Good job. I like that you had a lot of information about your topic. I also like that you chose images that create a nice tone to your topic. I would like to suggest that you guys should add some music and some narrative to your video. You should also watch your video to check if you have any spelling mistakes.
Good job! i like that you had lots of information. the transitions are nice. nice and slow enough to read. but i think you should have put music. you also have some spelling mistakes, so you might want to look over it.
Good job Olivia and Samara! I like your informations about child poverty in Canada. My advice for you, I think add some more pictures and what Allison, Paul, and Anna saidabout the background music. But you did a nice job.
Good Job Olivia and Samara. I liked that you had a lot of information and some of your informations made me think about how I spend my money on electronics and these toys that I don't really need. I agree with Paul and Allison, I think you should add background music to make your video better. Also re-read your your paragraphs because I found some spelling mistakes. Try to make your video shorter because you almost went over the limit. "3:00" and your video is "2:58" **Anna Gomez 873
liked that you had lots of stat. information. I suggest that you check over your spelling like "people" in the beginning. I also suggest you give more detail in your information. You should also give evidence on what you did to make a difference. I agree that you should add some music in the back so the message you are trying to send is more provoking.
Great Job, Olivia and Samara. I liked that your information really had lots of meaning. Also I liked that your post gave me something to think about. Although, I think Adding a background music will make it better and you should read over your video because there are some spelling mistakes. Great Job!
Good job. I like that you had a lot of information about your topic. I also like that you chose images that create a nice tone to your topic. I would like to suggest that you guys should add some music and some narrative to your video. You should also watch your video to check if you have any spelling mistakes.
-Kim8-14
spmath789 9 months ago
Good job! i like that you had lots of information. the transitions are nice. nice and slow enough to read. but i think you should have put music. you also have some spelling mistakes, so you might want to look over it.
louis dela pena
8-73
delapineapple 9 months ago
Good job guys! I liked the information about child poverty. I think you guys should Add background and music to your video.
-Derec814
spmath789 9 months ago
You had solid info and your pics were good. You could have added some bg music and you should check over the spelling.
-Tyler 8-16
parzipan11 9 months ago
Good job Olivia and Samara! I like your informations about child poverty in Canada. My advice for you, I think add some more pictures and what Allison, Paul, and Anna saidabout the background music. But you did a nice job.
-Jaeanne814
spmath789 9 months ago
Good Job Olivia and Samara. I liked that you had a lot of information and some of your informations made me think about how I spend my money on electronics and these toys that I don't really need. I agree with Paul and Allison, I think you should add background music to make your video better. Also re-read your your paragraphs because I found some spelling mistakes. Try to make your video shorter because you almost went over the limit. "3:00" and your video is "2:58" **Anna Gomez 873
spmath789 9 months ago
liked that you had lots of stat. information. I suggest that you check over your spelling like "people" in the beginning. I also suggest you give more detail in your information. You should also give evidence on what you did to make a difference. I agree that you should add some music in the back so the message you are trying to send is more provoking.
-Allison 816
iiMaanuel 9 months ago
Great Job, Olivia and Samara. I liked that your information really had lots of meaning. Also I liked that your post gave me something to think about. Although, I think Adding a background music will make it better and you should read over your video because there are some spelling mistakes. Great Job!
-Paul 814-
spmath789 9 months ago