Really good writing, but there isn't much emotion in your voice. As a once artist, you need to project your voice more. I honestly from this would get just as much from it being written from this as being read. If you want a good example, take a look at Christopher Walken reading The Raven. He has the perfect tone for the right parts. It may take training, but it'd really make these videos powerful. Keep writing thee\se though man, they're powerful.
Thanks. Actually I had to hold back to get through it. I kept breaking into tears and had to do it again. The only way to get through it was to keep a self-discipline. Even in this take, I barely made it to where it cuts off..there's more behind this than there may appear.
@Neurolanis The funniest part is after reading this I noticed you have a death metal song in the "elated videos" section. Upon reading it again I see the deeper meaning in this; very nicely written.
In a good way tho :)
visionz0 1 year ago
that made me cry :)
visionz0 1 year ago
@visionz0 Wow, thanks for saying. :)
Neurolanis 1 year ago
Nice one. : ) Thank you.
Standardview 1 year ago
Glad you like it. :)
Neurolanis 1 year ago
Really good writing, but there isn't much emotion in your voice. As a once artist, you need to project your voice more. I honestly from this would get just as much from it being written from this as being read. If you want a good example, take a look at Christopher Walken reading The Raven. He has the perfect tone for the right parts. It may take training, but it'd really make these videos powerful. Keep writing thee\se though man, they're powerful.
Ultraman725 1 year ago
Thanks. Actually I had to hold back to get through it. I kept breaking into tears and had to do it again. The only way to get through it was to keep a self-discipline. Even in this take, I barely made it to where it cuts off..there's more behind this than there may appear.
Neurolanis 1 year ago
@Neurolanis The funniest part is after reading this I noticed you have a death metal song in the "elated videos" section. Upon reading it again I see the deeper meaning in this; very nicely written.
Ultraman725 1 year ago
The most beautiful poem I have ever heard. :)
Tylorian 1 year ago
Glad you like it, Ty!
Neurolanis 1 year ago
Great Vid
DvineGaming 1 year ago
Thank you :)
Neurolanis 1 year ago