I think it could be cut to when he contemplates letting go for the second time, before actually doing so. This will allow the viewer's imagination to take it further and will provide a concise ending....
Thank you for saying so. To be honest, I'm really not satisfied with the ending. I don't think it reads very well. It's called "Sir Simon the Shallow", so I wanted to try to give her back some of her dignity at the end, thereby making the joke on him; make him seem shallow. But I don't think it came across very well. But other than that, I'm happy with the way it turned out.
They should have spoke in this animation but, this was the most funniest animations I've ever seen in my life!
popheart011 3 weeks ago
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through which program this cartoon is made
DanilR100 3 weeks ago
She's like: 5th one this week!
tootsiepop825 1 month ago
Its really good,which software did u use?
TwiCaCaX 4 months ago
ahahahahahahahahaha
FatadeiFiori91 4 months ago
That is pretty shallow.... lol.
cscdigitalgraphics 4 months ago
Great work man! Love the emotion in the animation
FiggleJib 5 months ago
Nice animation,,,,,,,maybe need some more work on editing but I like the story :D
BoryanRus 5 months ago
I think it could be cut to when he contemplates letting go for the second time, before actually doing so. This will allow the viewer's imagination to take it further and will provide a concise ending....
Good job, made me chuckle :)
mentallogic 6 months ago
Very funny!
GRodgersanimator 1 year ago
@GRodgersanimator
Thank you for saying so. To be honest, I'm really not satisfied with the ending. I don't think it reads very well. It's called "Sir Simon the Shallow", so I wanted to try to give her back some of her dignity at the end, thereby making the joke on him; make him seem shallow. But I don't think it came across very well. But other than that, I'm happy with the way it turned out.
emomobile 1 year ago
You did a great job, I'm surprised this has so few views.
GRodgersanimator 1 year ago
@GRodgersanimator
Yeah, me too. Maybe I need to add more tags or something.
emomobile 1 year ago
@emomobile
Should have had her go back to the mirror, shrug, and take off her fake teeth.
Smullet90 2 months ago