For an early effort this is quite good... the storyline can be followed without the characters talking and the use of the B&W and music adds to its feel. It seems to me that it could be improved through some 'polishing', such as some key scenes being underscored with some associated close-ups (such as the first hit with the rock being cut with a short scene of a flock of birds flying off) but overall a good effort. Well done!
Maybe not a masterpiece, but I sort of liked it...good fundamentals, really. This may sound like an exaggeration, but it reminded me of Bergman. The music added a lot, too.
For an early effort this is quite good... the storyline can be followed without the characters talking and the use of the B&W and music adds to its feel. It seems to me that it could be improved through some 'polishing', such as some key scenes being underscored with some associated close-ups (such as the first hit with the rock being cut with a short scene of a flock of birds flying off) but overall a good effort. Well done!
Aaron1975melbourne 4 years ago
Maybe not a masterpiece, but I sort of liked it...good fundamentals, really. This may sound like an exaggeration, but it reminded me of Bergman. The music added a lot, too.
Ashiman12 4 years ago