you :) Thanks for popping by....I saved you a comfortable chair, so you could relax as I read....lol...Have a wonderful day, sir :)

  • Thankyou my friend Sunbeam wonderful poem with pretty  pictures love it warm huggs and much love to you with warmth beauty peace & harmony xoxoxxoxo :)

  • Hello :) Thank you for watching....and your kind wishes - as always, brightening my day :) I hope you are well, with kindest wishes, Sunbeam xoxo

  • WOW Jill, Sunbeam...

    5 stars*****

    what a wonderful poem and editing as well - wow ur the whole package -

    I thought it was EXCELLENT...

    xxx

    Proshka

    Angela Gegg

  • Hi Proshka! Lovely to see you, beautiful lady!! Thank you for your kind commments - they mean a lot :)

  • Some brilliant, stunning imagery.

    Great poem!

  • Hi Steve...Thanks for stopping by :)

  • What a beautiful poem! You are a Joy to hear! lovely voice:)adding to the playlist:) 5*****Jane

  • Hi Jane :) Whoo hoo on your playlist!...lol...Have a great day!! :)

  • lovely poem my dear friend Jill! sensitive words ....rajesh

  • Hi Rajesh...Lovely to see you :) Thanks for stopping by!

  • A nice way to start the week, indeed!

  • Hello :) Here's wishing you a fabulous week, sir....

  • Glad you found your way out of the darkness. You don't belong there. Excellent poem. xx

  • Well hello stranger ;) You are right - sunbeams and shadows don't mix too well :) xoxo Love to you today, my beautiful buddy xx

  • You know I enjoy being a bit stranger than most people. ;) Leave the shadows to those of us that can walk through them unscathed. :)

  • what an incredible message, 5 big sparkly stars for this beautiful poem.