She Dances!

[magcarril]

COOL..NICE POETRY! IT DESCRIBES A DANCER LIKE ME!!! PEACE VIA MUSIC VIVA MARIA!

[11vered]

This is a beautiful expression of a dancer. Thanks for sharing!

[halynamyroslava]

Warm thanks

[mosqueteraz]

Hey ,...Well done!!

[toosweetkiki]

Beautiful poem

[rainyscenes]

Not bad poetry, though delivered a bit harsh. But you have youth and plenty of time to develop the subtle expressions of the lines and meaning. Good job.

[jt24uk]

didnt like the video much sorry. too harsh sounding for me. good poem though

[HabashaHaben]

Dancing Devotion, I like it :D

[Looby75MagicFly]

Wonderful piece!! Bravo!! ;)) thanks for sharing ;) many blessings your way!

[3Hits4Felix]

great energy man, keep it up. If anyone is looking for more poetry, check out my channel

[LisaGou]

I feel this...deep within...wow! I love to dance and this is truly explanitory. <3 Great job!

[pattarasila59]

Wonderful.

[zonkerd7]

Very nice!! Love the filter too!!

[winkntex]

well done,,,,,,,

[twojewsonfilm]

beautiful.

[TreasuresOfTheLORD]

Proverbs chapter 7

[888Cassidy]

This gave me chills... Phenomenal job. Amazing art.

[ChannelThePoetry]

@888Cassidy hey thanks ...

[cleverlevel]

pretty cool

[ImThaReeless]

GOOD JOB!

[LISZTIZATION]

THAT WAS PRETTY GOOD - GOOD DELIVERY TOO !!!

[holan311985]

nice...

[Dzikslol]

it's very imaginative for me

[katherinelight]

thank u for shariiiiiiiig ^_^

[RodneyShaneRuss]

Thanks for sharing. Really neat.

[iampsalmbody]

Thanks for sharing

[Rhapsodist11]

That was lovely, thanks for the invite!

[xxxRainAngelxxx]

ok. not bad....you should see my poems....;)

[siddiy1]

That was really good! :)

~Sydney

[krisnarocks]

Awesome!!!

[SuperBlowpops]

wow kewl :)

[Bummelz]

awesome, bud!

[jmc235]

Doo Doo....

[ikgeloofhetniet]

Nice!! :)

[719kai719]

nice!



[ann2261]

HI :* THANK YOU :* GREETS :*

[sheehan007]

beautiful, and passionate!!!!!!

[joe6panther6]

deep

[haldane01]

wow that was awesome, great to hear good poetry

[MrChange31]

Beautiful, great poem. Love it =)

~Change

[IanReyR]

nice!

thanks for sharing.

[MyOwnStickFigure]

love it, love it1

[goozy101]

Lovely. :)

[serindipity10]

This is so beautiful, you have a gift that allows the listener to visualise every moment in motion .. and in a breathless captivated way.. fall in love with ... the dancer. Wonderful pose , thank-you so much for sharing . Hugs Kira x

[ChannelThePoetry]

@serindipity10 hey thanks

[smartnbeauitful]

such beauty in only a few words

[PrincessOnclouds]

"Her ears are deaf to all things EXCEPT the symphonic callings"

Love this<3 thanks for sharing your beautiful art!

[emersontotalyconfuse]

Ok she dances,but she have pretty feet with short toes? The most interesting part of female body. And is a cool person,not snob and selfish? excuse my shit english.

[fgerardohost]

Thanks for sharing! *****

[TimothyPhillips1]

great poem loved it very very good.. I will be in touch.. thanks for the friending, talk to ya soon again. timothy

[crownimperialmusic]

Cool! Thanks 4 Sharing that! Peace from True Vibes TV in NYC!!!

[OAJA]

Whats this??

[LoPaulaVe]

♥

Very nice

[lovingQ21]

Wow, so deep... loved it!

[55lincoln]

Very good professional job. Enjoyed it very much.

[VforBieber]

very good video!!!!!

[TheNewfairytale]

nice video

[Pacluv71]

Awesome~~ do yo thang girl friend~~

[ChurchsofChrist]

O _ O

[missNewVegas]

talented you are

[LinxAudio]

Dude looks like Ja Rule!!

Props on the poem though man!

[Gleuethunder]

Very nice, I love it! .`)

[sexysexy10000]

im glad that she dances....

[StoweTexas]

excellent . . .

[lumyingluo]

nice ^_^

[Salt7iel]

great stuff

[IiMZSlyboy]

thats what im talkin bout. nice

[wrestlimania]

good shit

[bomshizzleful]

I felt like I was on a high, imagining that beautiful dancer. Brilliant stuff.

[PaperoKaiba]

Hey, nice surrealist stuff, and good words! Thanks for sharing.

[KINGGREATESTROCKSTAR]

MOST ENJOYED.....(:

[tenderonically]

That is what I call talent, my brother! The way your words just flowed, how you spoke with such passion, I could visualize the girl you were speaking of. You have a gift, and I am so glad that you are sharing it with the world. Bravo, my brother! I'm giving you a soul clap right now!

[GuitarStudio1]

Thank you for sharing this video. It was a great reading. Lots of emotion and feeling in it for sure!

[dfynemymusic]

Nice keep up the great work.

[lovealwaysdavid]

Thanks for sharing, that was very nice reading....NICE.

[11renn]

Beautiful writing, beautiful reading.  Thanks.....

[spamstoper3]

wow

[dryangacupuncture]

Thanks.

[SGR1000]

Great poem m8, thanx for sharing :) peace

[LeoRWong]

Thank you.

[LeoRWong]

Thank you.

[jegsynes]

Hejhej PoeticFriend,

Thank you so very much to share this with me, my dancer's heart is touched...

your performance of the poem is really wonderful....

dancing saluts,

jeg

[ChannelThePoetry]

@GlennEvansPoetry How nice of you, thanks Mike

[SINGONTHEROAD2SUCCES]

@ChannelThePoetry ATTENTION ARE YOU THE GREATEST RAPPER, SINGER, DANCER,BEATMAKER, IF SO MAKE ME A FRIEND SAYS 1ST GAY RAPPER ON YOUTUBE

[itchyfangaz]

Nice, I just watched it for the first time. Good luck with that shit.

[lilblackdiamond4]

amazing poetry !!

[Jules1999]

Indeed, a dance is pure expression from within for all to see this way

Yet so intimate

[SgtSlickSleeve]

DUDE!!! I'm in Seattle and it's Friggin 2:55 AM! I know why I am up at this hour, I work nights cleaning office buildings in downtown Seattle. LOL. didn't expect to see a reply at such a late hour but then again some of my Most Creative Music Only Happens in the Wee Hours Of Night! BTW my email address is: Smellmyfinger at comcast dot net. Drop me a line and i'll send you some of my newest Jams. Take care, SgtSlickSleeve AKA Layzpig

[ChannelThePoetry]

@SgtSlickSleeve wow@email name, ...

oh iight cool, yeah i was up soooo late, or early lol

[SgtSlickSleeve]

Dude!!! You Got My Vote HANDS DOWN for You Tubes Creator!!! You are a Very Innovative and Unique MIND!!! You are a very RARE Individual that possesses a talent that is FAR AND FEW BETWEEN! I am lucky to have stumbled across your site which was about a year ago. I have always known you as The Emotional Soldier and EVERY post has Rocked My World!!! I will vote for you Many MANY TIMES!! Good Luck My Friend, SgtSlickSleeve.

[ChannelThePoetry]

@SgtSlickSleeve hey thanks maan, and yes i remember back then lol thanks SSS

[realmthr]

I'm a song writer and poet in my own right so I can really appreciate this. Awesome.

[Naybear010]

I love the way you put feeling into yur words an artistically poetic man is very sexy.

Love the poem hun keep doin ya thang.

[ChannelThePoetry]

@Naybear010 hey thanks Naybear for the niceness ...

[Naybear010]

@Naybear010 no problem its jus how I am & i'm bn honest men who are artistic in diff aspects of life r sexy haha at least to me n e ways

[NewOrLeaNzbaby03]

That was bad ass...

[ChannelThePoetry]

@NewOrLeaNzbaby03 hey thanks NewOrLeaNzbaby03

[MrBrownSkyn]

im glad you shared this with me.....i 2...write poetry and i can appreciate this like 4 realllllll u were awesome keep it up

[ChannelThePoetry]

@MrBrownSkyn thanks mrbrownskin

[MyRootsAreEarthy]

Very Good Work!

[MyRootsAreEarthy]

Good Work!

[JohnLRice]

Nicely done!

[rockpapercynic]

Beautifully expressive reading of an equally earnest poem!

[ynnad166]

Channelthepoetry this is a warm soft passionate pome, keep them coming, where do you live?

[ynnad166]

Chanelthepoet this is a warm soft passionate pome, keep them coming, where do you live?

[777Musicology]

your deep brother! I wish above all you use that energy,talent,and creativity for Jesus!!!

[broidien]

I feel your words and passion. Makes me want to express myself in dance.

[click1119]

very moving

[gsivels]

Nice Work, didn't quite know what to expect, but it was nice. Thanks for sending it to me, I'm glad you did!

[gsivels]

Nice Work, didn't quite know what to expect, but it was nice. Thanks for sending it to me, I'm glad you did!

[TriniQT4]

Thanks for sending this to me. I enjoyed it.

[abbash395]

There is no earth

when she dances.

She creates her own worlds.

I am really inspired by these lines. Keep it up !!

I don't know your name but please acknowledge my word of appreciation.

Jauhar Abbas

(A young learning poet of Urdu)

[trublu1000]

Love the writing ..thumbs up

[RICPOIRIER1]

Very good! ***

Félicitation!

(de Montréal, Québec)

[ReneeFromLA]

Thumbs up!!  :-)

[mythmanjay]

Like the poetry, but the visual should be less 'you observing her' and more 'her herself.'

[ChannelThePoetry]

@mythmanjay i wish i could have the dancer there i spoke about, so all could see lol

[mythmanjay]

@ChannelThePoetry maybe you could try to draw what the poetry makes you feel, and see if that looks good

[G0ddEity]

@mythmanjay I rather think this is what I call Retards Attempting Poetry

[mythmanjay]

@G0ddEity no, RAP takes rhythm & thinking; what @ChannelThePoetry gives us is truly an expression of the words that come to mind as She Dances, and words ARE retarded compared to the philharmonic symphonies the female inspires within the male psyche.

[anthraxfox]

@G0ddEity obvious troll is obvious.

[elephanta2]

Thanks for sharing. Reading poetry makes a beautiful time.

[Sogwa]

Nice poem.

[shantubesha]

i love the way you finish that one with that slight pause after you say "she moves" and that deep thought expression awesome

[gerardine13]

The rhythm in your poetry is passionate; your words bring it to an intense crescendo of images. Bravo!!

[mrfish1961]

positiv . . .

[edleew]

You no he has a good tought . Put it to a tune .. wow it could be a killer .

[Dragorro]

he just saw black swan.

[ChannelThePoetry]

@Dragorro Now I really wanna see that, ...

[LostboyFromKC]

good job!

[pyrogyra72]

Pretty good. You should put it to music.

[makeone100]

good stuff!!

[jkallih]

this guy is amazing, he makes it look easy, and it ain't easy

[CoconutPalms96]

Wow...Excellent poem! Brilliant! You're an amazing speaker!!

[cochranes]

Lovely.

[Nepal5Tube]

wow

[Ibadnabad]

I am 58 years young and I have always loved music and dancing. I play saxaphones and would like to compose music. Your poem can be put to music. Your poem is a relief from the negative rap that many so-called black people are into.

[ChannelThePoetry]

@Ibadnabad Hey thanks lbadnabad, nice of you, sure ...

[MartinGiacomo]

amazing simply amazing. This remind me of many things i've seen but never has it been put into words so perfectly. thanks for sharing this.

[ChannelThePoetry]

@MartinGiacomo Thanks Martin

[clnrp]

Awesome. Thank you so much for sharing this.

[WayneandLink]

Nice NICE world domination is the key

[dionysosramon]

spoken very well...true poetry

[edleew]

Dude your real good and I think in love too . Peace

[ChannelThePoetry]

@edleew Lol thanks edleew

[BYSxCREW]

Excellent! Amazing!

True Poetry

[Zayn721]

Its Completely Ignorant For ANYBODY To Post A Poem Up Here First And Foremost, But Forreal Son This Was Amazing, The Pronunciation Was On POINT Lol. If We Had More People You In The World, Things Would Be GREAT

[ChannelThePoetry]

@Zayn721 Nice of ya thanks zayn

[fhgoaliegal123]

Nice :)

[fischer3x3]

super..

[3li0tZ]

veryyyyy nice man keep it up.

[Casmige]

=OoO=

12 Have LOST their Ever-Loving-Minds,

Like the Sands of Time, down through the funnel of narrow-minded mindlessness,

The 12 Spoke, revealing their ugly nakedness without shame or claim to Fame.

I am ashamed, ashamed....

[ChannelThePoetry]

@Casmige thanks casmige, I see they didn't Like it ...

[dagny1207]

Very good!! Thanks for sharing:-)

[ejw23]

I love this poem!!!

[malduf]

A very fine poem, read with feeling and precision. Nice work!

[saramurawski]

Thank you for sharing this poem reading with my on my page. It's wonderful! I love it. Thank you :)

[FootballnSoccer]

That was beautiful. Nicely done.

[FunnyMonkey205]

wow dude, did you write this?

...if so, epic win...

[ChannelThePoetry]

@FunnyMonkey205 yeah thanks maan ...

[jarbon5]

Like the comment below me says, this is beautiful!

[haykakan1955]

It's beautiful. 

[HarvandHarv]

Tasty clarification of wordage. Crisply pronounced throughout the delivery.

[ChannelThePoetry]

@HarvandHarv hey thanks HarvandHarv

[leslieebony]

thanks for sharing! nice.

[PoetGerri]

Really like the poem, and the way you read it. Thank you for sharing your words.

[keylawk]

Thanks! you ken the keening place the curved horizon where dance is born and the woman again she is

[alkantre]

great imagery and command of the language

[bk7fly]

beautiful...thank you for sending this to me

[Annettesmusic]

I'm intrigued. Wish she put a video up on youtube so I could see her too. Must have been a sight to see.

[ChannelThePoetry]

@Annettesmusic hey thanks Annettesmusic, yeah it would be but i actually envisiond it all in my head, ... it was still a great site to see :-)

[Annettesmusic]

@ChannelThePoetry

Totally get that. Makes what you did all the more impressive.

[SwaggerLikeUz]

Aye that was a Gift !!  I Subbed

[ChannelThePoetry]

@SwaggerLikeUz hey thanks swaggerLikeUs

[Archangel2069]

very good, my friend!